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Reviews For Guarding Edward
Reviewer: ashkan00dle (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 01:49 PM · On: Chapter 22~~Answers~~

more than one chapter at a time would be niceeee



Author's Response:

Alas, ashkanoodle, one can only have ONE chapter in the line-up at a time...and my beta is in the middle of a move, so I'm not sure how long it's going to be for the next update.  My chapter IS in the line-up though, so when she gets settled it should be up.

Send me a pm if you'd like to know a secret... ;)

Kathie

Reviewer: twilightfan1969 (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 01:46 PM · On: Chapter 22~~Answers~~

he took that sooo well! I cant wait to read what happens next



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, twilightfan!

My family said he should have run screaming from the house...so that Jacob the werewolf could comfort Bella....they made me roll my eyes...!!!

Read my reply to the review below this one.... ;)

Kathie

Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 01:40 PM · On: Chapter 22~~Answers~~

Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Thanks, fightinsurfgrl!

Alas, my beta is in the midst of moving...so even though my next chapter is in the line-up....it could be two weeks before the next one is up...sorry!

BUT, send me a pm and I'll let you in on a secret.... ;)

Kathie

Reviewer: valelf (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 01:30 PM · On: Chapter 22~~Answers~~

I can totally see why this is your favorite chapter! I loved it! Their kiss - that's what I've been waiting for! Amazing! Edward has responded exactly the way I thought he would. All of your chapters are so well written and entertaining. I love this story! Brilliant job Kathie!

Val



Author's Response:

Ah, Val, I'm so glad that you liked it too! Your words make ME very happy! 

My nearly 13 y/o just finished reading...and she said:  Too many TONGUE kisses....LOL!

Thanks for the pretty stars too!

Kathie

Reviewer: Sweetheartwithfangs (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 01:22 PM · On: Chapter 22~~Answers~~

have fangs; wear cloaks; only go out during the night; burned by the sun; turn into bats; have super smelling, sight, hearing, strength; are very alluring and beautiful - tada ten seconds are up! that's my list!



Author's Response:

Wow!  I could have come to YOU for input!  LOL!

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Sweetheartwithfangs!

Kathie

Reviewer: HeavenDust (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 01:17 PM · On: Chapter 22~~Answers~~

LOL... I had to laugh at the mental picture of you asking your kids all the typical things about vampires. :D You have very supportive and great children! I agree with you, this is an awesome chapter. Edward reacted just like canon Bella did in Twilight, without running away screaming. :P This is the moment of truth and their conversations did not disappoint. It's pretty great actually - Edward must be full of questions now and I can't wait to see them answered. So, I'm definitely looking forward to the next chapter! Please update soon. :)



Author's Response:

Yes, the girls just roll their eyes at me...LOL!  But then they come through, usually!

I think that the fact that they are BOTH falling in love (just like SM's characters) have a lot of bearing on just how they take these disclosures...

He DOES have a lot of questions...some of them are a bit *out there*....LOL!

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, HeavenDust!

Kathie

Reviewer: gpl993 (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 01:16 PM · On: Chapter 22~~Answers~~

Yes, yes, YES!  He FINALLY knows!  And he took it a lot better than I thought he would.  He was just like hmm...well ok....  Loved the chapter!



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it...YES, he does seem to be taking it well...but he did have some clues that she wasn't totally human...and he's falling for her anyway...that has to help the way he takes these explantions...

Thanks for reading!

Kathie

Reviewer: smisa (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 01:14 PM · On: Chapter 22~~Answers~~

great!  i love it.



Author's Response:

Makes me happy to hear that you loved it too!

Kathie

Reviewer: nothing_is_as_it_seems (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 01:08 PM · On: Chapter 22~~Answers~~

WOW! good one! LOVED IT! hope they declaqre their love next? Sparkle? hee hee wel written as always -worth the wait **squels!** (I don;t often do that - new to me since I came on here! hee hee!) I love this story Ten pretty stars (and RM should be updated this weekend - fingers crossed!)



Author's Response:

Thanks, NIAIS!  Ah, sparkling...yes, hard to explain that....

There will be some declarations...soon!

Thanks for the stars!

Looking forward to your next update too!

Kathie

Reviewer: Solidae (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 12:58 PM · On: Chapter 22~~Answers~~

YAY!   That was a good chapter...thanks for the update!



Author's Response:

Thanks, Solidae, glad you enjoyed it!  It is one of my favorites...

Kathie

Reviewer: leslieljs713 (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 11:43 AM · On: Chapter 22~~Answers~~

Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks, Leslie!

Kathie

Reviewer: riverspirit (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 21~~It was time...~~

I've really been enjoying this story, and look forward to Edward's reaction!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading, riverspirit!

I hope the update is on today!  My validating beta is a very busy woman...

Kathie

Reviewer: valelf (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 12:01 PM · On: Chapter 21~~It was time...~~

Poor Bella, over 100 years old and having to have a sex talk with her "father". Mortifying.

Alice packing all of their bags - lol! I can just imagine the types of things she packed for Bella!

That house looks gorgeous! As always, I can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

So, you liked the sex talk with Carlisle?  Me too!  My girls just rolled their eyes...LOL

Yes, let's all meet up at that house for a nice twilight convention...

Next chapter should be up soon!

Thanks, also, for the lovely stars!  Now get to writing Jasper's POV on your story!!!!

Kathie

Reviewer: cullengirl06 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 10:25 PM · On: Chapter 21~~It was time...~~

whooaaA!!! i want a mansion like that!!! soo cool! very edward-y XD 

what is edward going to ask?? and how is he going to react!!! and what is bella going to tell him??? i'm so excited!! and the fact that they are alone.. in the big house.... :O omg! what's going to happen!!!! 

really awesome chapter kathie!!! thanx so much!



Author's Response:

You and me both, cullengirl06!  That mansion was a wonderful find...and fit my story so well!

Ah, you know Edward, his questions will surprise Bella...again!

Yes, alone in that lovely house, ah, the possibilities!

Thanks so much for your kind words...and the lovely stars!

Kathie

Reviewer: edwardsluver (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 09:34 PM · On: Chapter 21~~It was time...~~

Oh my god i cant wait to see all the questions and answers and how he handles them! Please update again soon. You are an amazing writter and i love this story!



Author's Response:

Thanks, edwardsluver...he does have a lot of questions...and I think she does a good job answering them too...after she kisses him...

I appreciate your kind words very much...and the pretty stars too!

Kathie

Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 07:53 PM · On: Chapter 21~~It was time...~~

*clears throat*

evilevilevilcliffhangerevilevilevilevil.

this chapter was sweet and fluffy :D I can't wait to see how Edward reacts to the news of what Bella is. I think that he might freak out. He is only human after all. I am sincerely hoping that he won't try and run away though...

the fact that he's handicapped right now might sincerely help :P



Author's Response:

Ah, even if he could run, she'd still be able to catch him...VAMPIRE after all... ;)

The next chapter is called:  ANSWERS...as opposed to FLIGHT...which I hope helps as you await the next chapter...LOL!

It should be up soon...as it's already in the lineup....

Thanks so much, agiismsxx for reading, reviewing and the lovely stars!

Kathie

Reviewer: kejce (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 09:15 AM · On: Chapter 21~~It was time...~~

Kathie,

You know I'm always there to help you out! Goodness knows you've done enough helping and cheerleading for me. I'd be remiss if I didn't return it wholeheartedly.

I love this chapter. There's so much stuff in it. I can see Bella standing by that portrait, the dread curling in her stomach as she contemplates telling him her past. It can't be pretty.

Kris



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, Kris...you always have my back! Whew!

I loved this one too...and the next one is my FAVORITE...ah, ANSWERS!

Kathie

Reviewer: ForbiddenFyre (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 10:22 PM · On: Chapter 21~~It was time...~~

Oh, my, gosh!!! That rental house is sooo beautiful!! I would love to go and rent that house with a bunch of people, that would be so much fun!!! I love this new chapter and the thing about Edward fighting being a patient makes so much sense with his character. You are doing such a wonderful job on this story! I don't know if anyone has told you, but thank you so much for writing such a wonderful story and sharing your amazing talent with us! We appreciate it so much, that you take the time off from your life to entertain us. Love your story and can not wait for the next chapter and all the answers to come out!

Author's Response:

I think we should just make a trip there and wander around the house...maybe see Edward there...and Bella too!

Your words touched me so much...THANK YOU!

The next chapter...titled:  ANSWERS...is my favorite one.  He gets SOME answers, but more later....

Here's a peek:

“Vampire…I had become a vampire just like Carlisle and Esme.” Her eyes were wide as she looked at me. I’m sure she was wondering what I was going to do. Hell, I wondered what I was going to do, what I thought about this tale she was telling me. It all seemed so farfetched. Could this be real? Could she really be a vampire? The world as I knew it tilted just a bit.

I do love this...thanks again, ForbiddenFyre...your review really did make my day!

Kathie

Reviewer: SarahBella (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 10:02 PM · On: Chapter 21~~It was time...~~

LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!

Fabulous, as always!

I can't wait for Edward to hear the news!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much SarahBella!  For reading, reviewing AND all those shiny stars!

Here's a snippet from the next chapter, which is my favorite one...titled:  ANSWERS

“Vampire…I had become a vampire just like Carlisle and Esme.” Her eyes were wide as she looked at me. I’m sure she was wondering what I was going to do. Hell, I wondered what I was going to do, what I thought about this tale she was telling me. It all seemed so farfetched. Could this be real? Could she really be a vampire? The world as I knew it tilted just a bit.

Hope you like it!

Kathie

Reviewer: akka452 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 09:54 PM · On: Chapter 21~~It was time...~~

loved the chapter i so cant wait for the next chapter



Author's Response:

It should be up soon, akka452!  It's my favorite one too....titled:  ANSWERS!

Thanks for reading!

Kathie

Reviewer: Kina666 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 21~~It was time...~~

ahhh!! Can't wait for the next Chapter! The big reveal!



Author's Response:

Ah, the big reveal should be up soon...titled:  ANSWERS!

Thanks so much for reading, Kina....

Kathie

Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 08:01 PM · On: Chapter 21~~It was time...~~

"Yeah, so Edward," Bella stumbled over the words "the young woman in the painting there?" Edward nodded "Well, it's umm... me!"

Surprise Edward, you made out with a centenarian :)

hehe I've been waiting for this talk for so long - can't imagine what Edward's going to say - although for some reason I can actually see him being a bit jealous that Bella posed for the portrait lol



Author's Response:

Golly!  I could have written it that way!  LOL!

Making out with a cenenarian!  He really didn't seem to mind...LOL

Here's a bit of what happens:

“Vampire…I had become a vampire just like Carlisle and Esme.” Her eyes were wide as she looked at me. I’m sure she was wondering what I was going to do. Hell, I wondered what I was going to do, what I thought about this tale she was telling me. It all seemed so farfetched. Could this be real? Could she really be a vampire? The world as I knew it tilted just a bit.

Ah, I do love this chapter...titled ANSWERS....

Hope you do too, Daylen!

Kathie

Reviewer: OzNimbus (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 07:29 PM · On: Chapter 21~~It was time...~~

Can't wait for the next chapter... keep going!

 



Author's Response:

The next one...ANSWERS...is in the line-up...and I'm currently writing chapter 33...or is it 34? 

Thanks for reading, OzNimbus!

Kathei

Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 05:45 PM · On: Chapter 21~~It was time...~~

WOW.



Author's Response:

I'll take a WOW review, fightinsurfgrl!

Thanks so much!

Just wait for the NEXT chapter:  ANSWERS

I think you'll like that one too!

Kathie

Reviewer: sareliz (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 04:53 PM · On: Chapter 21~~It was time...~~

What a wonderful chapter this was.  I can't wait until the upcoming conversation.  It promises to be a good one.  I do wonder how Edward will take it all...



Author's Response:

I'm so happy that you enjoyed this chapter, sareliz...and hope that you like the next one too...it's my favorite!

ANSWERS!

Kathie

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