I love that you made the same thing happen (the bruises from BD) yet, since things have changed so drastically, Edward's reaction was very blase. lol.

I've always thought it'd be cute in this story if they were sleeping together and Izzy wanted Edward to call her Bella. ^^

but, I've loved this story for a LONG time, and I'm glad there's finally some B/E smut!

You are incredible! I love your story, it so much fun! I like Izzy, but I'm very interested if she will become vampire.

LOVE you. Have nice vacation:) 

So Eddie and Izzy are finally getting some... I did so hope that Izzy would have saved herself... it makes it all the better!

 

Love this story! I love her new name too. Izzy is seriosly bad. Her new look is almost a cool as her ride, and her new persona, seriously bitchy! Can't help but love it! I didn't realize how much I enjoyed this story until I tried to stop reading it... and couldn't.

Izzy is sexy, sly, devious, sexy and more strong, fiery, and captivating than a spitfire hellcat on roids!

Dont leave me hangin' tho!

Consider this favorited....Oh, wait...I ALREADY DID!!!

GO IZZY!!!!!

OME NOOOOOO!! I thought this was a romance(/lets-torture-edward). Pleeeeeeeease dont let it be a recap of eclipse... Me not liking. At all.

Ooooh, Sexy Bitch (feat. Akon) By David Guetta SO fits with Iz.

Awwww. Poor Eddie shouldnt hurt.... She betta not stuff this up beyond fix-ableness

AWESOME!

I hear you about the no pain when you loose your virginity.  I was happy you didn't go there, and the blood thing... I get tired of that in other stories.

I do hope you plan on changing Izzy's mind about being changed.. I just don't see much of a future with only one side of the couple aging...

Thanks for updating!  I love your fic!

 

Hot chapter! I'm interested to see how future chapters are going to play out with Izzy not wanting to become a vampire.

Aaaaand, Im reading the story AGAIN while I wait for updates. I love your story. Damn. I have an eyelash in my eye. Fuuuck. Ouch. Ah. Whatever.

I love the new chapter! It's about time that they gave it up! Ha ha!  I think it's awesome that they waited for each other and didn't get with anyone else, especially Izzy with her crazy ways.  I was pretty surprised though that when Edward found out that she was still a virgin that he just dropped it after that.  Even though Bella has changed so much, along with her name, I would still think there would have been more importance toward the subject.  I guess now that they've gotten back together, it's harder for me to accept their new personalities.  I mean, I love the badass Izzy and I love that Edward accepts her and loves her for who she is no matter what, and I love the fact that Edward has quit treating her like a naive little girl; however, the intense love that they always had for each other in the Twilight series is something that has always intrigued me and I'm sort of attached to it, so the blase attitudes they've developed in your story is a little difficult for me.  I'm not sure blase is the best discription, actually, because they obviously love each other very much and connect with each other after all this time and all the changes, but I guess I would expect that their first time together would have been more special or at least more significant than it was.  Having said that, the sex was very hot and I think you did an awesome job with your first lemons scene! One last comment to leave you with: I'm a bit shocked at Izzy's preference for staying human now.  Although, I understand her point of view, I just can't accept that they won't be together for eternity (especially the fact that she thinks Edward should die when she does).  Now having said that, it's actually quite romantic.  I hadn't thought of it in that way until I just wrote it.  Well, if nothing else, your story has really got me thinking!  I'm not much for analyzing what I read- I prefer to just enjoy it- but I've become emotionally involved with fan fiction stories, yours especially.  Well, now that I've practically written a novel myself- ha ha!!- I will leave you with this: 

You're a great writer with a great imagination and great characters! I am thoroughly enjoying this story and I can't wait for the next update!

p.s. Sorry about the length of this. I had more to say than I realized.

Author's Response:

LOL Don't ever apologise for length. I love it! I espescially enjoy the fact that I am making you analize this fic. Now onto the love thing...I totally get where your coming from. The love they experience in the books was so deep it was captivating. The reasons I tried to stray (not to far) from this concept is 1)They are different people now and as such the love has changed 2) I tried to make it that way but it didn't fit in with the storyline...they kept reverting back to their old characteristics which was something I didn't want to happen and 3) I wanted to step away from the mainstream of other fics. I know that some people don't like it and I am fine with that. This is my fic and that is your opinion...in saying that I love when people are truthful about what they like and dislike about the fic so thank you.

Also I didn't ant Edward to make a big deal about learning that this was her first time because she wouldn't want him too. Emoward is just not sexy to Izzy...major turn off. LOL!

As for Izzy not wanting to turn into a vampire once again I wanted to step away from the mainstream fics but also I want you to trust me as a writer...I know it's very hard. I'll let you know that we are only just over half way through so there is heaps to go...who knows what will happen!

Thank you!