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Reviewer: smellyia (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2008 09:39 AM · On: Chapter 15: Jasper

i love your story. Thanks for sharing! Jasper losing it is great.

Reviewer: Lola Schatzi (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2008 03:35 AM · On: Chapter 15: Jasper

Yay! Are they going to move in together?

Reviewer: EvenstarEverlasting (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2008 02:52 AM · On: Chapter 15: Jasper

Eeeeeeeeeeeeeee! I'm so glad they're together finally! I officially love you! And I'm glad Jasper came around. I'm actually kind of glad that Edward didn't fight him back, cause that would have made him look worse in Jasper's eyes, I think. But why the whole "fade to black" with the sex thing? Are you taking lesson's from SMeyer? Lol, just kidding. I think your plot is better than some of hers, actually. I'm interested to see what other twists you throw in.

Reviewer: amblovestoread (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2008 01:09 AM · On: Chapter 15: Jasper

I had to laugh at how Jasper reacted to Edward's love for Bella. Great Chapter! So how many women has Edward been with?? What a man whore....LOL 

Reviewer: LeechLover (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2008 12:46 AM · On: Chapter 15: Jasper

You spoil us so!  Two chapters!  I love it!

Reviewer: The Cee Factor (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2008 12:38 AM · On: Chapter 15: Jasper

This story = love

Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2008 12:38 AM · On: Chapter 15: Jasper

I read this chapter and found myself chuckling at Jasper's reaction to Edward. I pictured what you wrote in my mind and was blown away. I love this story.

Reviewer: frumpy-v (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2008 12:05 AM · On: Chapter 15: Jasper

Jasper is such a hypocrite, but at least he apologized for it... :) So... will Edward stay with Bella?? He should!!! :)

Reviewer: rhea12 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2008 12:05 AM · On: Chapter 15: Jasper

well well well!!! who saw that coming?! lol. jasper needs to calm his ass down! glad the relationship is out in the open! looking forward to the first date!

Reviewer: briandelight (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2008 09:35 PM · On: Chapter 13: Ice and Snow

Oh my goodness. you can't do that! just get our hopes up after all this time and yank it all out from us by ending it there. although I do apreciate the good clifhanger. you must must must post soon. I couldn't tear myself away from my computer if I tried while I was reading this.

Reviewer: GinnyW (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2008 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 13: Ice and Snow

Such a lovely story. I'm glad that I began reading it when I did. They finally got past their communication problems. Simply, wonderful. I look forward to your next update when you are able.

Reviewer: Kelly (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2008 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 13: Ice and Snow

Damn that Edward is sexy!

Awesome chapter!

Reviewer: melferd (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2008 05:39 PM · On: Chapter 13: Ice and Snow

***throws confetti in the air*****

WooHoo!!!!!!

They can be taught!!!!

 

I can haz smut now, plez??????? 

Reviewer: LeechLover (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2008 01:28 PM · On: Chapter 13: Ice and Snow

Oh trust me I'm just going to stare at the last paragraph for the next week.  All is forgiven!

Reviewer: CallistoLexx (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2008 12:19 PM · On: Chapter 13: Ice and Snow

Awwww....

Reviewer: Imwiththevampiresofcourse (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2008 12:14 PM · On: Chapter 13: Ice and Snow

Please tell me the update will be about their night together! Don't leave us hanging.

Reviewer: manyafandom (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2008 06:53 AM · On: Chapter 13: Ice and Snow

Awesome, finally what we have been waiting for. Alice is a sneaky little pixie!!

Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2008 05:19 AM · On: Chapter 13: Ice and Snow

YAY!!!!That was incredible!! I am so glad that he told her that he loved her!! Cannot wait for the next update!!

Reviewer: Melba87 (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2008 04:51 AM · On: Chapter 13: Ice and Snow

Oh Glorious Day!!  My soul sings for you.  Thank you for ending my torture.  Thank you. Thank you. Thank you.

I feel like sunlight has been restored to the earth, after a very long period of darkness.  Edward was lovely.  Thank you! 

 

Reviewer: bbtasha (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2008 11:57 PM · On: Chapter 13: Ice and Snow

YAY!!!!!

Reviewer: rhea12 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2008 11:36 PM · On: Chapter 13: Ice and Snow

INSANELY HAPPY!!! YO'VE GIVEN ME SUCH A PEACE OF MIND!!! YOU DID NOT DISAPPOINT!!!

Reviewer: wannabet1901 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2008 11:36 PM · On: Chapter 13: Ice and Snow

SQUEE!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: frumpy-v (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2008 11:17 PM · On: Chapter 13: Ice and Snow

YIPPPEEEEEEE!!!!! they're together!! FINALLY!! :)

Reviewer: ECyesplease (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2008 11:15 PM · On: Chapter 13: Ice and Snow

I am sooo happy! Thank you for this chapter! That was so sweet and such a better moment than the holiday inn would have been!

Reviewer: Jennmc (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2008 11:02 PM · On: Chapter 13: Ice and Snow

FINALLY!!!

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