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Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 03:58 AM · On: Chapter 2
great chapter!!!
i cant wait for the next update!
Reviewer: Crises (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 03:50 AM · On: Chapter 2
I kind of like how they meet. It would be so like Edward to be that persistent.
I can't wait to see where you have them meeting up next! Update soon!
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 03:46 AM · On: Chapter 1
WHAT A GREAT FIRST CHAPTER!!
I REALLY LIKE IT!
Reviewer: meimei42 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 03:16 AM · On: Chapter 2
I am sooo hooked my Mr. Voodoo. Seriously!! I can just totally see him getting caught up in her life badly enough for her to rethink everything she is, all her rules and what she is doing. And I cant wait to watch it all unfold! Looking forward to the next chapter! You so have me hooked.
Reviewer: 3 little cullen boys (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 02:59 AM · On: Chapter 2
Wow, I wasn't sure I would like this story but it has me hooked, great work!
Reviewer: ashkan00dle (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 02:58 AM · On: Chapter 2
this is the funniest fuckin fanfic ever, i was dyin the whole time i read it. this is incredible. i'm adding it to my favorites, please, PLEASE, keep it coming.
Reviewer: Tookie83 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 02:53 AM · On: Chapter 2
im already loving this story and cracking up.
Reviewer: selene_romanov (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 02:48 AM · On: Chapter 2
love the set-up, can't wait for more.
Reviewer: lavish1 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 02:17 AM · On: Chapter 2
I really like this incarnation of Bella. Insecure, yet has a firm sense of boundaries for herself (of course, those are never going to last!). And Edward! What can I say, except that I kind imagine he smells like donuts too? Cinnamon, sugar and MAN!
Anyways, like the characters, enjoying the plot. Eager for next chapter- hope you have it written.
This is going to be fun!
Reviewer: makeitthis (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 02:14 AM · On: Chapter 2
this made me laugh out loud!
repeatedly.
cant wait for you to update.
x
Reviewer: Jadalulu (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 02:12 AM · On: Chapter 2
Pllllleeeeeeeeaaaaase finish!!!!!!!
Reviewer: twilightjie (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 01:46 AM · On: Chapter 2
this is an interesting start! i would also like to get to know mr. voodoo better.
Reviewer: childrenwith4legs (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 01:29 AM · On: Chapter 2
I'm starting to like this story. I love Bella's "Social Skills". And your A/N cracked me up. Thanks!
Reviewer: Dramatic (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 12:54 AM · On: Chapter 2
This story has real potential! I totally relate to Bella being somewhat of a 'night owl', i do my best thinking in the wee hours of the morning too.Edward's his usual gorgeous self! I beg of you though, dont make Bella fall for him to easily, it gets really tired thats all, id like to see her mess with him and make him work for it! Also this Voodoo Donuts place sounds abit like heaven i have to say! Wish we had one in Australia and close to my home! Anyway keep up the good work and update fast! :)
-Erin
Reviewer: Autumnmissa (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 12:05 PM · On: Chapter 1
hehehehe...you have a very interesting start and a hook that wants me to learn more. Details. Can she leave? Endentured servant? Was she forced to have sex in the locked room?...it was somewhat vague, I guess I am hopeful that she didn't. Has she done so willingly? I read fast so maybe I missed it. More plz.
Author's Response: no she didnt! Bella does have dignity! the next chapter has been in limbo for a week now....I wish someone would validate it and move on! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: JShay (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 08:58 AM · On: Chapter 1
OOoooh. This is very very intriguing. I want to read more. No suffering for you from me. Only "cudos" and a request for more.
Reviewer: cherry (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 01:00 PM · On: Chapter 1
hah, cant wai for next, what did e do?
Reviewer: Venus (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 08:39 AM · On: Chapter 1
Hey! I added this on ff.net to my story alert but you never updated, wtf? I hope to see the updates on here then! :P
Author's Response: Oh, their happening but I have been working on multiple chapters. trying half-hazardly to make sure everything is coherent and thre story was on the right track. I will update on ff and here so keep a weather eye out!
Thanks for the review and i will update very soon!
Trisky
Reviewer: blueeyedangel (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 07:33 AM · On: Chapter 1
its good. keep going, your doing a good job. i want to know more of what happens.
Author's Response: Thanks, love to hear that! All shall be revealed.....ooh...ahh...that was me working my voodoo magic.
Hmm.
That was strange.
Thanks for reviewin' and I will update soon!
Trisky
Reviewer: mayams (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 05:59 AM · On: Chapter 1
You got my curiosity going. She isn't happy with what she does, for her it seems to be the means to an end. A good end and far away from where she is now.
It would apear she had everything undercontrol, lost it, regained something through Jacob, of who we don't know her exact feelings for him right now. And now everthing is complicated because of Edward.
There are lots of questions in my mind and lots of things this story has to tell us. I hope you have the next chapter soon. This is good.!!!
Author's Response: The next chapter has been waiting for validation for over a week now. I am so not happy about that but cest la vive! Yeah, the first chapter is a taste of it all and I am so glad to hear you like it! Thanks for the review and hopefully the next update will be out soon!
Reviewer: MissAmi (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 05:48 AM · On: Chapter 1
Wow, I love this story! Please update!
Author's Response: thanks a mill! Tha next chapter has been waiting for validation for over a week now...so its out of my hands! hope you like whats coming!
Reviewer: kkroonie (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 05:41 AM · On: Chapter 1
Intriguing start...I can't wait to read more. This is definitely a new and original take on the Bella/Edward relationship. I will be eagrly awaiting an update!
Author's Response: Thanks! I dont even know where the idea came from....it just exploded onto the page! Update has been waiting for over a week in validation but hopefully they will spit it out soon!
Thanks again!
Reviewer: r-pks (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 05:34 AM · On: Chapter 1
Ah! This was absolutely amazing you gave such a great background description and though I must say i hate cliffhangers that one was pretty awesome. I usually don't like how Bella is all selling her body and stuff but whatever it's your story and I'll continue to read what ever you write. Update soon because my fondness towards your cliffhanger is quickly dissipating! Oh and please keep up the FANTASTIC writing?
Author's Response: Yay! Thanks! dont worry....I am not a big fan of bella selling her body either...that may be considered foreshadowing....Update has been waiting for validation for over a week now so hopefully it shouldnt be too much longer!
Reviewer: missam908 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 04:57 AM · On: Chapter 1
Hey this is pretty good. Cant wait till we have some bella/eddie interaction. What days will you post new chapters.
Reviewer: Andelin (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 03:40 AM · On: Chapter 1
Please, please, please... WRITE!!!
This is awesome. I can see it. I really like the style and the story sounds great. I'm bouncing in my chair, waiting for the next chapter...
Steph
Author's Response: dude... i have been bouncing in my seat just writing it! I am writing but the validation process is brutal. CH 2 has been waiting for a week now.....
Thanks for the stellar review and i hope you like whats coming!
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