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Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Anonymous) · Date: June 27, 2009 01:25 PM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...
YAAY!!! AWESOME!!! I know. I leave sucky reviews...:(
Reviewer: nanny (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 01:24 PM · On: Chapter 1
I Like this Bella, she gonna suprise the shit otta Edward just what he deserves
Update soon !!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 01:22 PM · On: Chapter 18:An Unexpected Visitor
ahhh!!! NEWBORNS!! hurry hurry write more!!! Need more!!
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 01:21 PM · On: Chapter 5: Family Reunion
Totally Bad ass. I can't wait until she lights into Edward. That will be soooo good.
Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 01:21 PM · On: Chapter 18:An Unexpected Visitor
Woohoo! Jake's here. I'm glad they're going to fight together and that Jake's not in love with Bella any longer; and Emmet's all grown up. That's so cute.
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Anonymous) · Date: June 27, 2009 01:15 PM · On: Chapter 9: Dying Again
HA!!!!
Reviewer: twilighter767 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 01:13 PM · On: Chapter 18:An Unexpected Visitor
love it love it!!!!!and i glad jacob isnt in love with bella/izzy!!!
update soon...im dieing for the next chapter!!
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Anonymous) · Date: June 27, 2009 01:13 PM · On: Chapter 8: Poor, Poor Edward Cullen
I just LOVE Emmett's obsessiveness with her name. Hehehee...
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 01:12 PM · On: Chapter 4: Bikes, Cars and Ugly Rugs!
I wondered where she got the cash. Poker player was clear. Whatelse? Is she a body guard or hitwoman? Either way I like it. The rug was a cleaver way to block Alice. I'm glad I stumbled upon your story.
Reviewer: hellojasi123 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 01:11 PM · On: Chapter 5: Family Reunion
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Reviewer: bnpatella (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 01:10 PM · On: Chapter 18:An Unexpected Visitor
this story just keeps getting better and better! HELL YEAH!
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 01:10 PM · On: Chapter 17:Izzy vs. The World
ahhh! what is going to happen I totally didn't expect this, is jacob going to show up? what happens next!!! tell me tell me tell me!!!! I want the next chapter please please please!!!!
Reviewer: cb2brown (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 01:07 PM · On: Chapter 18:An Unexpected Visitor
Great plot twist -- I love it.
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Anonymous) · Date: June 27, 2009 01:06 PM · On: Chapter 7:Welcome Home Bella, oops I mean Izzy!
Heheheheh....
Reviewer: 5rockstars (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 18:An Unexpected Visitor
thank you for the update! everything is getting good!!!
Reviewer: 5rockstars (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 18:An Unexpected Visitor
thank you for the update! everything is getting good!!!
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Anonymous) · Date: June 27, 2009 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 6:What the hell happened to Bell Swan
YAAY!!!!!!! I CANT WAITTT!!!
Reviewer: katmom (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 01:01 PM · On: Chapter 18:An Unexpected Visitor
Working together! Hoo Rah!!!!
Wow...that was intense...I loved that Rose was one of the first out of the house!
Thanks so much!!!!!
Kathie
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Anonymous) · Date: June 27, 2009 12:59 PM · On: Chapter 5: Family Reunion
Hehehe...GO BADDASSAA IZY!!!!!!!
Reviewer: LoveStoryFan (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 12:56 PM · On: Chapter 18:An Unexpected Visitor
I cannot wait to see what happens next. Thanks for the update
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Anonymous) · Date: June 27, 2009 12:54 PM · On: Chapter 4: Bikes, Cars and Ugly Rugs!
Ooooh.NICE ending.
Reviewer: hellojasi123 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 12:50 PM · On: Chapter 3: Scariest Place EVER!
GOD EMMETT SOUNDS FUCKING AMAZING, o srry i 4got dat dis stry is bout BELLA SWAN lol
Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 12:49 PM · On: Chapter 18:An Unexpected Visitor
is it terrible I am hoping they resolve this soon and we get back to Edward/Izzy? Great chapter! :)
Reviewer: Twilightlurrvver (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 12:48 PM · On: Chapter 18:An Unexpected Visitor
Hey, i love you story!!!
when you first sent this story to twilighted for validation, how many chapters had you already written???
I ask because i want to start writing a story and would like to know some stuff to help me get started :P
Author's Response: Hi! When I first wrote DDwtDH I wrote five chapters before submitting it but I had a general plot line written out so I would be halfway through and think 'Shit what do I do now?'. I know a lot of writers that write on a weekly basis without actually knowing where their going but have an end in mind. I cannot write like this,lol!
Having around five written out helped me stay on track so if I was having trouble with the story progressing I always had head start for my readers. If you want any help I'm totally here...just PM me and we'll take it from there :)
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Anonymous) · Date: June 27, 2009 12:46 PM · On: Chapter 3: Scariest Place EVER!
Hehehe. AWESOME!!! He should take her to Edwards...>:)
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