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Reviewer: GaniCullen (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2010 08:31 PM · On: Chapter 3
OMG! I'm crazy for more! Please, update soon!
this story is PERFECT!
Reviewer: 53baby (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2009 09:02 PM · On: Chapter 3
Why does Edward ruin her life??
Oh the suspense!
Continue,
baby xx
Reviewer: superfay (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 08:34 AM · On: Chapter 3
please update soon, this is a really awesome story
xx
Reviewer: jordanmac (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 09:28 PM · On: Chapter 3
I love it...Bella running into Edward and waking up to him as her doctor. Keep up the good work.
Reviewer: RestfulDreams (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 09:19 AM · On: Chapter 3
ha! She barfed on Edward.
That is classic.
Reviewer: JohannaL (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 02:00 PM · On: Chapter 3
This is just getting better and better!
Can't wait the next chapter :)
Reviewer: cherry (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 07:23 AM · On: Chapter 3
bella is super funny here! I love how her character shows.. love the story, u did a great job!
Reviewer: GiveUsAKiss413 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 05:11 PM · On: Chapter 3
I am in love with this so far. I was like "stripper Bella? Sold."
but it's much more than that. And I love me some issues.
Reviewer: Burrberry Bugsy (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 02:46 PM · On: Chapter 3
Poor Bella, or rather, poor Edward for getting thrown up on! I really like where you're taking this so far and your writing style is great! So sorry that your husband is withholding from you, so I hope this short review helped you at least a little bit, lol! Looking forward to your next chapter! Keep up the great work and I hope you get your husband to forget all about the bet and give you some horizontal lovin'. LOL.
Reviewer: Burrberry Bugsy (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 2
LOL at the end of your author's note. "Shout for VD! Wait..um...hmm. That sounds bad." HAHAHA. I actually just looked up Voodoo Donuts and saw one shaped as a umm, penis! Crazy! Haha! This story has really intrigued me so far, so I'm off to read the third chapter =) I just wanted to comment on the author's note. Lol.
Reviewer: SarahBella (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 01:17 PM · On: Chapter 3
My husbank has the same habit of making bets that I don't agree to...
That said, I'm lovin' the story! Post again soon!
Reviewer: kismit1496 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 07:21 AM · On: Chapter 3
he's withholding? ok girl - go and take care of yourself in front of him - practically guaranteed he won't be able to stop himself! TMI??
Great chappie btw
Reviewer: meimei42 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 05:50 AM · On: Chapter 3
Screw TMI! LOL. Hope you get some soon.
oved this chapter. Oh BELLA. Hahah. Puking all over Dr. Sexy. I loved their little bit of banter. She is really good at pushing people away. Like, really good. I would have been put off by her by now. I like that shes got this suit of armor around her. I can't wait for the next update!
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 08:40 PM · On: Chapter 3
poor bella! how embarrassing!
great chapter!
update soon!
Reviewer: pacificgec (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 08:10 PM · On: Chapter 3
a tad tmi but possibly fuel for more stories, work it in, just keep writing!
Reviewer: penguinopus (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 06:11 PM · On: Chapter 3
OK - so I've never vomited on a crush, but I've done other embarassing things - oh wait - does throwing up in a date's car count? Poor Bella - and poor Edward, though as a doctor, he's probably had things like that happen - maybe not by a girl he's flirting with. Thanks for the quick update.
Reviewer: allaboutemward (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 05:33 PM · On: Chapter 3
I would be absolutely mortified if I vomitted on someone, let alone a cute guy. I just stumbled upon your story and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: AmeryMarie (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 3
Maybe you could channel all of that sexual frustration into Edward and Bella gettin' it on? Come on, be a pal. Hell, I would take a dream sequence. Short chapter, but to the point and revealed a lot. Nice.
Reviewer: lifesbliss (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 12:52 PM · On: Chapter 3
Well, I hope this review makes you feel better. I love this story. I don't usually start stories that are less than at least 10 chapters, but this one caught my eye and I really like it.
Reviewer: nwalto (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 12:38 PM · On: Chapter 3
Very funny. And BRAVO for promoting Portland!
Reviewer: JShay (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 12:19 PM · On: Chapter 3
So that was hillarious. I can't believe she just threw up on him :) I always love Dr. Edward Cullen. He makes the best Dr. Ever. I love this story. Also funny that fate (aka author) decided to intervene and make their paths cross again so soon :) I love it. Great story. Can't wait for more.
Oh and WTF?! Why the hell would your husband do that? Doesn't make any sense. That's normally what women do. (Not that I'm an expert my marriage is rocky at best we're more like room mates than husband and wife) But still what is the man thinking.
Anywho the story is awesome. Keep your head up and get some sexy lingerie and just parade around the house :) (Just a suggestion may not be a good one)
Reviewer: VivianDarkbloom23 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 12:01 PM · On: Chapter 3
Oh god, not witholding! You poor thing!
I love this story, I really do. And I want a Voodoo Donuts to pop up right by my apartment. And I want you to keep writing and posting, because I can't wait to see where this is going :)
Reviewer: Steelerfan (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 11:10 AM · On: Chapter 3
that sucks about no sex but good chapter
Reviewer: cutekat (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 10:30 AM · On: Chapter 3
OMG, that was such a great chapter - Bella is just too funcking funny for her own well-being... ;P heheh... Well, love these first three chapters and can't wait to read on and see what Edward thinks of Bella's occupation and how she presumably will get out of it. Looking forward to the next chapters - very much so!!!!!! :)
Reviewer: Cherrie (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 3
oh god, how gross! love your story btw
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