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Reviews For Guarding Edward
Reviewer: emma austin (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 07:54 AM · On: Chapter 24~~Anticipation~~

Ah love. Great chapter. Are the Volturi turning up any time soon?

Author's Response:

Thanks, EmmaAustin...They will be having visitors...soon...but not the Volturi just yet...they have other obstacles to get beyond first....


Reviewer: wantmoretwilightnow (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 06:30 AM · On: Chapter 24~~Anticipation~~

Such a sweet chapter!  Great story; thank you for sharing it !

Author's Response:

Yes, a little sweet!  Thanks for reading, reviewing...and those lovely stars, wmtn!


Reviewer: ForbiddenFyre (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 23~~Not Keeping the Secret~~

Oh, wow!!! I loved your chapter! am so glad that you updated! I was on vacation so I wasn't able to see if you had updated. This is an amazing story! You've done a great job on the story so far and I thank you for sharing your wonderful talent with us!

Author's Response:

Hope your vacation was a good one....

Thanks for your lovely words...they mean so much to me!


Reviewer: edwardsluver (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 02:51 PM · On: Chapter 23~~Not Keeping the Secret~~

haha i loved this chapter! please update again soon i cant wait! :).

Author's Response:

Lucky girl!  Another chapter was posted early this a.m.!

I'm glad you liked this one...and thanks for the pretty stars too!


Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 01:25 PM · On: Chapter 23~~Not Keeping the Secret~~

Sorry it took me so long to review this chapter, but I absolutely loved it! I really enjoy reading the reactions that you've written for them both!

I also think it's interesting that Bella, while still very much like SM's Bella, has elements that SM's Edward had. And the nonchalant way Edward brings up being changed, such a Bella move =P

Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  I'm happy that the blending I've come up with meets with your approval!

And, have ANOTHER chapter to read now!


Reviewer: fabandfriendly (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 23~~Not Keeping the Secret~~

excellent story cant wait for the next installment i like the concept that edward is the vunerable one and need protecting nice idea

Author's Response:

thanks, fabandfriendly, for the review AND the lovely stars.

Yes, Edward had some issues with being vulnerable too...he's the GUY...and not a couch potato... but sometimes one has to let others in to help...

I'm glad he was open to that thought...

Thanks again, and the next chapter is in the line-up...and hopefully on here soon...


Reviewer: kejce (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 12:30 PM · On: Chapter 23~~Not Keeping the Secret~~

More. I want more. Update now.

There's your review for this chapter. I told you it would be stunning and just the kind I know you like. LOL

Seriously, despite the ending, I love this chapter. I love how Bella acts like a scared little girl even though she's a nearly indestructible vampire. It's a lovely contrast.

It's a tough chapter because of the questions asked, but there's an innocent humor about it by mentioning things like Wonder Woman.

I'm looking forward to seeing what Alice has to say and what happens next.

Author's Response:

Oh my gosh!  I laughed so hard! Thanks!

Stunning....truly stunning!

Seriously...I'm so glad that you liked this one really is one of my favorites.  I see him just chewing away while she keeps expecting him to RUN...

She really does seem like a little girl...

Thanks, Kris, you are a light in my life!


Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 10:49 AM · On: Chapter 23~~Not Keeping the Secret~~

well B&E have had a tonne of their question and answers sorted through... and Bella kinda reacted the way I expected at Edward's comment about being Changed :)

I wonder what the conversation with Alice will be about? hehe

Author's Response:

Ah, yes...Alice does have some things to say....

Glad you liked Bella's reaction....she was a bit shocked!  He does that to her a lot...LOL

Thanks for reading, Daylen!


Reviewer: LeahSylvia (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 10:36 AM · On: Chapter 11~~Before the Dawn~~

I am enjoying this thoroughly!

Author's Response:

Ah...thanks LeahSyliva!  Makes me happy to hear that...

AND you get to click NEXT!


Reviewer: nothing_is_as_it_seems (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 05:58 AM · On: Chapter 23~~Not Keeping the Secret~~

WOW! Alice awesonmeness! hee hee - loved Bella's reaction - not the soul, the monster - hope she's got do an angstward over changing him - if he does get change o.O hope you've been getting more readers :D ANOTHER grea chapter :) Wonder what Alice wanted :O look forward to more :D

Author's Response:

Yes, the monster that is trying to escape....she's a tad bit worried about she ought to be!

Alice's little chat will be in the next chapter...that is already in the line-up...

Thanks so much, NIAIS!


Reviewer: mjbabe58 (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 02:48 AM · On: Chapter 18~~Rescue~~

YES! PHSYCO MOM IS DEAD! that sounds awful, but what can i say? oh heres something i can say! u scared the bajeebies out of me, my biggest fear is burning, in any way, it terifies me, so you now just have me terrified in my basement, thanks.......

Author's Response:

I'm sorry I scared you...!!!!

But at least you don't have to worry about HER anymore!

Thanks for continueing to read, even if you were scared!


Reviewer: mjbabe58 (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 02:16 AM · On: Chapter 15~~Gone...Just Gone~~

i still am reading because i had things to do oday, i just gotta say this before continuing,W T F?! this woman is CRAZY! Are you kidding?! she's soooo insane! i gotta read more, but right now im locking my door just in case...


Author's Response:

Ah, so I did what I set out to do?  Show just how NUTS she is?  Good!

Yep, insane...and horrible!

Aren't you glad you got to click NEXT?  ;)


Reviewer: OzNimbus (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 12:09 AM · On: Chapter 23~~Not Keeping the Secret~~

Keep up the good work.  Enjoying this very much!


Author's Response:

Thanks for the review Oz!

I'm actually working on Chapter 36 right now...11 pages into it...


Reviewer: amylynn1313 (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 06:08 PM · On: Chapter 22~~Answers~~

Hooray!!! I loved this chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much amylynn1313!  Glad you liked it!


Reviewer: dancingblondie (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 15~~Gone...Just Gone~~

YOUR DAUGHTER IS TEAM JACOB!!!! How do you encourage such things?!?!?! He's EVIL! EVIL I SAY! EVIL!!!!!

Author's Response:

They are actually more Team SETH.....LOL

That shot in the New Moon Trailer with Jacob jumping and then phasing?  Well, that might draw ME to the dark side too!

Thanks for reading!


Reviewer: valelf (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 05:36 PM · On: Chapter 23~~Not Keeping the Secret~~

I love Edward's reasoning for not being afraid of her. Then, when he compared her to Wonder Woman, I was all giggly.

I liked the twenty questions part! That was cute!

The ending was a bit of a surprise. I didn't see that coming. But, it makes perfect sense. And, I'm so glad to know you're a HEA person! If this were to end badly, I don't think I could handle that. lol!

Thanks for a great chapter Kathie!


Author's Response:

I did love the Wonder Woman reference myself...fits right in there with Emmett wanting a cape...and a shoe phone!

TOTALLY HEA...I remember reading one where Bella ended up buried under some tree on the reservation...and then the Cullens all went to Voltura to stand in the sunshine....GAH!  It should have come with a warning!  LOL

Thanks, Val!


Reviewer: OperationNautilus (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 04:37 PM · On: Chapter 23~~Not Keeping the Secret~~

loved this chapter. especially Edward's reaction to Bella's news. Love the ending of this chapter ;-) Must be especially fun to write this.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much really IS fun to write....well, except for the time I stayed up until 3:30 in the morning writing...then had to get up at 7....GAH......I'm too old for kind of thing....LOL!

I will be writing this evening....and whipping out Chapter 36....!!!!


Reviewer: Lalaranya (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 03:54 PM · On: Chapter 23~~Not Keeping the Secret~~

omigod!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And i am in love with Edward-even more so as a human! *sigh* boys in books are always better... Anyways, this is absolutely brilliant!!!!!!!! Tell your daughters they r lucky to have a fantastic Mum! :D

Author's Response:

Thank you so much, Lalaranya, for that enthusiastic review!

I do tell my girls all the time how lucky they are to have me... ;)

I've just uploaded the next chapter...hopefully it will be up soon!


Reviewer: cherry (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 01:26 PM · On: Chapter 23~~Not Keeping the Secret~~

more more more baby!

Author's Response:

Thanks, cherry!

I'll be getting the next chapter up least into the line-up....hopefully you won't have to wait long...

Thanks for the pretty stars too!


Reviewer: smisa (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 11:47 AM · On: Chapter 23~~Not Keeping the Secret~~

great chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks, smisa!  I appreciate the review...


Reviewer: roserose61 (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 11:46 AM · On: Chapter 23~~Not Keeping the Secret~~

I loved it! Thank you for a great story. I can't wait for the next chapter! Please don't make me wait too long...............

Author's Response:

Thanks, rose!  I'm so happy that you are enjoying it!  I'll get the next chapter in the line-up this morning...

I appreciate your comments...and STARS...very much!


Reviewer: mandilm14 (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 11:39 AM · On: Prologue and Chapter 1... Blood Singer

I like that they are older, they act older too.  I hate when fanfics have them as adults, but they act like they're 12.

Author's Response:

I hear you...I did advance their ages just a bit...they are all still late teens/early 20's...

Ah, fan can play with things likes ages!

Hope you enjoy the rest of the story...and thanks so much for the lovely stars!


Reviewer: cullenobsession (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 11:10 AM · On: Chapter 23~~Not Keeping the Secret~~

Great chapter!  The whole story is great. 

Author's Response:

Thanks, cullenobsession!  I'm glad that you are enjoying it!


Reviewer: AMayes (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 08:03 AM · On: Chapter 23~~Not Keeping the Secret~~

Great chapter as usual!  I love that Edward isn't at all afraid of Bella or her family.

I also like the sweetness of their courtship.  It's very 1800s (which is a good thing!)

I wonder what Alice is calling about? 

Thanks for a great read!

Author's Response:

Thanks Darlin!  Yes, very 1800...unlike YOUR story!!!  Wooo....HOT!

Thanks for the review!


Reviewer: emma austin (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 07:49 AM · On: Chapter 23~~Not Keeping the Secret~~

I looved the twenty questions. I'm not mathy so I'm not even guessing at the number but I love where I think this is going. Please update soon. 

Author's Response:

I keep hoping that I counted the questions correctly!  I had totally screwed up Bella's age in earlier chapters...finally got THAT straightened out!

Thanks for reading!


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