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Reviews For Guarding Edward
Reviewer: bludazie (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 05:30 AM · On: Chapter 19~~ Later ~~

I know he can handle it and not freak,right?!

Author's Response:

He seems pretty calm...maybe that's the morphine! 

We'll see how he does when he gets some answers in the next chapter...

Thanks for reading, bludazie!


Reviewer: cullengirl06 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 05:10 AM · On: Chapter 13~~Taken~~

omg!! loveeeeeeeeed it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

thanx so much

Author's Response:

Goodness!  I missed your review of this chapter! I am sorry...

And so cheered that you LOVED it...

Thanks for reading!


Reviewer: HeavenDust (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 04:24 AM · On: Chapter 19~~ Later ~~

Whew! So good to know that Edward's gonna be ok. Now you got me perplexed as to when Edward's gonna be changed into a vampire, or even if you planned it at all. Now that is a development I didn't expect! :D

The kiss is wonderful... it's about time! Haha... :)

Author's Response:

*About time* took 19 chapters to kiss...and then he was falling asleep...LOL!

I've given some thought to his change...or lack thereof... ;)

Thanks for reading, Heavendust!


Reviewer: Baela (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 04:00 AM · On: Chapter 19~~ Later ~~

So lovely...I'm so glad that Edward is going to be able to play again! Practicing the keys will be a great workout for his fingers' mobility. Looking forwarded to more, and thank you so much for the quick update!


Author's Response:

You are very welcome for the quick update Baela!  Thanks go to everwondering for her swiftness!

Yes, he should be able to play again...but he better listen to the docs first...I get the feeling he's going to be a BAD patient...that he's not going to be very patient....LOL

Thanks for the lovely stars!


Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 03:59 AM · On: Chapter 19~~ Later ~~


Author's Response:

Thank you sherylb!  Love the stars...mwah!


Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 02:59 AM · On: Chapter 19~~ Later ~~

Awwwww... Kathie, that is so sweet.  They got their kiss, though not the one they really wanted to share. 

Physio sucks, I was in it for 2 years and I so feel for him.

Author's Response:

Yes, later arrived and they got a kiss!  More to come... ;)

I was in PT for about six weeks for pain in my hip...sucked!  Except when they put the moist heat packs on it and wrapped me up like a burrito...THAT was nice!  LOL!

Thanks, Aille, for the review and all the lovely stars!


Reviewer: smisa (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 02:56 AM · On: Chapter 19~~ Later ~~

i was surprised you gave him full mobility back (or will) in his hand.  i figured you would make him wait for change to do that.  i'm glad you didn't.  great chapter.

Author's Response:

He should eventually get full, or nearly full, mobility back.  But he's going to have to work at it...he's going to have to work hard.

On the one hand, changing him would certainly make THAT part easier, but would come with another set of problems...problems I'm not quite ready to address... ;)

Thanks so much for reading, smisa....


Reviewer: blessthecharter (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 05:44 PM · On: Chapter 18~~Rescue~~

I'm begging for an update and can promise sexual favors! Feed me my addiction oh holiest author!

Author's Response:

Wow...thanks for the offer...

I can't promise the same as my story is rated lower than sexual favors...LOL!

BUT, the next chapter is waiting beta validation...hope that helps!

Thanks so much reading and reviewing, blessthecharter!


Reviewer: duskwatcher (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 05:39 PM · On: Chapter 3~~Face to Face~~

She made it!  Edwards POV-hmm why does he recognize her?

Author's Response:

Ah, that would be telling!  He does recognize here from SOMEWHERE or SOMETHING or SOME TIME!

Thanks for R&R, Duskwatcher!


Reviewer: duskwatcher (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Choices

Another good chapter.  You are dealing with the 'Alice problem" nicely.  I found in my own stories that dealing with Alice's abilities is very exasperating.  I'd think of a good plot twist, but then I could hear Alice say "yeah, but I can see it first".  I was ready to smack her.

Can't wait for the ExB meeting!


Author's Response:

Yes, the all-seeing Alice...that works sometimes...but my girl isn't quite that powerful...ah, creative license!

Funny that you HEARD Alice saying that to you....these characters really do seem to speak at times...

I could hardly wait to WRITE the ExB meeting!


Reviewer: duskwatcher (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 05:20 PM · On: Prologue and Chapter 1... Blood Singer

Terrific beginning! What a turnaround-that she is the one tempted by scent-hadn't seen that coming!

This could get very sexy!

Author's Response:

Howdy Duskwatcher!  Glad you are liking the beginning here...

Nice that I surprised you...

Thanks for the stars!


Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 01:47 AM · On: Chapter 18~~Rescue~~

If you've got a little psycho in you, I definitely have one in me too. I was hoping she'd suffer more =/ yeah yeah. Sue me.

hehe. I'm selfishly glad her crazy butt died. She desserrrvveeddd ittt. And not because I'm a fangirl who hates anyone who wounds Edward.

I also BEYOND love the idea of Bella aligning herself in the direction that Edward is.

Author's Response:

Yep, just a bit of psycho in me....Mwahaha!  Glad to know that you do too...

So glad you joined us in the HATE LORENA club....welcome!

Ah, my compass thing...I liked that too!  And that Emmett figured it out...he's a very smart cookie!

Thanks for the lovely stars, agiismsxx!


Reviewer: artsyfartsy (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 11:48 PM · On: Chapter 18~~Rescue~~

Yay! I loved that chapter.  Bella the amazing-Edward-compass was a nice touch!

Author's Response:

I'm so happy that you enjoyed the Bella compass idea....Renee mentioned that she noticed that they kept turning towards each other...and I took it a step further...

Thanks for R&R, artsy!


Reviewer: sareliz (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 11:47 PM · On: Chapter 18~~Rescue~~

Oh, wow.  Rescue indeed.

Author's Response:

Indeed!  Glad she found him so quickly....

Thanks for R&R, sareliz!


Reviewer: Autumnmissa (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 09:07 PM · On: Chapter 18~~Rescue~~

Love it and I have just doomed myself...cause I found out you had posted this on fanfic as well....which means I am a few chapters ahead already and I want to finish it AND i don't review on fanifc, just here at the, I will try to be good, really, I will!  I guess that means I will not get that far ahead and I will try to revirew here so you know how I am loving this, her, Bella, Edward...num!  ;)


More please!


PS, how is the Prologue? Too much?

Author's Response:

Thanks, Melissa!

I'm glad that you are enjoying it so much!

I'm going to get your prologue back to you today....


Reviewer: SarahBella (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 08:39 PM · On: Chapter 18~~Rescue~~

Ummm, I'm a bad person too...


Author's Response:

Welcome to the club, SarahBella!  You are in GOOD company here...

Thanks for all the pretty stars too!


Reviewer: Baela (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 06:19 PM · On: Chapter 18~~Rescue~~

Lorena did most definitely deserve that! I'm glad Edward's okay, and I hope his hand heals up. I know how he's going to feel if he is told he'll never play again, at least not with both hands. I am a flute player, but about a year and a half ago, I was in a car accident. Some idiot ran a red light, and hit me as I was turning. Anyways, my arms had flown up in instinct to protect myself, and the airbag broke my middle metacarpal on my left hand. My hand surgery shortened my middle finger, and the 5 screws in my bone causes my pointer finger to have flexibility issues. I could not play at all for nearly a year, and missed what would have been a most pivotal performance for me. But, after 7 months of PT, and everyday exercises, I can play again. However, I can't play some of my favorite songs because the tempo is too quick, and I can’t play faster than 144; one time I went up to 160, but it really hurt afterwards, so I haven't attempted it since. I’m so glad that I can still play at all, since it has been one of my passions from the time I was a young child, but, unfortunately, I cannot improve myself much.

Wonderful chapter, I can’t wait for the fluff! J I am really happy that this fic is going to have more than just one plot line in the future; I am completely hooked!



Author's Response:

Ah, another member of our HURT LORENA club...

Ouch, your accident sounded awful...hope my story isn't making you hurt in memory of it...(((((hugs)))))

Fluff is coming...well, some!

Yes, a couple other plots lines....and maybe a sequel....they just won't shut up....LOL

Thanks for the lovely review and Thanks for the pretty stars too, Baela!


Reviewer: Baela (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 05:43 PM · On: Chapter 17~~Trying to Focus~~

Holy crap. I am so glad I decided to wait...I really, really do hate Lorena.

Author's Response:

Again, you were very strong to wait! 

Thanks for reading...and the stars!


Reviewer: missielynn (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 05:31 PM · On: Chapter 18~~Rescue~~

this was a really short chap but at least Bella found him

Author's Response:

Yes, at least she found him...just in time!

Thanks for R&R, missiellynn...


Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 18~~Rescue~~

great adventerous chapter:)h

Author's Response:

Thanks, JuliannaOphelia...and now the adventure continues!


Reviewer: valelf (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 02:22 PM · On: Chapter 18~~Rescue~~

The image I have in my head of Emmett bouncing around like Alice is hilarious!

I'm really wishing that Lorena had felt more pain. She was an evil, psychotic hag and deserved to suffer. If you're a bad person, I guess I am, too.

Bella got there just in time. I love the way she found him! I'm looking forward to the fluff! I expect lots of kissing! Please, give us lots of kissing!

I know what you mean about writers that say things like "there will be ten more chapters." I don't get how they can do that. One of the stories I'm working on, when I first started it, I thought there would be 7 or 8 chapters at the most. I'm currently working on chapter 28 and I have no clue how long it will end up.

Great chapter Kathie! I loved it!


Author's Response:

Val, you are the only one to comment on a Dancing Emmett...I do love that part too! 

Welcome to the PAIN FOR LORENA club!  We have a very large membership...but at least we are among friends!

Ah, kissing...lots of kissing...check!

I thought that I would have about 20 chapters, I even did an OUTLINE...that flew out the window about five chapters in...they just kept chatting...Although I did have several set in stone ideas about WHAT I wanted to happen...and there are all incorporated into the story...just much longer than I would have thought!

Thanks for the pretty stars, too!


Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 01:53 PM · On: Chapter 18~~Rescue~~


Author's Response: are very welcome sherylb!  *Justifiable*...

Yes, Bella has some decisions to make...she'll make the right ones...I'm sure!

Not sure he can just disappear though...we'll have to se...

Thanks for the lovely stars!


Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 12:51 PM · On: Chapter 18~~Rescue~~

"Bella Rescue Angel" is awesome! Breaking through doors and windows and chains... although it's going to be a fun conversation when Edward wakes up and tries to decide how much of what he saw was real or imagined... and Bella has to debate whether to reinforce the lie or let the truth come out :)

Author's Response:

I loved that she ripped the doors off the hinges!  She really needed Emmett's cape right then... ;)

Bella is deciding what to tell him...and I think she'll come to the correct decision...yep, I'm pretty sure she does... ;)

Thanks for your lovely review, Daylen...


Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 18~~Rescue~~

Wow. HUGE chapter --- so glad I caught this before I went to work!

OK --- you know I am in agreement with the whole "Lorena felt the flames" thing, and I don't think you're a bad person for wanting that either. Heck, I was all with Bella when she was ripping off limbs. At least Lorena is gone, that is the big picture.

I was never so excited to see that you want to continue this --- I can't wait, even if there is angst. And --- Edward seeing Bella all sparkly --- so sweet. Can't wait to see the rest of that angle work out. = )

Great as always!


Author's Response:

I'm glad you caught it before work too, Eidelweiss! 

Ah, another *WAKE UP Lorena* member!  LOL!  There are quite a lot of us....

I'm glad the sun was shining so that he got to see her sparkly too, that just  might push the truth out there... ;)

Thanks for all the lovely stars!


Reviewer: aylag (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 12:35 PM · On: Chapter 18~~Rescue~~

Yes! Very exciting chapter. I guess the cat's out of the bag with all the sparkling:) I wonder if a change to vampire will be necessary to heal Edward's hand?? I only recently found your story so got to read several chapters to start and so want to say thanks for sharing!

Author's Response:

Glad you found me...I do love getting to click NEXT over and over again too!

Yes, all that sparkling...she and Carlisle too!  Ah, a sparkly Carlisle is nice...

Thanks so much for the lovely stars!


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