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Reviews For Guarding Edward
Reviewer: AMayes (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 03:03 AM · On: Chapter 23~~Not Keeping the Secret~~

Great chapter as usual!  I love that Edward isn't at all afraid of Bella or her family.

I also like the sweetness of their courtship.  It's very 1800s (which is a good thing!)

I wonder what Alice is calling about? 

Thanks for a great read!



Author's Response:

Thanks Darlin!  Yes, very 1800...unlike YOUR story!!!  Wooo....HOT!

Thanks for the review!

Kathie

Reviewer: emma austin (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 02:49 AM · On: Chapter 23~~Not Keeping the Secret~~

I looved the twenty questions. I'm not mathy so I'm not even guessing at the number but I love where I think this is going. Please update soon. 



Author's Response:

I keep hoping that I counted the questions correctly!  I had totally screwed up Bella's age in earlier chapters...finally got THAT straightened out!

Thanks for reading!

Kathie

Reviewer: Elaine (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 02:37 AM · On: Chapter 23~~Not Keeping the Secret~~

Yes i did like it but i didn't like waiting so long for this chapter, please can you update faster? i know that real life raises its head but can you please tell it to just but out!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it...sorry for the wait, my beta is a busy woman....I'll be getting the next chapter on line today...into the line-up.....

Drop me a pm if you'd like to know a secret....

Thanks for the pretty stars!

Kathie

Reviewer: _-_-hisgoldeneyes-_-_ (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 12:17 AM · On: Chapter 18~~Rescue~~

FINALLYY!!! i was actually crying and my friends filmed it!! then when bella came i cried even more!!!

lol, i'm still crying,

xoxox

Reviewer: squarepancake (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 12:00 AM · On: Chapter 23~~Not Keeping the Secret~~

Bella flustered is rather funny.  I'm surprised at just how vehement her reaction was towards his final question though.



Author's Response:

It was rather funny picturing her mouth hanging open...that man just keeps surprising her...

I think she was so shocked because she had been holding the monster at bay for so long...and now there was almost an invitation to BITE HIM before her...she was shocked, once again.  That happens a lot with Edward...

Thanks for reading!

Kathie

Reviewer: mjbabe58 (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 11:33 PM · On: Chapter 6 ~~I Love Him, He's MINE~~

heyy, i usually read all the story that is posted before reviewing but i just gotta say, WHAT. THE. HELL? The freaks mom is in on it? o dear  lord that is quite umm, i'm just gonna say it, it's pretty damn creepy! This girl is such a creeper! hahahaha great story!!



Author's Response:

LOL...so, creepy Lauren pulled you out of lurkdom... Excellent!

Ah, yes, her Mama is a driving force in her life... ;)

Hope that you enjoy the rest of it too!

Kathie

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 10:24 PM · On: Chapter 23~~Not Keeping the Secret~~

Yeah, I thought they might end up in bed together!



Author's Response:

I like them in bed together....!!!

But they are behaving... :)

Thanks, sherylb, for reading and the lovely stars!

Kathie

Reviewer: Bellinda (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 10:15 PM · On: Prologue and Chapter 1... Blood Singer

very interesting story



Author's Response:

Thank you Bellinda...I hope you like the rest of it!

Kathie

Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 10:09 PM · On: Chapter 23~~Not Keeping the Secret~~

Wow. I was literally bouncing on the edge of my seat and now I can barely wait for the next chapter... ahhh. And of course love that you are a HEA fan no matter where we go with the chapters = )



Author's Response:

I'm so happy that you enjoyed this!

Yes, got to have a HEA at some point!  I think that might be after chapter 38!!!  LOL

Thanks for reading, reviewing...and those lovely stars!

Kathie

Reviewer: E-A-M-C (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 02:17 PM · On: Chapter 22~~Answers~~

absolutly LOVE this story! Can't wait to see whats going to happen next! :]



Author's Response:

I'm so happy that you LOVE it!  I appreciate your kind words...and those lovely stars!

Kathie

Reviewer: Lalaranya (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2009 01:33 PM · On: Chapter 13~~Taken~~

awww!!! thats so sweet!!!!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it!

Kathie

Reviewer: Lalaranya (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2009 11:06 AM · On: Chapter 8~~Too Close To Home~~

this is awesome!!!

 

another good song for New Moon is She Falls asleep by McFly-i normally  dont like them, but this one is  quite good. here the link if anyone wants it :: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XMD2CFvYb_k 

KK



Author's Response:

I just watched that...thanks for the idea...

AND thanks for reading and reviewing...

Kathie

Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 05:40 PM · On: Chapter 22~~Answers~~

I have to admit this...

I would've flipped it had Bella confessed such things to me.

But, I love the way you had Edward react.

This was probably my favorite chapter in this story!



Author's Response:

LOL....I'm glad you are NOT my Edward then!  Although the mental picture of him running, screaming from the house is quite amusing!

I should write that as an outtake!

I'm so glad to hear that this one was a favorite of yours too!

Did Val let you in on the secret?  She's going to be strong....but are you?

Kathie

Reviewer: OperationNautilus (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 03:05 PM · On: Chapter 22~~Answers~~

loved this chapter and how Edward reacts to Bella's story. This is the first time I have to wait for you to update to read the next chapter ;-)  wonder how it continues. Great work.



Author's Response:

I want all my other chapters up, just to see your reviews! I got used to them the last couple of days, OperationNautilus!

Send me a pm if you'd like to know a secret... ;)

Kathie

Reviewer: OperationNautilus (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 02:39 PM · On: Chapter 21~~It was time...~~

loved this chapter. Hope Edward takes everything like the man he is ;-)



Author's Response:

He's pretty cool....but this is a big thing...but I have FAITH that he's going to take it well... ;)

Kathie

Reviewer: OperationNautilus (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 01:31 PM · On: Chapter 20~~The First Question~~

lol! I imagine Bella's face must have looked quite comical when Edward asked her his first question. Loved this chapter. Your great.



Author's Response:

It's funny, I wasn't sure what it was going to be...then he leaned over and whispered it to me...and it did fit...

Carlisle seemed to find it amusing too!

Yes, Edward is certainly keeping Bella on her toes!  And surprised.....

Thanks, again, for the lovely stars!

Kathie

Reviewer: OperationNautilus (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 01:17 PM · On: Chapter 19~~ Later ~~

yeah I would definitely say it was .... later ;-) Can't wait to see how edward will take the vampire news and how all will play out. Great chapter.



Author's Response:

LATER!  Ah...sweet later!  Even if he was half asleep... ;)

He'll be awake NEXT time...

Kathie

Reviewer: OperationNautilus (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 01:00 PM · On: Chapter 18~~Rescue~~

wow that finding edward thing is quitr useful ;-) I Hope Edward can play again. I play the piano and I know that I would miss it terribly if couldn't play it anymore although I'm not that good. great chapter



Author's Response:

Bella the compass!  Worked well for all involved...

You play too?  That's cool...I just listen...no playing for me....I think that was my favorite scene from the movie...so happy that Catherine fought for that part!

Have faith about his playing... ;)

Kathie

Reviewer: OperationNautilus (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 12:49 PM · On: Chapter 17~~Trying to Focus~~

what a vicious woman. The terrible thing is that there really are people like her. brilliant chapter.



Author's Response:

THAT is what's so hard about this...there ARE people out there like that....makes my family somewhat concerned that I wrote her so well....MWHHAHAHAHAHA!

Sorry, I'm better now... ;)

Kathie

Reviewer: OperationNautilus (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 12:35 PM · On: Chapter 16~~Interrogation~~

intense chapter. Will Edward have to be changed to save him? loved it.



Author's Response:

Didn't you just love Jasper?  I did...Bella would have killed Lauren...

Thanks again!

Kathie

Reviewer: OperationNautilus (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 12:24 PM · On: Chapter 15~~Gone...Just Gone~~

aaaahhhhh! How crazy can you get?

Very intense chapter! Great work!



Author's Response:

It was intense...hurt to write it too!

They get pretty *crazy*...!!!!

Ah, but then you got to click NEXT right away...that's a great thing...

Thanks for reading and those lovely stars!

Kathie

Reviewer: OperationNautilus (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 12:15 PM · On: Chapter 14~~Epiphany~~

loooooooove this chapter. Oh my Gosh I can't wait for the next chapter!!!! Luckily you already uploaded it.

was Bella going into pos. or neg. shock?

Keep up the good work.



Author's Response:

I'm not sure if SHE knew whether it was + or if it was ---....LOL!

Kathie

Reviewer: OperationNautilus (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 10:11 AM · On: Chapter 13~~Taken~~

Loove this chapter. Your so awesome. Especially for replying to every single review. Thanks soooooo much.

love the chemistry between Edward and Bella.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I'll take *awesome* too....LOL!

They really do have some chemistry...sigh!

Kathie

Reviewer: Rosa Clementine (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 06:36 PM · On: Chapter 12~~His Girl Friday~~

One scent is momma?



Author's Response:

Excellent guess, Rosa Clementine!

Kathie

Reviewer: Rosa Clementine (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 10~~On Guard~~

I LOVED the painting story.

And how Bella was changed.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, Rosa Clementine!  I just *saw* the way she was changed, and just had to write it...not in canon, but mine anyway...LOL

Thanks for reading, reviewing...and the lovely stars!

Kathie

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