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Reviewer: Lalaranya (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 24~~Anticipation~~

AWWW!!!im sitting here with this big goofy grin on my face coz thats just so sweet!!!!!!!!! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Author's Response:

I'm so happy that I could make you smile! 

Thanks for reading, Lalaranya!


Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 05:39 PM · On: Chapter 24~~Anticipation~~

That was a great chapter! I just started reading your story and I love it!!!!! Can't wait to see what happens next!!!!!!

Author's Response:

I'm so glad that you found Guarding Edward, banlc!  AND that you are enjoying it...

Thanks for reading!


Reviewer: ForbiddenFyre (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 03:10 PM · On: Chapter 24~~Anticipation~~

Ahhhhh, yeah!!!! Finally, they have both admitted that they love each other!!! I Am So Happy!!! Anyhoo, love your story and that was a great update. I hope that you have Edward change in the end. Either by Carlisle or Bella are my best guesses if you decide to change him!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much, ForbiddenFyre!  I do love that they've admitted how they feel...and it only took HOW many chapters?  LOL!

Hmmmm...changes....Bella or Carlisle?  Hmmmmm....they have to get beyond the visitors first!

That chapter is already in the line-up...and I hope you enjoy that one too! 

Thanks for reading...and those sparkly stars!


Reviewer: dh_director (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 09:46 PM · On: Chapter 3~~Face to Face~~

Your story is a very interesting twist on the original. However, you use the word "all" too much at the end of sentences. Also, all caps is not needed unless it is incredibly important. Good job!

Author's Response:


Thanks for reading, was kind of you to leave your thoughts.


Reviewer: weirdstar007 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 12~~His Girl Friday~~

One her mothers and and the other scent is laurens maybe?

Author's Response:

Excellent guess, weirdstar007!  Hope you've clicked your way to the answer by now... ;)

Thanks for reading!


Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 12:52 AM · On: Chapter 24~~Anticipation~~

Fantastic as always --- I got a little misty when Edward proclaimed his love for Bella. Can't wait to see who the visitors are!!!

Author's Response:

*Misty*?  Oh, that's nice!

And I'll take a *Fantastic* too!

Ah, the visitors...there's fun...and GROWLING involved!

Thanks for reading, Eidelweiss...


Reviewer: jacobishot (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 12:34 AM · On: Prologue and Chapter 1... Blood Singer

haha nice to know! not missing him too much but i wouldn't knock him back!

Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 12:17 AM · On: Chapter 24~~Anticipation~~

It's great that you had Alice fill Edward in on a few things - and that Edward has now declared himself to Bella - now they can get on with the smooching hehe :)

Visitors? hmm... as long as they don't mess with B&E's next step (yet) .. maybe Jess and the baby? lol

Author's Response:

They will be getting into some MORE kissing soon!

Ah, the visitors may just want to get into the middle of BxE's next step....uh oh!

Jess is a good guess, but she hasn't had the baby yet...

Thanks for reading, Daylen!


Reviewer: jacobishot (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 11:18 PM · On: Chapter 24~~Anticipation~~


Author's Response:

Thank you so much, jacobishot....So, are you missing Jacob in my story?  He's making an appearance in Chapter 36...!!!


Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 07:30 PM · On: Chapter 24~~Anticipation~~


Author's Response:

Ahhhhh....thank you Sherylb!  I was particularly fond of this one too....that Edward is just so sweet!

Thanks for reading...and the lovely stars!


Reviewer: mjbabe58 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 24~~Anticipation~~

Another wonderful chapter! that was so cute, i simply adore fluff! hahaha, mysterious visitors? Hmmm.... Volturi? Another vampire? MICHAEL JACKSON! no wait, that's my dream.... anyways, that was adorable, sweet sweet eddie, overprotective Bella, i love it when the rolls switch! Keep up the wonderful work, and don't worry, my oyfriend thinks he's funny too, (rolls eyes) we all have those problems! Amazing work!


Author's Response:

LOL...yes, our significant others....thinking they are FUNNY!!!

Good guesses!  We'll see soon just who arrives!

I do love that sweet Eddie...and overprotective's fun seeing them in slightly skewed positions...

Thanks for reading!


Reviewer: smisa (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 05:15 PM · On: Chapter 24~~Anticipation~~

yeah!  about time.  great chapter!

Author's Response:

LOL....yes, it has taken them many chapters to reach this point...but it's only been a short time that they've actually known each other.  Not quite love at first bite, um, sight!  But close...they have had a LOT of intense times and situations though...that has certainly brought them together...

And, besides...they HAVE to be together...LOL!

Thanks for reading, smisa!


Reviewer: OperationNautilus (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 04:53 PM · On: Chapter 24~~Anticipation~~

I loved this chapter esoecially the ending where Edward declares his love for Bella. Don't know who the visitor could be. Perhaps a "Jacob"-character? Probably not.

Great work on this chapter. Like that Bella doesn't seem to hate the idea of Edward becoming a vampire as much as Edward does in the original storyline.

Author's Response:

Ah, thanks ON!  Good guess on who is coming...there's actually going to be FIVE visitors....does that help? Oh, wait, techinically...EIGHT VISITORS!

Yes, Bella doesn't quite hate the idea, but then Carlisle has raised her to believe that she is NOT a soulless monster...whereas SM's Edward kept thinking he was without a soul.  She never made him face that if HE was without a soul, so were the rest of his family.  He didn't consider them to be monsters...just himself...a bit hypocritical of him I always thought!

Thanks so much for the review...and lovely stars!



Reviewer: fabandfriendly (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 04:11 PM · On: Chapter 24~~Anticipation~~

omg please not the volturi i hope not great story

Author's Response:

So?  That's one vote for NO visitors....!!!!

Gosh, that still leaves so many *fun* visitors....!!!!

Thanks for reading and reviewing, fabandfriendly!


Reviewer: nothing_is_as_it_seems (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 02:59 PM · On: Chapter 24~~Anticipation~~

WOW! yay finnally hee hee - wonder who will visit....hmmmmmm...... :O JAMES' COVEN?!! omg no!! u CANNOT leave us hanging like that, even if u r an awesomenness author (i know i made that word up but still!) Ten stars!


Author's Response:

Ah...visitors...just who could it be?  That's one good guess...that would be mean, though, wouldn't it?

I'll be getting the next chapter up into the line-up today...but my beta won't be back until later in the least I'm leaving you on a nice happy note!

Thanks for the review and lovely stars, NIAIS!


Reviewer: cherry (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 02:27 PM · On: Chapter 24~~Anticipation~~

Love this! That wasss so sweeet!

Author's Response:

Thanks Cherry!  I like sweet...some angst coming though... ;)


Reviewer: HeavenDust (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 02:16 PM · On: Chapter 24~~Anticipation~~

Awwwwwwwww.......!! I'm feeling so warm and fuzzy now, thanks to you. :) Now THAT was an unexceptional update. You can tell I love happy endings, and these two are really well on their way, if not there already!

*happy sigh* Now let's see what will happen next. Personally, I'm curious about Edward's transformation, or more specifically, what sets it off. Write more? Thank you so much!

Author's Response:

*Warm and Fuzzy*....just what I was shooting for!  I love happy endings too!

Ah, is there a transformation in Edward's future?  Hmmmm....have to give that some thought!  ;)

What would set such a thing off?  I can think of a couple of things...Mwhahaha!

Thanks for the lovely review, Heavendust!


Reviewer: kejce (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 12:36 PM · On: Chapter 24~~Anticipation~~


They are still stuck on the island. Just because you already know what happens does't mean you can tell. =P

Such a good chapter. I love Alice and Jasper. *sigh* I love your portrayal of them both.

Yay for love being in the air!

Okay, I have a cold, so that's the best review you are getting. My brain is mush right now.

Author's Response:

Hey, they are stuck on an the middle of the WILD SEAS.... ;)  Surrounded by water...wild water....high seas...

Ugh, a cold?  Not's some pixel chicken soup....

I love Alice and Jasper too!  Maybe I need to do a story with them next time....lots of Jasper scenes....sigh....

Get better soon!



Reviewer: twilightfan1969 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 12:33 PM · On: Chapter 24~~Anticipation~~

love it sweet ending to this chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks twilightfan!  I thought they needed a bit of their visitors won't be sweet at all...


Reviewer: mmmaman (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 12:24 PM · On: Chapter 13~~Taken~~

Hi! I just want to say I just love reading this story. Your writing flows so smoothly that its such a pleasure to read!


Not to mention it fantastic! Keep up the work!

Author's Response:

Oh...thank you so much!  Always good to hear that my writing flows well...I worry about that sometimes...

Glad you enjoyed *Taken*...and didn't think it tooooo mean of me...LOL!


Reviewer: aylag (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 10:50 AM · On: Chapter 24~~Anticipation~~

That was wonderful! I am so proud of Edward for saying it first. I love Alice and her want to interfere but the family restraining her. I laughed out loud at Edward's dream...can totally picture Emmett chasing:) Thanks for the update!

Author's Response:

Thanks, aylag...I was proud of him going first too!  Ah, little Alice, trying to push things least Jasper distracted her for a short time...

Yes, Emmett and the bear....he really would have enjoyed that!

Thanks, again....


Reviewer: mmmaman (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 10:29 AM · On: Chapter 6 ~~I Love Him, He's MINE~~

This is one sick person... You nailed, she sure is freaky..


Good job and Thanks for the chapter

Author's Response:

LOL...scares my family that I *nailed* her perspective!  It was actually quite freeing!  And fun, so much fun, to write...

You are very welcome for these chapters!


Reviewer: valelf (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 10:29 AM · On: Chapter 24~~Anticipation~~

Kathie, are you trying to kill me or just drive me completely insane? Now I can't get the idea of an hour or two alone with Jasper out of my head! Not that it's a bad thing, but still!

Edward told her! YAY! That was so sweet and the perfect way to end the chapter! I loved it!

I still need to check out kejce's fic and I hope to do that this weekend. I have been reading Across the Years and I love that one! I haven't seen The Lake House, and honestly I really had no desire to until I started reading this fic. Now I really want to watch it.

Thanks for another amazing chapter!


Author's Response:

You'd like a couple of hours with Jasper?  Hmmmm....the things that could happen..... ;)

Yes, he was all ready for her to make her case, but then it just seemed right for HIM to go first...

You'd LOVE The Lake House...then you could picture both Keanu AND Rob...very sigh worthy!

Thanks, again, Val!


Reviewer: mmmaman (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 10:06 AM · On: Chapter 3~~Face to Face~~

OOO >_< i can't wait to see what happens! Will sparks fly i wonder?

Author's Response:

LOL...there will be sparks...I just hope no blood shed!


Reviewer: mmmaman (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 09:48 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Choices

Great... and entertaining

Author's Response:

Thanks for checking the story out...lots more NEXT buttons for you to click!  Hope you continue to enjoy it....


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