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Reviews For Guarding Edward
Reviewer: cherry (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 01:19 AM · On: Chapter 19~~ Later ~~

ahhh more more more moreeee

Author's Response:

More coming soon, Cherry!

Thanks for reading!


Reviewer: cullengirl06 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 08:38 PM · On: Chapter 19~~ Later ~~

whooooooooaaaaaa very cool ideed!!! uptdaaaaatee!! XD

Author's Response:

I'm glad that you approve!  My update is in the line-up...

Thanks for all the pretty stars, cullengirl06!

Reviewer: valelf (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 06:20 PM · On: Chapter 19~~ Later ~~

Awww, a sweet kiss. Surely they'll have some that are a little more than sweet, right? It's good to know that he'll be able to play again. Great chapter Kathie!

Author's Response:

Oh, yes, Val...there will be some more kisses...some that are slightly more than sweet...but see my rating?  My 17, 15 and 12 year old daughters keep saying: GROSS!  LOL!

BUT, I've just started writing a new story....working title:  Knights of Honor...all human...with a higher rating...and my girls are SCREAMING, but my hubby is going...Okay...!!!

Anyway...YES, one friend who read a later kiss in Guarding Edward said:, yes...more kisses later!

Thanks for the lovely stars!


Reviewer: nothing_is_as_it_seems (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 05:11 PM · On: Prologue and Chapter 1... Blood Singer

I am going to sound really cheeky but woul you mind, if you have the time, to read my story, Relighting Meteors? Don't feel pressured or like you have to but yeah :) You don't have to - would just like to hear some advice from someone who is brilliant writer!

Reviewer: cullengirl06 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 04:33 PM · On: Chapter 14~~Epiphany~~

kathie!!!!!! i'm just a huge fan of your writing!!! this chapter was veeery cool specially the last part, creepy Mama M. OMG... it made me anxious to know what are they going to do!!!

oh and the Bella - Edward moments.. and all of bella's thinking was just lovely!! very cool as always!!

thanx for writing!

Author's Response:

Okay, cullengirl06...I just made my hubby come and read your review.  I told him:  THIS is why I write this story!

Aren't you glad that you get to click NEXT a couple more times?

Thanks, sweets...for reading AND all the lovely stars!


Reviewer: Queendel (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 03:36 PM · On: Chapter 19~~ Later ~~

 Very nice. Dramatic and exciting action with good suspense.

 Glad that Edward would still be able to play.  Nice to see the relationship developing between Edward and Bella.

Love Edward's interaction with Emmett and all the Cullens.

What a horrid and delusional pair Laureen and her mum turned out to to.

Update soon.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much, Queendel, for your lovely words!

They really were horrible, weren't they....although they were so much fun to write...scary thought!

I also love the way Edward is getting along with the Cullens...he's going to get more chances to bond with them soon...

Thanks so much for reading, reviewing and giving me such lovely stars!


Reviewer: Edwardia Maven (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 06:29 AM · On: Chapter 19~~ Later ~~

sweet :0

Author's Response:

Thanks, Edwardia Maven!


Reviewer: anemies (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 04:43 AM · On: Chapter 19~~ Later ~~

I'll keep it short and simple: It was superb.

Thank you!

Author's Response:

Short and sweet...I like it!

Thank YOU anemies!


Reviewer: edwardsluver (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 01:28 AM · On: Chapter 19~~ Later ~~

awwwww please please PLEASE update soon i cant wait to see what happens LATER :)

Author's Response:

SOON, soon, soon!  Lots of fun stuff happening LATER...

Thanks for the pretty stars edwardsluver!


Reviewer: ForbiddenFyre (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 11:41 PM · On: Chapter 19~~ Later ~~

Love this new update just as much as the rest of your amazing story!! I am sooo happy that Edward will be alright and will be able to play the piano again!! And all the people that loved Lorena's death should form a Lorena Hate Club or something like that, lol!! Anyhoo, is this going to be like Twilight, but Bella will leave instead of Edward? 'Cause I really hope not! Again, wonderful job and I will hold my breath until the next chapter is up!! lol, if I did that, I would probably die! lol :F

Author's Response:

Ah....thanks so much ForbiddenFyre! 

Nope, no leaving...on that I can assure you!  Problems...yes...but leaving, NO!

I have just watched the NM trailer....three times....and each time Edward steps away, one of my children or another screams:  JERK!


Uh oh...don't hold your breath, that could be bad for your health, BUT it should be up soon!

Thanks again, I love the pretty stars!


Reviewer: Master of the Boot (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 11~~Before the Dawn~~

One of my favorite things in Twilight is where they watch people sleep.  Seeing it in reverse is even more fun. 

I love how you describe Bella and her motivation. 


Master of the Boot

Author's Response:

I am so sorry!  I missed your review of this chapter! 

I also enjoyed that aspect of Twilight...and now Bella got to have a go at it too...

Thanks for reading, MOTB!


Reviewer: sareliz (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 06:13 PM · On: Chapter 19~~ Later ~~

Oh, sigh!  Thankfully, some measure of sweet resolution!  Yay.  THank you so much for such a lovely chapter!

Author's Response:

You are very welcome for the sweet chapter...they really needed it, didn't they?

Thanks for reading, sareliz!


Reviewer: sethschick (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 06:03 PM · On: Chapter 19~~ Later ~~

Okay, I missed leaving several milestone reviews.
First - loved the last few chapters, awesome. Lorena aka Mama is or better yet was sick. She even tried to drop the dime on her own daiughter. The smashing of his hand was the last straw. Sicko lady - I hate that she had to burn like that but if I know anything she's still burning or at least getting hit with an intense heat that's not getting quenched.
Lastly, love this chapter especially. I can see the good things that are going to be happening for Bella and Edward.

Author's Response:

Yes, I'm guessing that I know where such a hideous person ended up too!  She really should have made better choices while she was alive.

YES, good things going to be happening...with just a touch of *Uh oh*.... ;)

Thanks, sethschick, for the pretty stars!


Reviewer: nothing_is_as_it_seems (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 05:08 PM · On: Chapter 19~~ Later ~~

WOW if u form a club let me know where 2 sign up! hee hee this wa sa greatchapter - I loved it - hope he finds out and has a Bella type reaction about vampires soon!! maybe a bit of a normal reaction a bit of terror but not muc hee hee I am seriously loving this - human Edward - hee hee love it!

Author's Response:

Yes, there certainly are a lot of members of the HATE LORENA club....

He's going to start getting some answers...soon!

I'm so happy that you are loving this...makes me want to write more!

Thanks for the pretty stars NIAIS!


Reviewer: HeavenDust (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 02:45 PM · On: Chapter 19~~ Later ~~

OMG... I just saw that HUMONGOUS pic of Alex O'Loughlin you posted in review reply. Thank you! I wish I saw that earlier... that really brightened up my day already. Nom nom nom...

Author's Response:

Don't you just LOVE him?  I keep going back and taking another peek....His, mature abs just take my breath away!  Not to say that Rob's aren't delish too...but ALEC!  Sqeeeeeeee!!!

Okay...back to writing!


Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 01:19 PM · On: Chapter 19~~ Later ~~


Currently, all is right in the world. Edward is safe, injuries apparently not so bad without some work, Bella is not feeling the burn so much anymore. Well... I think its time for some awake kissing whilst in PT! LOL = )

Great chapter, as always. I love this story!

Author's Response:

It does feel good, doesn't it? 

Yes, time for some more kissing...AWAKE kissing!  Coming up...

Your reviews always make me smile, Eidelweiss!


Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 12:31 PM · On: Chapter 19~~ Later ~~

The poor man has been kidnapped, had his hand broken into bits, and almost got burned...the least she could do was give him some tongue!!!! ha.

I loved the story yet again. Just so you know.

Author's Response:

LOL! Some tongue!  Hey, he was falling asleep!  Maybe when he's, yeah, maybe!

Thanks for reading, agiismsxx, and all the lovely stars!


Reviewer: Autumnmissa (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 12:19 PM · On: Chapter 19~~ Later ~~

I sitll find it interesting that after all that he went through, that Edward's concerns and thoughts all centered around Bella.  He had his hand smashed, she smashed hers through a door...he looks at her hands first etc.  Kind of makes me want to jump up and down and scream middle school he-likes-me babble.  More please!  ;)

Author's Response:

Yes, Edward was so concerned about Bella's hand...and her safety...I like that in a guy! 

He tickles me too...such a sweetie!


Reviewer: kycee (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 19~~ Later ~~

Thank you for updating so quickly.  This is my favorite story I am reading right now.  I loved this chapter.  I am glad that Edward's hand will ge ok even if he stays human.  That means if he chooses to be a vampire, that did not influence his decision.  GREAT JOB!!

Author's Response:

Oh, kycee...that just makes me so HAPPY to hear that! 

Good point on becoming a vampire or not, his hand won't influence him...well, not much!

Thanks so much!


Reviewer: rhiannon113 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 19~~ Later ~~

I still wish Bella would have had just a few minutes alone with her before she turned into human Jiffy Pop, but c'est la vie! Excellent! Now get that boy better so he can learn all her secrets and they can be deliriously happy!!!!!


Author's Response:

Well, we can only hope that Lorena was awake for a moment or ten... ;)

Getting better IS on the agenda...soon!

Thanks for reading rhiannon113!


Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 09:38 AM · On: Chapter 19~~ Later ~~

woohoo more piano playing in Edward's future... and perhaps some very "interesting" physical therapy courtesy of Dr/Nurse Bella before that? ;)

Author's Response:

LOL!  Maybe!  She did go to medical school...twice...there may have been some PT training there...

Thanks for reading Daylen!


Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 09:21 AM · On: Chapter 19~~ Later ~~


Author's Response:

Thanks, fightinsurfgrl!


Reviewer: emma austin (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 08:55 AM · On: Chapter 19~~ Later ~~

Excellent! I hope Edward makes a full recovery. 

Author's Response:

Given time...and Bella's help, I hope he does too!

Thanks for reading emma austin!


Reviewer: Elaine (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 06:25 AM · On: Chapter 19~~ Later ~~

i dont mean to push but i can't get enough of this story, please please please update soon. thanks

Author's Response:

Thanks Elaine!  I got the next chapter, "The First Question" in the line-up, hopefully it will be up soon!


Reviewer: squarepancake (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 05:31 AM · On: Chapter 19~~ Later ~~

I love how speedy the updates have been!  It's a rare treat.  Also, glad that Lorena couldn't do anything right in the end- even ruin his playing.


I sorta wish we could have seen more Jessica though, that friendship is much sweeter than I would have otherwise expected.

Author's Response:

I'm happy YOU are happy with the updates!  I've got 32 chappies written, but can only update as mine gets to the top of the listing...everwondering has been busy with these!

I like Jessica and Mike too...there will be a bit more them later on...

Thanks for all the pretty stars, squarepancakes!


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