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Reviewer: rosela (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 09:19 AM · On: Chapter 17~~Trying to Focus~~

ewww....she broke his hands did she....eww... i hope bella kicks her ass for that, and i hope she kicks her pretty badly...hhehe... i hope u update soon....

Author's Response:

I do think that Bella is going to have some ISSUES with what Lorena has done...

Thanks, so much, for reading and reviewing Rosela!


Reviewer: Elaine (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 07:31 AM · On: Chapter 17~~Trying to Focus~~

no no no you can't leave it there, please please please update soon 

Author's Response:

Next chapter coming soon...soon...soon, Elaine!

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!


Reviewer: BriarRose (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 06:43 AM · On: Chapter 17~~Trying to Focus~~

Oh be still my heart! Mick?!?! *sighs* So I have to say that I was on the Mick bandwagon long before the Twilight bandwagon.....

Anyway, very intriguing story! Can't wait for the next bit!

Author's Response:

Look, another Mick lover!  How did the show ever get cancelled?

Next bit coming soon!

Thanks for reading and rating,BriarRose!


Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 05:26 AM · On: Chapter 17~~Trying to Focus~~

Okay... I wanted to go through the screen... and kill that b***h she's nuts

I'll definitly be jumping on the next chapter when it comes out.

Author's Response:

DON'T break the screen...because then you wouldn't be able to read the next chapter, RESCUE...and that would be bad...

Hmmm...the vote seems to be going for:

Kill Lorena

I'll have to see what I can do about that.... ;F

Love your reviews Aille!


Reviewer: Kat-ryn (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 04:07 AM · On: Chapter 17~~Trying to Focus~~

I knew it................she is e----vil.

Author's Response:

Yep...she really is evil...delusional...with just a touch of brilliance...that stun gun was an equalizer that Edward couldn't fight against...sigh...

Thanks for the review, Kat-ryn (love that name, btw!)

Kathie (katmom)

Reviewer: minny22 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 04:01 AM · On: Chapter 17~~Trying to Focus~~

oooh I love moonlight too. Alex is soo hot. I made me so mad when they canceled that show. CBS sucks sometimes. I got the show on DVD and watch it whenever possible. Thanks for including his name it made me giggle. oh and keep up the good work. Great story!

Author's Response: have the Moonlight's on my Christmas list....

Glad I could make you giggle by including our lovely Mick...

Thanks for the review, minny22!


Reviewer: Baela (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 02:36 AM · On: Chapter 17~~Trying to Focus~~

Okay, I'm sorry, but after I read your chapter notes at the beginning, I decided to wait to read this chapter until the next one is validated. Really, I can't stand cliffhangers when the author begs forgivness. I'm always biting my nails in anticipation, literally!

I hope you can forgive me, but I have to wait, though I love you right now for the promptness of Chaapter 17!


Author's Response:

That's actually very clever of you, Baela! I wish that I had the strength to do that when I see those kinds of author's notes!

I'm uploading the next chapter, RESCUE, right this moment...but we'll have to wait until my validating beta can get to it.  She's a busy woman!

i can forgive you...and you'll be pleased when you read them BOTH one after another!


Reviewer: ForbiddenFyre (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 02:13 AM · On: Chapter 17~~Trying to Focus~~

Noooooo!!! What a terrible but cool place for a cliffy!! Cliffys are a good thing because they leave you wanting more! Anyhoo, this is a wonderful update!!!! I really hate Lorena Mallory! Knowing that the next chapter is called Resue, that makes things a lot better. Can't wait for the next update!!

Author's Response:

I'm so happy that I've left you wanting more...oh, did I tell you that I'm going on a six month tour of Asia?  No updates until I get back...

JUST KIDDING!  Now that would be a BAD CLIFFIE...for sure and certain!

I love your reviews, forbiddenFyre...pixel cookies for you, too!


Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 01:44 AM · On: Chapter 17~~Trying to Focus~~

I can't wait for Bella to rescue Edward from Lauren's mother's CRAZZY AASSS!!!!

I swear. She's nuts.

Author's Response:

Me either!  I can't wait!  Which is why it's in the line-up right now!

Nuts, but so much fun to write...mwhahaha!

Thanks for reading and rating, agiismsxx!


Reviewer: edwardsluver (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 01:41 AM · On: Chapter 17~~Trying to Focus~~

OH! MY GOD! AHHHHHHHH! thats horrible!!!!!!! good writing though :) actually amazing writing but you get the point;)!

Author's Response:

"Horrible, but amazing writing"...Thanks for such wonderful words!  Pixel chocolate for you...


Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 01:12 AM · On: Chapter 17~~Trying to Focus~~

Gotta chime back in here again as I read and reviewed earlier at work and had some issues driving home --- Lorena I think is the most sadistic ever --- I mean, I am a musician and injuring a hand with something little would be bad --- not to mention a complete break? Of the WHOLE HAND? And his wrist too? I winced and shuddered the whole way home. I am typing slow to avoid injuries. Seriously. Just wow.


Author's Response:

More hugs coming your way...Remember...hope and rescue...hope and rescue...coming your way SOON!


Reviewer: kycee (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 12:31 AM · On: Chapter 17~~Trying to Focus~~

I loved Moonlight too.  I recognized the name.  Thought for a minute he might be a vamp.  Hope you plan on Bella getting some good revenge on that B. for hurting Edward even more.

Author's Response:

I don't know WHY that show didn't make it...sigh...and the TWILIGHT movie people really should have checked out their special effects...THEIR running scenes don't look, um, DUMB!  LOL!

I toyed with the idea of making him a vamp...but then she might have already chosen HIM before she met Edward.  ;)

Thanks for reading, kycee!


Reviewer: squarepancake (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 11:43 PM · On: Chapter 17~~Trying to Focus~~

His hands!  wow, yeah, that is exactly what a sadist would decide to do to a pianist for revenge.

Again, I like the mother's POV.  Overall your voices are distinct.

Author's Response:

She is pretty sadistic...sigh...

I'm so happy to hear that my voices are distinct...I really try to achieve that...

Thanks so much, squarepancake, for your reading and rating!


Reviewer: ashkan00dle (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 11:39 PM · On: Chapter 17~~Trying to Focus~~

ONE CHAPTER AT A TIME IS KILLING ME!!!!!!!! Poor Edward. That crazy bitch. I hope Bella rips her face off.

Author's Response:

Ripping her face off...that's a lovely scenario too!  Ripping slowly....!!!!

Thanks, ashkanoodle!


Reviewer: anabanana219 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 11:35 PM · On: Chapter 17~~Trying to Focus~~

OMG!! SHe SMASHED Edward's hand?????????? Thats terrible!!! Omg poor guy!! He'll never play piano again!!! I need to see a rescue!! 

Author's Response:

Deep breath...HEA's, right? 

Rescue is on the way...soon!

Thanks for reading anabanana219!


Reviewer: ShandyAnn (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 11:26 PM · On: Chapter 17~~Trying to Focus~~

Woo! love the moonlight referance, i was sad that show got canceled...

Amazing chapter, cant wait for bella to get to mee Mrs.

Author's Response:

Yes, I need to get me the DVD of can go right next to my Twilight set!

Thanks for reading, ShandyAnn!


Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 11:15 PM · On: Chapter 17~~Trying to Focus~~


Author's Response:

That's a good guess sherylb...I hated writing his was difficult....

Thanks so much for reading and rating!


Reviewer: TLammy24 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 11:11 PM · On: Chapter 17~~Trying to Focus~~

OMG, she is ruining his hands...I hope Bella does kill her!  I get the feeling that the only way to save him may end up being to change him - at least then he'll still be able to play.  Wow, glad the rescue is coming soon.

Author's Response:

Yes, she is...Bella hasn't killed a human...yet...answer coming soon!

Thanks for reading TLammy24!


Reviewer: DizziBlnde (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 11:05 PM · On: Chapter 17~~Trying to Focus~~

Oh hell - Mick St John or Edward Cullen........daumn does Bella have her some hot choices there! 


I'll admit...I'd have gone for Mick in a heart beat!  (sorry!)


Now go write Edward's rescue from the crazy lady!

Author's Response:

You are so right...Mick...Edward...choices, yummy choices!

Now if he HAD been a vamp...whew...not sure who I would have picked either...stunning guy closer to my, ahem, age....or hot 24 y/o with pent up urges...

Can't choose!

Thanks for the support DizziBlnde!  Next chapter is in the line-up...


Reviewer: sareliz (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 11:05 PM · On: Chapter 17~~Trying to Focus~~

Oh, dear God.  She's breaking his hands.

::takes a really deep breath::

Okay.  Waiting.  Patiently.  For chapter 18.

::takes another really deep breath::

Author's Response:

That was so hard to write...I kept getting up and getting another piece of dark chocolate...!!!!

Hope you don't have to wait tooooo long for Chapter's already in the line-up!

Keep breathing...there's Bella in the next chapter...


Reviewer: twilightfan1969 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 11:02 PM · On: Chapter 17~~Trying to Focus~~

what a crazy bitch!

Author's Response:


Thanks, twilightfan1969!


Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 10:59 PM · On: Chapter 17~~Trying to Focus~~

Ok. My eyes just bugged out of my head and are currently rolling somewhere on the floor so I hope this makes sense. I know you said it would be updated soon but soon is not soon enough. Can we hope for Bella to save Edward while simotaneously ripping off Lorena's head? No wait --- thats too quick of a death for her... I will think of something better. Maybe death by a BALL HAMMER?!?!? akkk...

Anyway, no hatred towards you Kathie, can't wait for the next one!

Author's Response:

Oh my gosh, glad you got them back in your head so that you could make your drive home!  Sending you hugs...yes, a hammer...sigh...

Lorena will get hers...I promise!

Glad you don't hate me...because I love your reviews!


Reviewer: rhiannon113 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 10:59 PM · On: Chapter 17~~Trying to Focus~~

I hope Bella takes her apart a piece at a time!!!! Way to wind the tension. Congrats! Update soon...

Author's Response:

The chapter worked then?  ;)

Bella really wants to do piece at a time! Shredded...growl!

Thanks, rhiannon113!


Reviewer: cullengirl06 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 10:22 PM · On: Chapter 12~~His Girl Friday~~

i'm a little behind on my reading!!! but this was awesomee!!!

i liked the blushing Edward!!.. 


Author's Response:

Yes, a blushing Edward is totally yummy! 

Thanks for your support cullengirl06!


Reviewer: ForbiddenFyre (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 10:32 PM · On: Chapter 16~~Interrogation~~

Awesome!!! Wonderful update. And I do feel a little sorry for Lauren. She's not really all that bad, but with a mother like Mama, well, it's no wonder she's so confused!! Anyhoo, love the update and can not wait for more!!

Author's Response:

Yep, no wonder she's confused...and delusional!

Next update should come soon...

Thanks so much for your support ForbiddenFyre!


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