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Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 02:49 PM · On: Chapter 20~~The First Question~~

That last paragraph was freaking AMAZING as hell. Seriously.

I love that even though he knows there's something about here that's different...he isn't questioning it just yet. He just loves her.

Amazing story.

&btw. This story TOTALLY deserved the shout out.



Author's Response:

Oh, thanks so much for your lovely words, agiismsxx!  And the stars too!

He does just love her...vampire or not!  I'm thinking he is going to take THAT news pretty well... ;)

I appreciated your shoutout very very much...Mwah!

Kathie

Reviewer: valelf (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 08:42 AM · On: Chapter 20~~The First Question~~

I like Rosalie in this. So many people make her out to be such a hag. Emmett and the grizzly - lol!

Dr. Carlisle always makes me smile.

Edward's first question caught me by surprise, too. But, it makes sense that he would ask about that first. And, I think it's very promising that he's not focussed on the other things - you know, the little things like sparkling, bizarre strength, extra cold skin, etc.

It sounds like their second kiss was something he'll definitely remember! Great chapter Kathie! I loved it! As always, I'm looking forward to more!



Author's Response:

Thanks, val, I'm glad you like my Rosie...she is somewhat softer...

Oh!  You are going to love Dr. Carlisle and his *sex talk* in the next chapter!  LOL!

Edward really is good at focusing on BELLA, not on what she is.  Although those things WILL come up...but he thought the KISS was more important...such a sweet guy!

Next chapter in the line-up....

Thanks for the pretty stars too!

Kathie

Reviewer: dmnsqrl (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 05:40 AM · On: Chapter 20~~The First Question~~

makes me think of these lyrics to a lullabye...

 

Curl up, close your eyes and sleep
Sleep through the dark of night
Sleep till the morning light
Curl up, close your eyes and sleep

Curl up, close your eyes and dream
Think of the want you feel
Dream now, and dream it real
Curl up, close your eyes and dream

Tomorrow the world will be yours
Tomorrow will be so fine -
The heavens will smile, the sun will shine
Tomorrow the world will be yours

Curl up, close your eyes and sleep
Sleep through the dark of night
Sleep till the morning light
Curl up, close your eyes and sleep



Author's Response:

Oh, that was lovely!  And it fits too...

Thanks for sharing, dnbsqrl!

Kathie

 

Reviewer: _-_-hisgoldeneyes-_-_ (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 10:51 PM · On: Chapter 17~~Trying to Focus~~

NO!!! i feel SOO bad for edward, but i HAVE to say you can WRITE!!

 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your review hisgoldeneyes!  I felt badly for Edward too...that hurt to write!

And I appreciate your kind words about my writing very much!

Pixel cookies for you!

Kathie

Reviewer: girls_got_bite (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Choices

Love it! Different enough to not feel like I'm reading the same book, even though I love the same people in it.

Author's Response:

Thanks for giving my story a chance, GGB!  AND thanks for still liking these characters...

Aren't you glad you can click NEXT?  ;)

Kathie

Reviewer: montepython4life (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 07:56 PM · On: Chapter 20~~The First Question~~

aww they're so cute!!



Author's Response:

They ARE cute together, aren't they?  So you probably don't want me to bring Jacob in to sweep her off her feet...right?

LOL, just kidding!

I like them together so much...

Thanks for the review and the lovely stars, montepython4life!

Kathie

Reviewer: cullengirl06 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 07:40 PM · On: Chapter 20~~The First Question~~

awwwww!! pff! who wouldn't want some of those kisses?? =) that was sooo romantic!! carlisle's smooth-walking-out.. was soo funny!! i think this is going awesome!!! i loooove it!! i'll be looking for the uptdate because i sooooooo want to know what happens neeext!!

thanx kathie 4 the great chapter

and i'm glad my comment was good to prove your awesomness!! you're obviously a great writer!!! =)

and this story!!! wowsss u rock!



Author's Response:

You and me, cullengirl06...in line...for some of those kisses...I'll let YOU go first! 

I'm so happy you mentioned Carlisle...and his walking out...and shutting the door...he is just such a sweetheart....he gets to say a few words in the next chapter too... a *sex talk*.... ;)

Ah, I appreciate your support, and words, very much!  Mwah!

Kathie

Reviewer: emma austin (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 05:07 PM · On: Chapter 20~~The First Question~~

Ahhh! I love this chapter. Can't wait for Edward to heal. he he he. 



Author's Response:

Thanks, emma austin!  Ah, Edward does need to heal, if he would only listen to his docs...he doesn't want to be a good patient...sigh...

Good thing he has Bella watching over him...

Kathie

Reviewer: edwardsluver (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 02:27 PM · On: Chapter 20~~The First Question~~

OMG please update soon! This was the best chapter yet!! :) I dont know how much longer i can wait for the next chapter!!!!! :)



Author's Response:

Wow!  That was a fervent review!  Hopefully you won't have to wait long...the next one is in the line-up...

Thanks so much for your support, edwaradsluver!

Kathie

Reviewer: Baela (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 08:32 AM · On: Chapter 20~~The First Question~~

This chapter was so sweet! I wasn't expecting that to be the question either, lol! Update soon!

Baela



Author's Response:

I'm happy that the question surprised you...he surprised me too...I would have gone with:  What are you?  LOL!

I thought that we needed a bit of sweet after all the kidnapping stuff...and there's not a lot of things sweeter than Edward and Bella TOGETHER....

Thanks for reading and rating, Baela!

Kathie

Reviewer: Autumnmissa (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 07:52 AM · On: Chapter 20~~The First Question~~

Well, If the tables were turned, I would worry about kisses from Bella, but as it is, I think I can speak for most of us...kisses from Edward...pain pump be damned!  More please!



Author's Response:

Ah, yes....kisses from Edward...they could be therapuedic!  (Well, if I spelled that right!)

Thanks, Melissa!

Kathie

Reviewer: TLammy24 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 05:50 AM · On: Chapter 20~~The First Question~~

Another good chapter.  Glad he was awake this time for the kisses.  Looking forward to Colorado and how Bella explains the painting to him ;)



Author's Response:

Thanks, TLammy24, for reading and for the stars!  I was glad he was awake for the kisses too. 

They are going to have a good time in Colorado...and some visitors...

AND will get to see the painting...

Kathie

Reviewer: aylag (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 05:38 AM · On: Chapter 20~~The First Question~~

What a sweet chapter. I love that that was his first question! Thanks for posting.

Author's Response:

I'm glad you were pleased with his first question, aylag!  "Why do you Sparkle" wouldn't have been nearly as much fun... ;)

Thanks for reading AND rating!

Kathie

Reviewer: Elaine (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 01:29 AM · On: Chapter 20~~The First Question~~

thanks, another chapter soon please 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, Elaine...the next chapter:  It was Time... is in the line-up...should be up soon!

Thanks for the pretty stars!

Kathie

Reviewer: HeavenDust (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 12:42 AM · On: Chapter 20~~The First Question~~

Aww.. that was sweet! More kisses... kisses are good. :) Patients recover faster when they're happy. :P I love the excellent update as usual, and will be looking forward to the next one.



Author's Response:

Ah, if patients heal faster with happiness in their lives, then Edward should heal pretty fast... ;)

Kisses help too!

Thanks for reading, HeavenDust!

Kathie

Reviewer: gpl993 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 10:52 PM · On: Chapter 20~~The First Question~~

Yay!  Kisses are my favorite!  I wonder exactly how much Bella is going to tell Edward though.  About her being a vamp.  hmm?



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, gpl993!

Well, Bella really has to think about what she wants to tell Edward...she's got some good ideas...I hope you'll be pleased with the way that conversation goes...

Kathie

Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 10:28 PM · On: Chapter 20~~The First Question~~

hehe Edward's first question had me lol'ing... and I can imagine Bella blushing like crazy if she were able!

Rosalie's thoughts were interesting and it'll be good to see the upcoming conversations... and the kisses etc :)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much Daylen!  She really would have been blushing...but he made up for it...

Rosalie was sweet...but she gets to be scary in the next chapter...LOL!  Fangirls had better run!

Kathie

Reviewer: bludazie (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 10:14 PM · On: Chapter 20~~The First Question~~

Wow Indeed, I like the Rose view too!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much bludazie!

Rose was fun to write...not quite so scary inside her as I thought it would be...

Thanks for the stars!

Kathie

Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 10:13 PM · On: Chapter 20~~The First Question~~

Hehehe. Can't wait for more :D!!



Author's Response:

Thanks, fightinsurfgrl!  More in the line-up....coming soon to a computer near you... ;)

Kathie

Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 09:21 PM · On: Chapter 20~~The First Question~~

I just want to tell you again just how much I love this story. :) Even I was a little surprised by his first question, but i really enjoyed it and I thought it was great that they got their second kiss.



Author's Response:

Thanks, so much, Aille...I was surprised by the question too...these characters really do take on their own lives...and he just blurted it out!  My kids think I'm nuts...maybe!

Thanks for the pretty stars!

Kathie

Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 09:03 PM · On: Chapter 20~~The First Question~~

Um, vote for kisses? Such a sweet chapter --- loved it. Can't wait for recovery, maybe some secrets revealed? And Rosalie to have a little talk with Bella --- can't wait to see the outcome of that.

Great as always = )



Author's Response:

More kisses on the way, Eidelweiss!

Secrets will be revealed, soon...

Thanks for the support...

Kathie

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 08:47 PM · On: Chapter 20~~The First Question~~

LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!LOVE THE KISSES<,TOO!!!!! 



Author's Response:

Thanks, sherylb....I actually had a fun time imagining kissing Rob, um...Edward!

Kathie

Reviewer: twilightfan1969 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 20~~The First Question~~

Great Chapter! What a sweet kiss! so, when will she tell him?



Author's Response:

Thanks, twilightfan1969....she's working up to telling him...she's just a little afraid...

She wonders if he is going to go running and sceaming from the room...

Kathie

Reviewer: smisa (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 20~~The First Question~~

very sweet!



Author's Response:

Thanks, smisa!

They really are very sweet together...

Kathie

Reviewer: ForbiddenFyre (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 20~~The First Question~~

Love it as always!! I am so glad that he'll be alright and that he was awake for these kisses!!! Can't wait to see what it is that you give us next!

Author's Response:

Thank you, forbiddenFyre!  Yes, next chapter they get to go to Telluride...

Title is:  It Was Time...

I hope you like it...

Kathie

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