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Reviewer: dh_director (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 02:01 PM · On: Chapter 25~~Company~~

Interesting twist with Tanya. Fan fiction always makes her a villain.



Author's Response:

Thank you, dh_director....for the review AND the stars...

Go read:  The Cold Wars, by gleena....there's a pretty nice Tanya in that one!

Kathie

Reviewer: SarahBella (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 11:38 AM · On: Chapter 25~~Company~~

Very good, I love this story!

I hope Rosalie kills Tanya this time...



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, SarahBella!  Rosalie may just have to do that!

I'm glad that you are still loving it...

The next chapter is in the lineup...hopefully it will be up soon!

Kathie

Reviewer: smileyirish14 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 02:30 AM · On: Chapter 25~~Company~~

Wow! That's pretty good! I think I might have come across a few about human Edward and this is the best! Believe me, I've searched far and wide for good stories to take up shortcut space and you have made it, lol. Keep going, it's gettin' to the good part!!! *whines nonstop 'til the next chapter's out*



Author's Response:

Thanks, smileyirish14!  Makes me happy to hear that you are enjoying it....

*Short cut space*? 

Hey, no whining!  LOL....I'm putting the next chapter up now, and hopefully it will validating quickly!

THanks, also, for the pretty stars!

Kathie

Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 05:49 PM · On: Prologue and Chapter 1... Blood Singer

Totally intrigued and loving this so far!!



Author's Response:

Thanks, barbarito....and I hope you enjoy the rest of the story!

Kathie

Reviewer: dancingblondie (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 05:46 PM · On: Chapter 25~~Company~~

im gonna kill the slut. oh & ur daughter is on my list for liking wolf boy.



Author's Response:

Yes, Tanya really does seem to bring out the worst feelings in people...maybe she's just misunderstood?

Nah, she's a witch! ;)

Does it help that my three daughters are really more into Seth?

Thanks so much for reading, dancingblondie!

Kathie

Reviewer: aylag (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 04:37 PM · On: Chapter 25~~Company~~

Your family is funny! I bet vampire Edward did imagine a wolfskin rug during the "keeping Bella warm in the tent" scene of the book:) I look forward to Alice, Emmett, Rosalie & Bella all taking on Tanya. Bring on the next chapter!

Author's Response:

LOL...I bet he thought of that too!  A nice fur rug to keep Bella warm right then...

Yes, the next chapter has a lot of fun scenes with our favorite characters....going to upload it now, and hopefully it won't take long to get here!

Thanks, aylag, for reading and the stars...

Kathie

Reviewer: BlueAngel145 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 04:37 PM · On: Chapter 25~~Company~~

omg lmao the this with jacob was too funny omg i couldnt breath.. love love your story cant wait for next chapter i want to cat fights with bella and tanya (I AWAY HATED HER FROM THE TWILIGHT BOOKS) or maybe you can have rose start some beff .. oh and i know something really sweet you can have in the story - tanya some how get edward away form bella, when she use her power it starts to work with edward but his love is so strong that he able to resiste the power (it can be like his sec power, like bella when she can only find him) he has like a really strong bod to her she his singer and all something like that.. i think it would be so sweet but that just me



Author's Response:

Cat fights?  That could be fun!  I think I know who would win...LOL!  Rosalie for sure!

I think that you will really enjoy my next chapter... ;)

Thanks for the pretty stars AND the review, BlueAngel145...

Kathie

Reviewer: AMayes (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 04:02 PM · On: Chapter 25~~Company~~

Ugh, Tanya!  Here's hoping she doesn't get what she wants! 

I know Bella has a gift, but I wish Edward would be one of those few who can throw off Tanya on his own...

Really great chapter, Kathie!  I absolutely loved it.  Bella and Edward's relationship is developing so nicely! 

 



Author's Response:

I hope she doesn't get what she wants either... ;)

Thanks, so much, Yuri, for your lovely review....now get to writing....!!!!!

Kathie

Reviewer: mjbabe58 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 01:14 PM · On: Chapter 25~~Company~~

Wondeful chapter, I was like WHOA! Personally, I despise Tanya in twilight, she needs to get a life! It made me smile when he tackled her with kisses and growled, which s quite the miracle because ive just been sobbing for days. Michael Jackson was a very close friend of mine, i was actually going to see him in london on the eigth and then he had gotten me a hotel room so him, myself, my brother, and his three children could hang out some, they are many ways like family to me. So when i heard of his death I was devestated. I just couldn't believe it, he had texted me the night before and it said, Catherine, you wouldn't believe how well everything is going, besides being sore everything is perfect! And then one day later he was dead, so thank you so much for making me smile a bit, I really need something to make me the least bit happy.



Author's Response:

I'm sorry for you loss...and I'm glad that I could make you smile, at least a little bit...

Take care,

Kathie

Reviewer: gpl993 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 01:06 PM · On: Chapter 25~~Company~~

Tanya better not try anything or Bella will go all vampire on her ass!  The gift of enticement?  That's not good.



Author's Response:

Quite an INTERESTING gift though, right?

Wish I could have seen her try and take Carlisle on...I bet Esme was SCARY!

Thanks for reading, gpl993!

Kathie

Reviewer: smisa (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 12:23 PM · On: Chapter 25~~Company~~

personally i thought the wolfskin rug idea was hysterical and priceless!  i literally laughed out loud!  your husband cracks me up!!  can't wait to see bella shut tanya down.  love your story!



Author's Response:

I am NOT telling my hubby what you said....his head is big enough already....LOLOL

I'm so happy that you are enjoying this...that's what makes me write more...

Thanks, smisa!

Kathie

Reviewer: valelf (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 12:13 PM · On: Chapter 25~~Company~~

Fantastic chapter Kathie! All kinds of serious lip action going on! Woo!

Okay, Tanya has to go. She needs to get her stawberry blonde butt back to Alaska ASAP! She's just at the front door and already she's driving me crazy! Then again, maybe getting her butt kicked by Bella would be therapeutic for her. Hmmm ...

I love the way Edward reassured Bella that he was not interested in Tanya.

Your family's additions to the author's notes are a riot! I love that they're all involved in this with you!

Thank you for another amazing chapter!

Val



Author's Response:

Yep, lots of lip action...although my 13 y/o says:  ICK, too much tongue!

So you want to join the "Dismember Tanya Club"?  There are quite a few of the people here who will join you!

Yes, the family...they really do think they are funny...I have to check my work carefully to make sure they don't add something in the middle of my chapters....Like JACOB suddenly appearing and sweeping Bella away!

Thanks, Val, I appreciate your support!

Kathie

Reviewer: HeavenDust (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 11:21 AM · On: Chapter 25~~Company~~

*LOL* Your family is funny! Downright hilarious in fact... I giggled at what your husband suggested. That's pretty creative. And your daughter is a Jacob fan, isn't she? Convert her! Ahaha....

Dun dun dun.... THANK GOD for Bella's gift. At least she knows in advance and will throw her shield out at all times, and Edward wouldn't go anywhere Tanya asked him to. I had a fleeting thought about having Edward being the only exceptional human who could resist Tanya's gift (Ha, take that, bitch!) but I guess it's just unrealistic. Hehehe... a girl can dream, right?

Why do I feel as thought Edward WILL be separated from Bella? *chills*

Marvelous update as usual, I never stopped loving your story!



Author's Response:

They ARE funny, aren't they?  They are actually more SETH fans...although Taylor Lautner is seriously making inroads in ALL of our thinking...

Yes, thankfully Bella has that great gift...but those girls were sneaky before...Poor Jasper!

Makes me so happy to hear that you are enjoying this story so much....really does make my day!

Thanks so much, HeavenDust!

Kathie

Reviewer: sizzlinghotcat (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 08:45 AM · On: Chapter 25~~Company~~

Nice twist. I am glad this hasn't ended yet. Great story!



Author's Response:

Thanks, sizzlinghotcat!  Glad you like this...and it definitely isn't done yet.  I've just finished chapter 35...and my youngest, who has read the whole thing (yes, she knows she's a lucky bug!) says:  FOUR MORE CHAPTERS...good to know that someone knows how many more!

Kathie

Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 08:23 AM · On: Chapter 25~~Company~~

As a non-Jacob fan, I am big on the whole making-out on his pelt thing. But thats just me. ; )

Should I be rightly scared for Edward? Tanya in ANY form is always scary! 

Great chapter! Loved them declaring their love at the beginning - ever so sweet.



Author's Response:

So you'd like the fur rug then?  ;)

Yes, Tanya really can be a downer in any story...but I'm hoping that you'll enjoy her in this...

Thanks for the stars, Eidelweiss!

Kathie

Reviewer: OperationNautilus (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 08:04 AM · On: Chapter 25~~Company~~

lol loved the anecdotes of your family. Love the Edward and Bella time in this chapter. Are you giving Tanya a new gift? 'Cause in the original storyline Edward has no problems resisting her. Or is just his mindreading preventing her gift from working?

Great work on this chapter. Looking forward to the next chapter and the more of the Denali coven.



Author's Response:

Thanks ON!  I thought about Tanya's gift...she and her sisters are the original succubae, and I thought I'd just ENHANCE her vampiric gifts a bit...like she needed it it...LOL

Yes, in SM's wonderful stories, he was more repelled by her than drawn in...but then he didn't really like hearing about ALL her other conquests either...that would certainly put a damper on things...

The next chapter has quite a bit of fun stuff in it...hope you will like it too!

Kathie

Reviewer: Nova (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 25~~Company~~

Your family is giving you ideas for comedic out takes. Thanks for sharing them, they are funny. Can't wait to see Bella protecting her man from Tanya. Should be interesting! Can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Thanks, Nova...yes, they have some good ideas, and mean ones too!

More coming soon!

Thanks, also, for the pretty stars!

Kathie

Reviewer: twilightfan1969 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 07:10 AM · On: Chapter 25~~Company~~

I love the Tanya idea!



Author's Response:

Glad you like it, twilightfan1969!

Kathie

Reviewer: Life Is Everything (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 06:54 AM · On: Chapter 25~~Company~~

This fic is awesome, and your family is too funny, haha.  Keep up the great work!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, Life is Everything!

Yes, my family is somewhat nuts...but they think I am too, so it's a good fit...

Kathie

Reviewer: rosela (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 05:29 AM · On: Chapter 25~~Company~~

i hope bella  kicks tanyas ass, and edward is  able to resist tanya...i dont like tanya...i wanna her to suffer a little....



Author's Response:

There are some good thoughts! 

Making Tanya suffer...that could be fun!

Thanks for reading, rosela!

Kathie

Reviewer: emma austin (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 03:26 AM · On: Chapter 25~~Company~~

Your family is hilarious and sound just like mine. Perhaps a guest author chapter in your next fanfic? But that would be encouraging them and you never know how that would go. 



Author's Response:

LOL...they HAVE volunteered to write with me...but they really hate Edward...good!  More for me...LOL  But you are right, I just don't know how well their helping me would work out!

Thanks for reading Emma Austin....

Kathie

Reviewer: Lalaranya (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 03:25 AM · On: Chapter 25~~Company~~

TANYA IS DEAD IN MY MIND IF SHE TRIES ANYTHING WITH EDWARD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!. in fact, she is already dead for teasing Bella about him-so dead. I hope Rosalie gets there soon to rip er head off seeing as i cant. i would very much enjoy tanys death...mwahahahahaaaaaaaa...!!!

anyways, this is amaziiiinnngggggggg!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Ah, another *I Hate Tanya Club Member*....good to know!  I think we could join this group with the Lauren/Lorena group!

Well, she IS already dead, if we want to get technical.... ;)

Thanks so much for your enthusiasm, Lalaranya!

Kathie

Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 01:19 AM · On: Chapter 25~~Company~~

haha I'm oddly (masochistically, if that's even a word?) looking forward to a human Edward dealing with Tanya :)

oh and the closing Author Note made me chuckle - especially liked the wolf rug idea lol (though I felt a twinge of guilt on Jake's behalf for laughing)!



Author's Response:

Ah, Daylen...have you been channeling my story?  ;)

A friend actually wrote a story from that tidbit that my husband mentioned....*The Fur Rug* is over at ffn.....

Thanks for reading!

BTW, I read your profile...you have lots of ideas, but don't carry them out?  Well, maybe we could chat sometime...I need another idea!

Kathie

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 01:16 AM · On: Chapter 25~~Company~~

HI AGAIN! I ALREADY LEFT YOU A LENGTHY REVIEW, BUT I'VE BEEN THINKING.....WHAT ABOUT EDWARD STARTS TO EXHIBIT A SUPER POWER WHILE HE IS STILL HUMAN??? MAYBE A SUPER RESISTANCE (TO TANYA'S SO-CALLED CHARMS) OR SOME KIND OF POWER WHERE HE IS ABLE TO PUSH AWAY OR HARM SOMEONE WHO IS THREATENING HIS LOVED ONES??? TANYA HAS ALREADY MADE A SNIDE REMARK TOWARDS BELLA- IT WON'T BE LONG BEFORE TANYA EITHER THREATENS OR AT LEAST INSULTS BELLA.....AND THEN TANYA IS SMASHED HARD AGAINST THE WALL OR THROWN OUT THE WINDOW BY EDWARD'S POWER?????  

ANYTHING YOU CAN DO TO HURT OR HUMILIATE TANYA WILL BE LOVELY TO READ!!! HOW ABOUT HER LOSING HER POWER????



Author's Response:

Ah....now that's a good idea too!

My beta is back online so hopefully the wait won't be long for you, so you can see where this is going...

HAVE FAITH!

Kathie

Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 01:00 AM · On: Chapter 25~~Company~~

Tanya needs to back off!!! Great chapter though. I'm so happy they said their I love you's.



Author's Response:

Yes, that Tanya...she really needs to get a clue...or a swift backhand to the jaw!

Don't worry....ALICE is on her way!

Thanks for reading, branlc!

Kathie

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