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Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 12:33 AM · On: Chapter 25~~Company~~

COME ON........HASN'T EDWARD BEEN THROUGH ENOUGH WITHOUT THAT BITCH WHORE TANYA?? I JUST HATE HER CHARACTER!!!PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE!!!!!!PLEASE, DON'T LET EDWARD HAVE SEX WITH, OR KISS, OR REALLY, DO ANYTHING WITH TANYA!!!!!!HE AND BELLA ARE VIRGINS,  FOR GOD'S SAKE!!!!!!THEY ARE IN LOVE, AND NEED EACH OTHER.....NO ONE ELSE!!!I AM SERIOUSLY BEGGING YOU!!!!TANYA WITH EDWARD WOULD RUIN THE PURE NATURE OF THE LOVE BETWEEN EDWARD AND BELLA AND WOULD JUST RUIN THE STORY!!!!

HOW ABOUT ROSALIE BEATING UP (OR MAYBE RIPPING SOME LIMBS OFF OF, PULING SOME BIG CHUNKS OF HAIR OUT OF) TANYA? ROSALIE, LIKE THE REST OF THE FAMILY IS PROTECTIVE OF EDWARD, AND DOESN'T WANT TANYA TO DO THIS. BELLA CAN'T FIGHT OFF TANYA, SINCE SHE HAS TO KEEP EDWARD IN HER SHIELD. MAYBE BELLA WILL JUST HAVE TO HAVE NON-STOP SEX WITH EDWARD?? THAT WAY HE'LL BE REALLY CLOSE!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Hmmmm....you REALLY don't like Tanya, do you sherylb?

Have FAITH...the next chapter is so good, even if I do say so myself...and I do!

You had a huge point in YOUR review...one that I already thought of.... ;)

I'll get the next one in line today...and you really are going to love it...hope that makes you feel better?

Kathie

Reviewer: dh_director (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 10:07 PM · On: Chapter 17~~Trying to Focus~~

You totally copped out and went all Stephen King on us.



Author's Response:

LOL?  That was a cop out?

Really?

You know, or actually you don't, I've never read MISERY...or seen the movie.  I know Kathy Bates was in it, and the general gist of it...but the only Stephen King thing that I really liked was the mini series:  The Stand....and I didn't read that book either...

Your review made me laugh...

Kathie

Reviewer: Lalaranya (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 24~~Anticipation~~

AWWW!!!im sitting here with this big goofy grin on my face coz thats just so sweet!!!!!!!!! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D



Author's Response:

I'm so happy that I could make you smile! 

Thanks for reading, Lalaranya!

Kathie

Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 24~~Anticipation~~

That was a great chapter! I just started reading your story and I love it!!!!! Can't wait to see what happens next!!!!!!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad that you found Guarding Edward, banlc!  AND that you are enjoying it...

Thanks for reading!

Kathie

Reviewer: ForbiddenFyre (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 24~~Anticipation~~

Ahhhhh, yeah!!!! Finally, they have both admitted that they love each other!!! I Am So Happy!!! Anyhoo, love your story and that was a great update. I hope that you have Edward change in the end. Either by Carlisle or Bella are my best guesses if you decide to change him!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much, ForbiddenFyre!  I do love that they've admitted how they feel...and it only took HOW many chapters?  LOL!

Hmmmm...changes....Bella or Carlisle?  Hmmmmm....they have to get beyond the visitors first!

That chapter is already in the line-up...and I hope you enjoy that one too! 

Thanks for reading...and those sparkly stars!

Kathie

Reviewer: dh_director (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 04:46 PM · On: Chapter 3~~Face to Face~~

Your story is a very interesting twist on the original. However, you use the word "all" too much at the end of sentences. Also, all caps is not needed unless it is incredibly important. Good job!



Author's Response:

 

Thanks for reading, dh-director...it was kind of you to leave your thoughts.

Kathie

Reviewer: weirdstar007 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 09:40 AM · On: Chapter 12~~His Girl Friday~~


One her mothers and and the other scent is laurens maybe?



Author's Response:

Excellent guess, weirdstar007!  Hope you've clicked your way to the answer by now... ;)

Thanks for reading!

Kathie

Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 07:52 PM · On: Chapter 24~~Anticipation~~

Fantastic as always --- I got a little misty when Edward proclaimed his love for Bella. Can't wait to see who the visitors are!!!



Author's Response:

*Misty*?  Oh, that's nice!

And I'll take a *Fantastic* too!

Ah, the visitors...there's fun...and GROWLING involved!

Thanks for reading, Eidelweiss...

Kathie

Reviewer: jacobishot (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 07:34 PM · On: Prologue and Chapter 1... Blood Singer

haha nice to know! not missing him too much but i wouldn't knock him back!

Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 24~~Anticipation~~

It's great that you had Alice fill Edward in on a few things - and that Edward has now declared himself to Bella - now they can get on with the smooching hehe :)

Visitors? hmm... as long as they don't mess with B&E's next step (yet) .. maybe Jess and the baby? lol



Author's Response:

They will be getting into some MORE kissing soon!

Ah, the visitors may just want to get into the middle of BxE's next step....uh oh!

Jess is a good guess, but she hasn't had the baby yet...

Thanks for reading, Daylen!

Kathie

Reviewer: jacobishot (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 06:18 PM · On: Chapter 24~~Anticipation~~

i love this! AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME!!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much, jacobishot....So, are you missing Jacob in my story?  He's making an appearance in Chapter 36...!!!

Kathie

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 02:30 PM · On: Chapter 24~~Anticipation~~

TOTALLY LOVE THIS STORY....AND THIS CHAPTER, IN PARTICULAR!!!!



Author's Response:

Ahhhhh....thank you Sherylb!  I was particularly fond of this one too....that Edward is just so sweet!

Thanks for reading...and the lovely stars!

Kathie

Reviewer: mjbabe58 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 02:22 PM · On: Chapter 24~~Anticipation~~

Another wonderful chapter! that was so cute, i simply adore fluff! hahaha, mysterious visitors? Hmmm.... Volturi? Another vampire? MICHAEL JACKSON! no wait, that's my dream.... anyways, that was adorable, sweet sweet eddie, overprotective Bella, i love it when the rolls switch! Keep up the wonderful work, and don't worry, my oyfriend thinks he's funny too, (rolls eyes) we all have those problems! Amazing work!

MJ



Author's Response:

LOL...yes, our significant others....thinking they are FUNNY!!!

Good guesses!  We'll see soon just who arrives!

I do love that sweet Eddie...and overprotective Bella...it's fun seeing them in slightly skewed positions...

Thanks for reading!

Kathie

Reviewer: smisa (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 12:15 PM · On: Chapter 24~~Anticipation~~

yeah!  about time.  great chapter!



Author's Response:

LOL....yes, it has taken them many chapters to reach this point...but it's only been a short time that they've actually known each other.  Not quite love at first bite, um, sight!  But close...they have had a LOT of intense times and situations though...that has certainly brought them together...

And, besides...they HAVE to be together...LOL!

Thanks for reading, smisa!

Kathie

Reviewer: OperationNautilus (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 11:53 AM · On: Chapter 24~~Anticipation~~

I loved this chapter esoecially the ending where Edward declares his love for Bella. Don't know who the visitor could be. Perhaps a "Jacob"-character? Probably not.

Great work on this chapter. Like that Bella doesn't seem to hate the idea of Edward becoming a vampire as much as Edward does in the original storyline.



Author's Response:

Ah, thanks ON!  Good guess on who is coming...there's actually going to be FIVE visitors....does that help? Oh, wait, techinically...EIGHT VISITORS!

Yes, Bella doesn't quite hate the idea, but then Carlisle has raised her to believe that she is NOT a soulless monster...whereas SM's Edward kept thinking he was without a soul.  She never made him face that if HE was without a soul, so were the rest of his family.  He didn't consider them to be monsters...just himself...a bit hypocritical of him I always thought!

Thanks so much for the review...and lovely stars!

Kathie

 

Reviewer: fabandfriendly (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 11:11 AM · On: Chapter 24~~Anticipation~~

omg please not the volturi i hope not great story



Author's Response:

So?  That's one vote for NO volturi....as visitors....!!!!

Gosh, that still leaves so many *fun* visitors....!!!!

Thanks for reading and reviewing, fabandfriendly!

Kathie

Reviewer: nothing_is_as_it_seems (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 09:59 AM · On: Chapter 24~~Anticipation~~

WOW! yay finnally hee hee - wonder who will visit....hmmmmmm...... :O JAMES' COVEN?!! omg no!! u CANNOT leave us hanging like that, even if u r an awesomenness author (i know i made that word up but still!) Ten stars!

NIAIS



Author's Response:

Ah...visitors...just who could it be?  That's one good guess...that would be mean, though, wouldn't it?

I'll be getting the next chapter up into the line-up today...but my beta won't be back until later in the week...at least I'm leaving you on a nice happy note!

Thanks for the review and lovely stars, NIAIS!

Kathie

Reviewer: cherry (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 09:27 AM · On: Chapter 24~~Anticipation~~

Love this! That wasss so sweeet!



Author's Response:

Thanks Cherry!  I like sweet...some angst coming though... ;)

Kathie

Reviewer: HeavenDust (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 09:16 AM · On: Chapter 24~~Anticipation~~

Awwwwwwwww.......!! I'm feeling so warm and fuzzy now, thanks to you. :) Now THAT was an unexceptional update. You can tell I love happy endings, and these two are really well on their way, if not there already!

*happy sigh* Now let's see what will happen next. Personally, I'm curious about Edward's transformation, or more specifically, what sets it off. Write more? Thank you so much!



Author's Response:

*Warm and Fuzzy*....just what I was shooting for!  I love happy endings too!

Ah, is there a transformation in Edward's future?  Hmmmm....have to give that some thought!  ;)

What would set such a thing off?  I can think of a couple of things...Mwhahaha!

Thanks for the lovely review, Heavendust!

Kathie

Reviewer: kejce (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 07:36 AM · On: Chapter 24~~Anticipation~~

Kathie,

They are still stuck on the island. Just because you already know what happens does't mean you can tell. =P

Such a good chapter. I love Alice and Jasper. *sigh* I love your portrayal of them both.

Yay for love being in the air!

Okay, I have a cold, so that's the best review you are getting. My brain is mush right now.



Author's Response:

Hey, they are stuck on an ISLAND...in the middle of the WILD SEAS.... ;)  Surrounded by water...wild water....high seas...

Ugh, a cold?  Not good...here's some pixel chicken soup....

I love Alice and Jasper too!  Maybe I need to do a story with them next time....lots of Jasper scenes....sigh....

Get better soon!

Kathie

 

Reviewer: twilightfan1969 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 07:33 AM · On: Chapter 24~~Anticipation~~

love it sweet ending to this chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks twilightfan!  I thought they needed a bit of SWEET...as their visitors won't be sweet at all...

Kathie

Reviewer: mmmaman (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 07:24 AM · On: Chapter 13~~Taken~~

Hi! I just want to say I just love reading this story. Your writing flows so smoothly that its such a pleasure to read!

 

Not to mention it fantastic! Keep up the work!



Author's Response:

Oh...thank you so much!  Always good to hear that my writing flows well...I worry about that sometimes...

Glad you enjoyed *Taken*...and didn't think it tooooo mean of me...LOL!

Kathie

Reviewer: aylag (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 05:50 AM · On: Chapter 24~~Anticipation~~

That was wonderful! I am so proud of Edward for saying it first. I love Alice and her want to interfere but the family restraining her. I laughed out loud at Edward's dream...can totally picture Emmett chasing:) Thanks for the update!

Author's Response:

Thanks, aylag...I was proud of him going first too!  Ah, little Alice, trying to push things along...at least Jasper distracted her for a short time...

Yes, Emmett and the bear....he really would have enjoyed that!

Thanks, again....

Kathie

Reviewer: mmmaman (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 05:29 AM · On: Chapter 6 ~~I Love Him, He's MINE~~

This is one sick person... You nailed, she sure is freaky..

 

Good job and Thanks for the chapter



Author's Response:

LOL...scares my family that I *nailed* her perspective!  It was actually quite freeing!  And fun, so much fun, to write...

You are very welcome for these chapters!

Kathie

Reviewer: valelf (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 05:29 AM · On: Chapter 24~~Anticipation~~

Kathie, are you trying to kill me or just drive me completely insane? Now I can't get the idea of an hour or two alone with Jasper out of my head! Not that it's a bad thing, but still!

Edward told her! YAY! That was so sweet and the perfect way to end the chapter! I loved it!

I still need to check out kejce's fic and I hope to do that this weekend. I have been reading Across the Years and I love that one! I haven't seen The Lake House, and honestly I really had no desire to until I started reading this fic. Now I really want to watch it.

Thanks for another amazing chapter!

Val



Author's Response:

You'd like a couple of hours with Jasper?  Hmmmm....the things that could happen..... ;)

Yes, he was all ready for her to make her case, but then it just seemed right for HIM to go first...

You'd LOVE The Lake House...then you could picture both Keanu AND Rob...very sigh worthy!

Thanks, again, Val!

Kathie

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