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Reviewer: FayeDeadly (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 12:36 AM · On: Chapter 28:Limbo

Very well written, barely angtsy at all. More beautiful.

Reviewer: Srodrigues (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 12:29 AM · On: Chapter 28:Limbo

What the f@¥£???? WAY WAY TOO SHORT OF A CHAPTER!! Your killing me, but in an oh so good way!!!!! Waiting on pins and needles for next chapter!!!!

Reviewer: nofangsallowed (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 12:28 AM · On: Chapter 28:Limbo

Okay--was she changed?  So confused!  Update soon!  Please, with sprinkles!

Reviewer: sydneytwilightmum (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 12:26 AM · On: Chapter 28:Limbo

Awww...I love that they all had their individual good byes...very sweet....

Looking forward to where this story goes :-)

Reviewer: twilight_lamb (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 12:22 AM · On: Chapter 28:Limbo

I so trust you but tears are still flowing.... I so loved it......

Reviewer: Pandoras5thBox (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 12:22 AM · On: Chapter 28:Limbo


Reviewer: Melinda the Proud Bookworm (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 12:18 AM · On: Chapter 28:Limbo

I hope they found some way to change her......

Reviewer: amym9903 (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 12:17 AM · On: Chapter 1

Wow I really like a strong, tough Bella!! I think I'm gonna like this.  I've always said she should have made him sweat some after she went to get him.  I hated that she didn't think she deserved his love....this is good:)

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 11:58 PM · On: Chapter 28:Limbo

*Silent tears fall* Oh what alot of heart felt goodbyes...I cried the hardest with Alice...

A very emotional chapter for me...

Please update soon.

Reviewer: freesiagirl171 (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 11:56 PM · On: Chapter 28:Limbo


Reviewer: Bkwrm (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 11:52 PM · On: Chapter 28:Limbo

So... they're going to stand around with their thumbs up their asses and let her die to protect themselves? Wow.

Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 11:49 PM · On: Chapter 28:Limbo

OMG - WTF is going on!? You are wonderful and I missed you on your vacation and I'm SOOO glad you're back and posting and telling this completely awesome story. I check twilighted EVERY FREAKIN DAY hoping beyond hope that you've posted and I bounce a little ('kay, a lot) every time I see you have. You've created this super-fun world where Bella/Izzy has a spine and it's so very awesome to read and I absolutely love you!

Now, can I have more, please?! :)

Reviewer: amy miles (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 11:43 PM · On: Chapter 28:Limbo

Aww what the hell!

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 11:27 PM · On: Chapter 28:Limbo

waiting for the next chapter

Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 11:26 PM · On: Chapter 28:Limbo

When, when will you make it better? The tears spilling into my laptop may cause a system malfunction. Emmett's simple goodbye was pretty hard to take considering he usually makes me laugh. But the rest of the family started the tears flowing and I still cannot seem to stop. I would have thought that Edward would have had a longer goodbye but, I'm not sure I could have handled it anyway.

I hope the next chapter is already awaiting valudation so that we can stop crying. :(

Reviewer: Totoro (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2009 11:15 PM · On: Chapter 28:Limbo


Okay seriously though, I liked it :) Especially the whole thing with Jasper, that was cool.


Now what the hell are you playing at with the creepy voice??



Author's Response:

LOL! ...or should I say Muhahahahahaha! There are a lot more WTF moments to come before the big reveal my dearie. Should be fun having everyone guess what the hell is going on. I just love to screw with's my specialty!

Jasper is the man! What a rock...

Thannks Robin.


Reviewer: Lazairahel (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 11:08 PM · On: Chapter 28:Limbo

Beautiful!!  But hurry!  You can't leave us hanging there for long. Pleeeeaase!!

Reviewer: NenaTH (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 11:03 PM · On: Chapter 28:Limbo

someone bit her right :O ? ,, loved the chapter and cant wait for the next one!

Reviewer: Cedwardsgirl (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 11:03 PM · On: Chapter 28:Limbo

update asap!!!

Reviewer: Nannabell (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 11:01 PM · On: Chapter 28:Limbo

I didn't think tears were possible in this story, but you proved me wrong.  Gah, that ruined my eye makeup!   Wow..  That was emotional.  I can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 10:58 PM · On: Chapter 28:Limbo

im confused! are they going to change her? update soon please!

Reviewer: SpaCullen (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 10:49 PM · On: Chapter 28:Limbo

i hope it's soon!  that was heartbreaking!

Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 10:44 PM · On: Chapter 27:Izzy is Lost Forever

I will have to trust you because I was cursing Carlisle, Emmett and Edward for not thinking about changing her instead of taking her to the hospital. I went from tears to being pissed off for Izzy's impending death.

Great writing to make me go from one emotion to another so quickly.

Reviewer: jessjohnston10 (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 10:43 PM · On: Chapter 28:Limbo

I have loved this story since the start!! and I love it still!! Can not wait until the next chapter :) I think--little worried'1

Reviewer: Ryansmama04 (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 10:43 PM · On: Chapter 28:Limbo

Edward totally bit her didn't he..that is no seriously, sad but such a great chapter.

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