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Reviews For Guarding Edward
Reviewer: aylag (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 07:35 AM · On: Chapter 18~~Rescue~~

Yes! Very exciting chapter. I guess the cat's out of the bag with all the sparkling:) I wonder if a change to vampire will be necessary to heal Edward's hand?? I only recently found your story so got to read several chapters to start and so want to say thanks for sharing!

Author's Response:

Glad you found me...I do love getting to click NEXT over and over again too!

Yes, all that sparkling...she and Carlisle too!  Ah, a sparkly Carlisle is nice...

Thanks so much for the lovely stars!

Kathie

Reviewer: smisa (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 07:32 AM · On: Chapter 18~~Rescue~~

great rescue!



Author's Response:

Thanks, smisa, glad you enjoyed it!

Kathie

Reviewer: AMayes (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 07:26 AM · On: Chapter 18~~Rescue~~

I am very glad that Bella found him when she did!

And glad that Lorena got what she deserved!  Evil woman...

Edward's poor hand...but Bella and/or Carlisle should be able to make it better!

Great chapter!!



Author's Response:

Thanks, AMayes! 

I think that burning to death in her van was a precursor to what awaited her...LOL!

Hoping they can make his hand better... ;)

Kathie

Reviewer: AMayes (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 07:23 AM · On: Chapter 17~~Trying to Focus~~

Edward's hand!

Lorena is about ten times worse than Lauren...or so it seems.  I'm sure they're actually equal parts crazy.

Bella needs to get there...soon!



Author's Response:

Equal Parts CRAZY!  But Lauren is DUMB and crazy....I think Mama is worse...SMART(er) and crazy...

Kathie

Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 07:04 AM · On: Chapter 18~~Rescue~~

YAY! She saved him! and the evil woman is dead.  Wow.. I'm finding myself liking that just a little too much...

So Edward got to see her sparkle. :)

I hope they can save his hand.



Author's Response:

You and me both, Aille!  I did rather enjoy that part....and picturing her waking up for it...sigh...I'm *bad*....

Sqeeeee!  A sparkly Bella...sigh...

Thanks so much for the pretty stars!

Kathie

Reviewer: gpl993 (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 06:53 AM · On: Chapter 18~~Rescue~~

OMG!  Ahhhhh Edwards' hand has to be better so he can keep playing.  And now that Ed knows that Bella is something special, will she tell him everything?  I hope so.



Author's Response:

Bella needs to make some decisions on what to tell him...because he really did get and eyeful of SPARKLE...

Thanks so much for R&R, gpl993!

Kathie

Reviewer: twilightfan1969 (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 06:53 AM · On: Chapter 18~~Rescue~~

Yeah! rescued! now on the lovin



Author's Response:

Yes, time for the loving!  The next chapter is called "Later..."

It stems from the time he told her:  Later...

Made me happy.... ;)

Thanks for reading and reviewing twilightfan1969!

Kathie

Reviewer: ForbiddenFyre (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 06:33 AM · On: Chapter 18~~Rescue~~

That was amazing!!! Just as good and wonderful as the rest of the story you've given us so far!!! I am soooo happy that Bella finally found Edward! It nearly made me cry when I read the part about the damage that Lorena did to Edward!! (grr) Anyhoo, you're not a bad person, I am sure that everyone who read this would die for Bella to get a hand on Lorena. But that wouldn't be right. After what Lorena did, I think that she deserves whatever she gets!! Anyhow, I can not wait to find out what happens next! I have to admit that I was kinda hoping that Bella or Carlisle would change Edward so he could be whole. But Bella's sounds like Edward in Twilight, that she doesn't want to take away his humanity or "chance to live" Maybe, in the end he'll be a vampire! (nudge, nudge) :) LOL

Author's Response:

*Amazing*...thanks so much, ForbiddenFyre!

Ah, another *Be Mean to Lorena* member!  You can be vice president of the club... ;)

Bella does have a few issues, but not nearly as many at SM's Edward...I just couldn't write that much self-doubt!  LOL

I feel your *nudges*...and I'm listening...

Thanks for the pretty stars too!

Kathie

Reviewer: cherry (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 06:28 AM · On: Chapter 18~~Rescue~~

oh noooo.. ehat'll happen next. dont let him binghurt and cant play..



Author's Response:

Soon!  Questions answered...

But at least he's safe for now...

Thanks for R&R, Cherry!

Kathie

Reviewer: THBS (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 05:52 AM · On: Chapter 18~~Rescue~~

You've written 33 chapters and this is only 18!

I can not wait to see what happens!



Author's Response:

Yep!  33 chapters and they are still chatty.  My girls say:  So, Mom...have any conversations with Edward recently?  LOL!

Thanks for reading and reviewing, THBS...

Kathie

Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 05:42 AM · On: Chapter 18~~Rescue~~

Please let someone Save Edwards HANDS! Stupid stupid Lorena!!!! Glad everyone is safe. But PLEASE make Edward perfect again!



Author's Response:

Plans are being made to save his hands...soon! 

I appreciate your support...thanks for R&R!

Kathie

Reviewer: kycee (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 05:21 AM · On: Chapter 18~~Rescue~~

That was perfect.  The crazy witch got her just desserts and Bella did not have to get her hands dirty.  She planned on frying poor Edward and only managed to fry herself.  I guess what goes around comes around.  Great Job.  Thanks for updating so quickly. 



Author's Response:

*Perfect*...I'll take that!  Mwah!

Yes, Bella did promise to *try* and do the right thing...then Lorena basically did it to herself.  PSA: Don't drink and start fires!

Thanks for reading kycee!

Kathie

Reviewer: Camilla (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 05:03 AM · On: Chapter 18~~Rescue~~

Obviously what one hopes for now is that eventually, if his hand is broken beyond repair, they acknowledge their love and he is told the secret (after all he has seen her sparkling and doing amazing things). Then since to play the piano is his passion, maybe he can be changed and the hand will be as good as new. Who says that a vempire cannot do concerts?



Author's Response:

Camilla, there will be answers for Edward...soon!

I'm thinking about his future, both as a pianist, and as a vampire....questions will be answered!

Thanks so much for R&R!

Kathie

Reviewer: nothing_is_as_it_seems (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 04:21 AM · On: Chapter 18~~Rescue~~

OM great chapter :) I wish Lorena could rot in prison........painfully so hope she isn't dead - and it's mean blaming her daughter :O But GREAT chapter AWESOMENESS on a STICK! glad when i saw this for the 4th time my curiosity got the better of me and i had to take a peep :D It's is truly and genius peice of writing :) Love it :D



Author's Response:

Yes, maybe Lorena got off *easy*...

I'm so glad that you gave in to your curiosity and gave me a chance...and gave me lovely STARS!

Thanks so much!

Kathie

Reviewer: HeavenDust (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 04:08 AM · On: Chapter 18~~Rescue~~

I'm not sure how humans in Twilight turn into vampires when injured, but if Edward recovers with broken fingers and gets turned into a vampire, will he retain those injuries or will his fingers heal to perfection? I would like to think that everything will heal, and thank goodness for creative license! :)

Personally I feel Lorena didn't suffer enough, but I guess there's nothing worse than dead too. *sigh* She was just so evil... and to think that she would even abandon her own daughter!

Totally enjoyed this chapter, we get to see the rescue. Yay!



Author's Response:

Your wonderful questions will be answered...over time...YES, I love creative License!

Ah, another fan of hoping Lorena woke up...maybe I should have written in a SCREAM...

Pretty evil, tha's for sure...and thinking about hanging Lauren out to dry...she is not a good MAMA...

Thanks for reading!

Kathie

Reviewer: Edwardia Maven (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 03:08 AM · On: Chapter 18~~Rescue~~

yay Edward's rescued :)



Author's Response:

Exactly!  Hurray!

Thanks for reading, Edwardia Maven!

Kathie

Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 09:36 AM · On: Chapter 17~~Trying to Focus~~

lol yeah caught the Moonlight reference! Had a chuckle at that, it's a shame they cancelled that show when it was starting to get interesting.

Hmmm so the rescue is next, but Edward's hands are going to be mangled... perhaps enough to ruin piano for him at this point? :(



Author's Response:

Hey Daylen!  Mick (Alec) gets his own show this fall!  I think he's going to be a transplant surgeon...HOT!

Ah, RESCUE...it was sweet.

Thanks for reading!

Kathie

Reviewer: nothing_is_as_it_seems (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 06:19 AM · On: Chapter 17~~Trying to Focus~~

OMG great chapter and awesome cliffie - glad Bella is coming soon :D LOVED, no ADORED it!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, NIAIS! Your review made me smile!

Kathie

Reviewer: emma austin (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 02:48 AM · On: Chapter 17~~Trying to Focus~~

AaaK! Someone get the update quick! 



Author's Response:

Soon, emma austin!  Soon! 

A note to all the people reading the reviews...Sorry about how wide the pic of Alec/Mick made the page...but I keep coming back and checking it out...sigh...

I should put one of Rob and his naked chest on here now...LOL!  But that might just be too much for my heart to take...LOL!

Back to you Emma...thanks for reading!

Kathie

Reviewer: ice (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 05:41 PM · On: Chapter 17~~Trying to Focus~~

that fucking hag!!!! i can't believe that she is doing this to him!!! i can't wait to see what Bella does when she finds out what that hag has done.

I love your story so far. i like how you have Mike and Jessica together and i like how you have Lauren and her mom as the stackers. i never liked lauren. i can't believe that you have enough imagination to have laurens mom do that to him.

i also liked how you had Bella and Edward meet for the first time and you had Edward be Bella's singer. i love how Bella's line of work had brought them together. i also love how Edward woke from the night mare and asked Bella to sleep with him because she made him feel safe.

i love every part of this story. i love it and i am loking forward to the next chapters.

i'm sorry that i haven't reviewed at the end of every chapter. i normally only focus on the things that have happened at the end and the only things that i remember of that chapter and it throughs me off.

there is one thing that i think you could improve on though. i don't want to be mean, but maybe you could bring out how much pain Edward is actually in. explain how much it hurts and what it feels like more. i think that is the only thing that i think you can do better on.

i love it and i would love to read more, so please please please write the next chapter soon.

ice



Author's Response:

Thank you ice, for that LONG, lovely review!

I've never liked Lauren either...!!!!  Although I thought Mike was okay...he was just acting like a typical 17 y/o boy...he's grown up quite nicely in this story...and Jessica is a sweethearat too...probably ONLY fics like that...LOL!

Ah, my daughters thought that Edward should have been in massive amounts of pain, along with screaming and yelling and spewing blood...!!!  But I just couldn't bring myself to add MORE to the pain he was in...

I appreciate your comments very much...and the next chapter is already in the line-up...hopefully it will be up soon so that Poor Edward isn't left in torment...!!!

Thanks again for your review...

Kathie

Reviewer: HeavenDust (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 09:57 AM · On: Chapter 17~~Trying to Focus~~

*raises hand* I watched Moonlight! I was giggling when I came across Mick St. John's name. *LOL* Good show, wasn't it? Too bad it's discontinued. Josef is hot too. Jason Dohring plays a mean vampire and an awesome, possessive and slightly psychotic boyfriend in Veronica Mars.

Good grief!! Lorena broke Edward's fingers so he couldn't play again?! Damn, that woman's sick!! The only thing that is keeping me from spewing profanities right now is the fact that Bella (or Carlisle) will turn Edward and all these wounds will cease to become a problem...

However in the meantime I'm really sorry about Edward's pain, no one can walk away from that unscarred. Lorena and Lauren really does sound psychotic... it's chilling, really. You wrote their POVs really well, got the message that they're not right in the head across.

Please update soon!



Author's Response:

Ah, another Mick fan...sigh...

Yes, we need to send Mick the vamp to beat up on Lorena...just a little... ;F

I'm glad my writing of the POV was nice and clear...scary too!  LOL

Let me see if this little thing will work, if so...hot pic of Mick coming up:

Mick...Alex

Ah....yummy!

Oh...and thanks so much for the review and rating!!!! 

Kathie

Reviewer: lucydeon (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 09:13 AM · On: Chapter 17~~Trying to Focus~~

Mick St. John, ha! I love it.



Author's Response:

Another Mick fan!  Gosh, maybe I should have made him a vamp...!!!

Thanks for reading, lucydeon!

Kathie

Reviewer: valelf (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 08:56 AM · On: Chapter 17~~Trying to Focus~~

Mick St. John - hehehe! I loved Moonlight!

I'm having fun thinking about all the ways that Bella can make psycho Mama pay for this. She BROKE his HAND?!?! Okay, they need to shoot her sorry ass, chain her up to a dumpster or something, and then slowly break every bone in her body - then torture her to death! Evil hag!

Great chapter Kathie!



Author's Response:

See?  There are so many of the Moonlight fans...they should have kept it going...ah well, we can still read about it in fan fiction!

Yes, many ways Bella could bring some havoc down on Lorena's head...you had some good ideas!

Thanks, Val!

Kathie

Reviewer: Autumnmissa (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 08:20 AM · On: Chapter 17~~Trying to Focus~~

OH!!!! I knew that she would do that!  I knew that she would take away his hands...ad about as brutally too....owwie!!!!!  Oh, no poor Edward....after this he may never be able to play again...that is unlesss.  BELLA!!!!!!!  OK, more please? Pretty please? and did you finish what I sent you?  Thanks!



Author's Response:

Yes, brutally...sigh....

Yes!  I've finished it...sent you a note...will send another...

Kathie

Reviewer: cherry (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 05:11 AM · On: Chapter 17~~Trying to Focus~~

oh no oh no oh nooo.. bella go save her. e must think b is an angel when she saved him later, lol. cant wait for next chap!



Author's Response:

I think that he IS going to be very grateful, when he finally sees her....

Thanks so much for reading, rating and reviewing, Cherry!

Kathie

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