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Reviews For Guarding Edward
Reviewer: Rosa Clementine (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 02:44 PM · On: Chapter 6 ~~I Love Him, He's MINE~~

Scary little witch...and her daughter, too!



Author's Response:

Yes, just a tad SCARY! But that makes it fun... ;)

Thanks for reading!

Kathie

Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 22~~Answers~~

i love this chapter too, very nice.



Author's Response:

I'm so happy that you loved it too, JuliannaOphelia!

Thanks for reviewing...

Kathie

Reviewer: Rosa Clementine (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 02:19 PM · On: Chapter 3~~Face to Face~~

OK...I'm hooked now!



Author's Response:

Welcome to Guarding Edward, Rosa Clementine!

Hope you enjoy your visit here...and I'm happy that you are HOOKED!

Kathie

Reviewer: OperationNautilus (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 02:13 PM · On: Chapter 11~~Before the Dawn~~

love this chapter and the Edward and Bella bonding time. When will she realize what she's feeling for him? Looking forward to Alice meeting Edward ;-)



Author's Response:

I'm so happy that you enjoyed this chapter too...their bonding time...

She's realizing that SOMETHING is happening here...She gets to the bottom of it...soon!

Kathie

Reviewer: OperationNautilus (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 01:08 PM · On: Chapter 10~~On Guard~~

Thanks for writing Bella's story although it's not crucial to the story. I love a lot of background information. Will we get to know Emmet and Rosalie's story?

Is there more of a story behind your Edward/Jessica/Mike remark?

Great chapter. Keep up the good work.



Author's Response:

Happy that you liked her backstory...It just kept nagging at me...

Here is where Stephenie Meyer talked about Emmett and Rosalie meeting:

http://www.stepheniemeyer.com/twilight_outtakes.html

Click on Emmett and the Bear....

A lot of people hate Mike...and Jessica too....a LOT of my reviewers are surprised at the tight relationship that MY ExMxJ have...I just wanted to show them in a better light.  I always thought that Mike was the typical 17 y/o boy...with all his lustful thoughts and all!

Kathie

Reviewer: OperationNautilus (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 12:07 PM · On: Chapter 9~~Discoveries~~

Now I know how Edward could have seen Bella before he met here. Wonder what story is behind that painting and what the relation between the painter and Bella is/was. It's good that they're not related that would have just been a bit creepy (and wrong).

enjoyed this chapter very much. Great job.



Author's Response:

Bella will mention the artist again...in the future....

Yes, glad they aren't related...icky!  LOL

Thanks, again, for reading, reviewing AND rating, OperationNautilus!

Kathie

Reviewer: OperationNautilus (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 09:05 AM · On: Chapter 8~~Too Close To Home~~

looove this chapter. love that you give the reason why Bella knows where Jess lives. many authors forget such little things that make a story even better.

Lauren is really escalating. I wonder what her mum's problem is.

lol thanks for the pixel cookie. keep up the good work and I hope your puppy feels better soon.



Author's Response:

More pixel cookies for YOU!  Yes, Tripp is feeling better...we had the colt gelded last week....the BOYS on this property are all starting to get scared!  LOLOL

I can actually picture where Jessica lived...I was born in Seattle, and have been back many many times...Jess lives in a lovely neighborhood.

Yes, Lauren is escalating...she's got ISSUES for sure....

Kathie

Reviewer: OperationNautilus (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 07:54 AM · On: Chapter 7~~How Fast Can This Baby Go?~~

loved this chapter. I'm curious about what happened at Jessica's house. loved the Emmet and Edward bonding time.



Author's Response:

I liked the boys and their bonding...glad you did too!

Thanks for the stars!

Kathie

Reviewer: duskwatcher (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 06:10 AM · On: Chapter 6 ~~I Love Him, He's MINE~~

Oh, god, I do have a soft spot for pyschopaths.  Will we ever get to meet Mama, just like in Beowulf, she seems the really dangerous one!

A great villian! Great internal logic in her own scary little world.  I laughed when i saw it was Lauren!

I'll be getting to read this bit by bit, loving what I see so far!



Author's Response:

LOL...a soft spot, hmmmm?  For Lauren?  LOL!  Ah, keep reading...Mama, well, MAMA...she's even more creepy than her daughter....well, that is if she makes an appearance... ;)

So nice to see you here, duskwatcher!  Thanks for the lovely stars!

And readers, check out her story:

 

A Matter of Time » by duskwatcher2153 reviews

A TLYDF Recommendation. Volturi revolt, wolf pack renegades, Edward and Bella trying to parent Renesmee, who is seeing Jacob in a whole new way. A story of action, intrigue, and sexual awakening.

 

It's also here at twilighted!

Reviewer: emma austin (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 03:43 AM · On: Chapter 22~~Answers~~

I loved this chapter. Awesome.



Author's Response:

*Awesome*....I'll take that as a review!

Thanks, emma austin!

Kathie

Reviewer: AMayes (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 03:04 AM · On: Chapter 22~~Answers~~

I do love this chapter!  What with Bella talking about her past and change and Edward learning more about the woman he loves.

Perfect!

And I love how unfazed Edward is by all this new news!  All because he loves Bella!

Great update!



Author's Response:

Thanks Yuri! 

Kathie

Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 22~~Answers~~

Fantastic chapter --- loved Edward's thought processes in this chapter --- really amusing. Can't wait for the next one --- I love this story, keeps getting better and better!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you found Edward funny...makes a nice change for him...LOL

And I'm trying to keep Bella from being TOOOOO angsty....but she tries to be all the time...I think that she's channeling Edward....LOL

Send me a pm if you'd like in on a secret...

Kathie

Reviewer: edwardsluver (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 08:30 PM · On: Chapter 22~~Answers~~

please update soon i want to se what happens when she tells him she loves him lol :)



Author's Response:

Ah, the next chapter is in the line-up...but it could be awhile...my beta is moving and life is hectic...although my chapter is in the line-up, I'm sure she'll get to it as soon as she can.

Send me a pm if you'd like in on a secret.... ;)

ANd thanks for the lovely stars!

Kathie

Reviewer: ForbiddenFyre (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 22~~Answers~~

I absolutely LOVED this chapter!!!! I thought that it was amazing!!! This just might be one of the most amazing chapters that you've written. It was a wonderful way to put Edward finding out about vampires!!! WOnderful work and thank you so much for sharing your talent with us and taking the time to make such an amazingly, wonderful story with us!!! We really appreciate the time you spend and the thought you put into this! I I don not know much about vampires, sorry! :F

Author's Response:

Oh!  That is so nice of you to say so! I really did love this chapter too....

And all those lovely STARS...sigh...thanks so much!

Send me a pm if you'd like in on a secret....

Kathie

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 06:41 PM · On: Chapter 22~~Answers~~

 I LOVE THIS CHAPTER, TOO!!!!!!!AND I CAN'T WAIT FOR BELLA TO TELL EDWARD THAT THE REASON SHE HASN'T DRAINED HIM IS BECAUSE SHE LOVES HIM, AND THAT HE IS HER MATE!!!! JUST GREAT!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks, sherylb!  Makes me happy to read that my readers liked it too...

She really does love him...now to tell him!

Send me a pm if you'd like to know a secret...

And thanks for the lovely stars too!

Kathie

Reviewer: kejce (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 06:27 PM · On: Chapter 22~~Answers~~

I love this chapter. It's so well done.

This review is awful, but I am looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

WHAT an awful review!!!  Just kidding...!!!!!  And readers, she KNOWS I'm kidding!

Never an awful review....I just love getting those e-mail notifications!

Hey, where's the next chapter of AUTUMN KNIGHTS' DREAM????

LOL!

Kathie

Reviewer: squarepancake (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 22~~Answers~~

I loved how casually Bella introduced the painting.  No dramtic pause and then shout of "This is me!" just the revelation of the name and the comment that she didn't expect her name to be put on it.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad that you liked that!  I just can't see Bella shouting "This is ME"....but it's a funny picture anyway....

Thanks for the lovely stars too!

Oh, send me a pm if you want to know a secret... ;)

Kathie

Reviewer: riverspirit (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 05:02 PM · On: Chapter 22~~Answers~~

Yay, all has been revealed, and no angst has ensued! Looking forward to more :)



Author's Response:

Well, not ALL has been revealed, but at least he didn't run!

There will be angst...soon! But not a LOT...LOL

Kathie

Reviewer: OperationNautilus (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 03:36 PM · On: Chapter 5~~Love Letters?~~

The stalkers habit seems to be well researched (although I don't know anything about it). Oooh cliffhanger. Great job on this chapter.



Author's Response:

I didn't actually do research on the stalker's POV...my family just thought it was my inner CREEP coming out...and they are afraid, very afraid...well, except when they are laughing at me...!!!

Thanks again!

Kathie

Reviewer: OperationNautilus (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 03:20 PM · On: Chapter 4~~Who is She?~~

lol, love that he mentions rob.

Perhaps Edward nows her from old family pictures or drawings. That would be bizar, her being his great-great-great-aunt or something.

I agree with you that a different POV should normaly move the chapter along but in seldom cases it is interesting to read the same scene from a different POV. Great Job on this chapter.



Author's Response:

I did have to get ROB in there somewhere...LOL!

Your guess is good...UGH, couldn't make her a RELATIVE...creepy!  *Snork*....

Glad you didn't mind that this chapter was the same as the last, just different POV...but I thought that it filled in quite a bit of the story...and it won't happen again....just some slight overlaps...

More stars!  Thanks!

Kathie

Reviewer: OperationNautilus (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 03:08 PM · On: Chapter 3~~Face to Face~~

Another brilliant chapter. I can't believe you've only got about 500 reviews with this story. It's excellent. I like that you take your time and describe a lot of details but don't overdo it with the details. You write an English that is very easy and enjoying to read. Another big bonus is that you din't have any mistakes in it. Thank you or thanks to your beta.

Can't wait to find out what Edward has to say to their first encounter.



Author's Response:

I'm going to answer ALL your reviews, but have to go get the puppy from the vet (he was just neutured)...but wanted to say THANK you so much for your reviews so far!  You have me smiling for sure....

And, thanks for the comments on my spelling and grammar...i do try really hard to make it *just so*!

Hope you enjoy Edward's POV in the next chapter...It's a short one...but good, at least I hope so!

Kathie

Reviewer: OperationNautilus (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 02:34 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Choices

Another Brilliant chapter. You portrait Bella's hunger for Edward's blood but also her wish not to brake with her diet perfectly. I like a lot that her hunger for him creeps up on her and tries to through her of her course.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, I'll take a *Brilliant* for this chapter!

Yes, she really did want to snack on him, BUT it was totally against her moral compass too....She was shocked to find that sort of lust inside her after 90 years as a vamp...

Thanks, also, for the lovely stars!

Kathie

Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 22~~Answers~~

I liked how this conversation turned out!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I'm glad you enjoyed it, Gelsamina...

Kathie

Reviewer: OperationNautilus (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 02:21 PM · On: Prologue and Chapter 1... Blood Singer

wow! Just stumbled upon your story and I'm just amazed. You've done a really good job. Like how you portrait everybody, especially Bella. You've got me hooked already after only 1 chapter.



Author's Response:

I'm so happy that you found me! 

Aren't you happy that you got to click NEXT?  LOL!

Kathie

Reviewer: Lasharp15 (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 01:59 PM · On: Chapter 22~~Answers~~

Hi Kathie,

I've been reading many of the Twilight Fan Fiction stories, but this is the first time I've done a review. I love your story. It is so well written. I find myself checking daily for updates, and a thrilled to see a new chapter from you! keep going, I can't wait to see what happens next!!!



Author's Response:

That really makes my day...MY story drew you out of lurkdom... ;)

Happy that you are enjoying it! 

Thanks for the lovely stars too, Lasharp15!

Kathie

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