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Reviewer: NiCullen76 (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 11:12 PM · On: Chapter 17:Izzy vs. The World

that was completely out of the blue.

Reviewer: lueree (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 10:55 PM · On: Chapter 17:Izzy vs. The World

awesome!! cant wait for the next one

Reviewer: ninachr (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 10:54 PM · On: Chapter 17:Izzy vs. The World

Hmmm...This is getting very interesting.. ;D Thanks for the really fast update. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: chrissy_tigger (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 10:52 PM · On: Chapter 17:Izzy vs. The World

omg...sooooo out of the fucking blue...next chapter asap ppppppllllllllleeeeeeeaaaaaasssssseeeeeee...lol

Reviewer: dh_director (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 10:46 PM · On: Chapter 17:Izzy vs. The World

Nah. I don't like this one. Very disjointed.



Author's Response:

Mmmm I'm sorry you didn't like it. Disjointed??? I don't really understand...could it be because a lot is revealed in this chapter???

Reviewer: slew201 (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 10:45 PM · On: Chapter 17:Izzy vs. The World

I totally wasnt expecting that!

Reviewer: TheSnowHasMelted (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 10:43 PM · On: Chapter 17:Izzy vs. The World

HOLY SHIT! i didnt see that one coming. Maybe the bit about victoria but not the whole wolf watch conspiracy thing. That was a totally unexpected. The next expected thing to happen would be for Izzy to turn into a vamp and be all badass with Eddie, but i hope it wont be as predictable as that. 

Any...way, srry for my rant, it was a awesome chapter! cant wait for the next!

Reviewer: msKuhlena (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 10:41 PM · On: Chapter 17:Izzy vs. The World

totally out of the blue. not sure if i can keep up with all the changes and shit.

Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 10:36 PM · On: Chapter 17:Izzy vs. The World

great twist of things!  DAMN ENDINGS OF CHAPTERS!!!!!!!  Update ASAP!!!!!  Surely...Alice will see this!  Now that the wolf is dead and all! 



Author's Response:

Lol...Alice can't see anything at the moment because of Izzy's werewolf pelt. And there is more than one wolf...

Reviewer: swingate (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 10:35 PM · On: Chapter 17:Izzy vs. The World

Love iiiiiiitttttt!  Thank you for updating so quickly, it is noce to keep the story flowing.

It is nice to dee that Izzy is slowly melting her facade around Edward.  I am hoping with all my heart that the pelt was not poor HOT Jacob!!!!



Author's Response:

LMAO no the pelt isn't Jacob. Jake is a shape shifter...the pelt is a werewolf pelt. The species is almost extinct due to Cauis. 

Reviewer: Tbagpretty (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 10:24 PM · On: Chapter 17:Izzy vs. The World

please please please write more soon!! Cant wait to find out what happens......

 

Reviewer: Bellinda (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 10:23 PM · On: Chapter 1

maybe the devil posses her .

Reviewer: twilight_lamb (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 10:19 PM · On: Chapter 17:Izzy vs. The World

So out of left field or blue..
I love this story...go bella. Edward is going to be pissed..

Reviewer: jenjan24 (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 10:17 PM · On: Chapter 17:Izzy vs. The World

OMG!!  I wasn't expecting that..that is for sure!!  I can't wait for the next chapter...

Reviewer: LilMoCullen (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 10:16 PM · On: Chapter 17:Izzy vs. The World

oh yeah this chapter was out of the blue. I cant wait for the next one :)

Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 10:15 PM · On: Chapter 17:Izzy vs. The World

I liked the chapter except the part where they kiss that was random to me. But I like the whole being watch after and victoria coming back, Did she come back because the animal pelt  was gone? any way looking forward to the next update.

Reviewer: twilight lover (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 10:11 PM · On: Chapter 17:Izzy vs. The World

was that completely unexpected? HELL YES!!! never would i have thought of victoria coming back or that her pals were secretly shape shifters watching her which explains why alice couldnt see her .... omg ... i cant believe it ... you have done it again ! I should be going to sleep now but couldnt wait to read you story so i did and now i am awake and going crazy for more ! please please update asap!!!!

ps the kiss was so HOT!!!

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 10:08 PM · On: Chapter 17:Izzy vs. The World

Great chapter. Victoria was completely unexpected!

Izzy was a little harsh and I hope the Cullen's find out what happened to Bella soon.

Please update soon?

Reviewer: rosela (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 10:07 PM · On: Chapter 17:Izzy vs. The World

no u cant left it there....need more.....

Reviewer: furious kitten (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 09:56 PM · On: Chapter 17:Izzy vs. The World

If the wolves were that present, why did Bella need that pelt to block Alice's visions?



Author's Response:

Okay

1) Izzy didn't know about the pack

2) The wolves were not in direct contact with Izzy...their desicions were based around her...no direct interaction

Hope that helps! If yo have nay more questions head to the thread!

Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 09:55 PM · On: Chapter 17:Izzy vs. The World

Holy shit. Wow. Totally took me by surprise there. First of all --- the kiss. Damn. Ok, that was enough. Then Victoria? I mean her appearance is never good. Then Carl is a shapeshifter? Holy fing crap. Well I am just shocked the hell out so keep it coming it has got to be good. Also, I am rooting for another steamy moment between Edward and Iz!

Reviewer: Minoy (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 09:46 PM · On: Chapter 17:Izzy vs. The World

Oh man oh man oh man!  It is getting SO GOOD!

Reviewer: EmmaSwan (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 09:42 PM · On: Chapter 17:Izzy vs. The World

Brilliant!

Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 09:40 PM · On: Chapter 17:Izzy vs. The World

yeah, wasn't expecting that at all, where will it go next? Can't wait to find out!

Reviewer: RoseArcadia (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 09:40 PM · On: Chapter 17:Izzy vs. The World

Damn!  Poor Izzy!  Poor Eddie!  Can't we get these kids together?!?!

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