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Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2008 10:11 AM · On: Chapter 24: The End
This isn't the end is it?? I'm totally confused by the chapter name...
Reviewer: Bre (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2008 06:09 PM · On: Chapter 24: The End
Oh CRAP! Why the sadness?! Why?! But it's so good, too, because I freaking adore where it's going, I love that Edward's moving out... okay, that's a lie, but it will definitely make things more interesting. And what the frak, Jacob! Damn that Jacob for ruining Bella! *lol* I can't wait to read more, please update soon! :D
Reviewer: falconcranelove (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2008 04:20 PM · On: Chapter 24: The End
Oh damn. This is getting extremely angsty... I love it!! I love the angst, so this is wonderful. (yeah, I'm crazy for loving angst lol) My heart's broken for Edward, but surprisingly not Bella. I'd still like to smack her. Great job, and I can't wait for more! :)
~Cat~
Reviewer: KayBressi (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2008 10:24 AM · On: Chapter 24: The End
oh boy, Need a new update. I need happy endings!
Reviewer: melferd (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2008 08:31 AM · On: Chapter 24: The End
Dear Lord, it never ceases to amaze me how people in love mess each other up while trying to love one another. One fights the urge to knock their heads together and yell, while waving ones' arms and pointing alot. Please put us out of their misery soon!!!
Reviewer: doreansmomma (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2008 08:13 AM · On: Chapter 24: The End
*sniffles* Ouch, this one hurt!
Reviewer: falconcranelove (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2008 06:14 AM · On: Chapter 23: Dazed and Confused
O.M.G! *sobs* WHY?! WHY BELLA?!?! My heart is broken for Edward right now, and I just want to smack Bella upside the head about a dozen times. The chapter was great, and I was all happy for Edward and smiling like an idiot, and then BAM! you pulled the rug out from underneath us all. DAMN! LOL Absolutely GREAT twist there! I wasn't expecting her to say no. WOW. I'm going to have to read the next chapter once I get to work, so expect that feedback later in the day. Loving this so much right now! Keep it coming! :D ~Cat~
Reviewer: beachgirl647 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2008 03:18 AM · On: Chapter 1: Flying
wow its so life like (like the descriptions and stuff) 1st class stuff...L O V E I t!!!
Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2008 11:56 PM · On: Chapter 24: The End
You really have a thing for cliffies huh? This one made my heart ache! Such a great story...heartache, happiness...just like real life. Thanks for sharing your talent with us!
Reviewer: obsessed92 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2008 11:48 PM · On: Chapter 24: The End
whoa!!! WHAT DO YOU MEAN THE END! i hope its just the chapter title!
Reviewer: bbtasha (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2008 11:23 PM · On: Chapter 24: The End
*sniff* He can't leave. This really sucks that he moved out.
Reviewer: myheartisbeatingsoftly (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2008 11:03 PM · On: Chapter 24: The End
AGHHHHH!!!! Noooo!!! Bella you stupid stupid person. ugh. so stubborn. Please update soon.
Reviewer: Edward Lives (Anonymous) · Date: October 12, 2008 09:50 PM · On: Chapter 23: Dazed and Confused
Seriously? :(
Reviewer: Bluebloods359 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2008 09:39 PM · On: Chapter 24: The End
You made me cry! Meanie!
Reviewer: Jaja (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2008 08:49 PM · On: Chapter 24: The End
awe, I hope their awkwardness ends soon! it was very well written though! -Jaaa
Reviewer: vos es meus vita (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2008 08:44 PM · On: Chapter 24: The End
NOOOO! Why must you torture me so?!
Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2008 08:30 PM · On: Chapter 24: The End
That's how you are ending it? Its a great story, but the end is kinda hanging...
Reviewer: Kas_Cullen (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2008 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 24: The End
Stupid, stupid woman! She needs therapy!
Good job, can't wait for more!
Reviewer: Kdb9mm (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2008 08:22 PM · On: Chapter 24: The End
This is sooo sad, why would he leave her? I hate this I want them to work everything out and be together.I hope that you are able to update soon because this is worse then the last cliffy you left us all with.
Reviewer: superstarrh (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2008 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 24: The End
Thanks for the update, even if it made me sad. Can't wait for more
Reviewer: BethanyKnight (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2008 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 24: The End
OMC. sadness. tears. I couldn't let Edward go if I had him. hell, I would have said yes to the proposal. she's crazy, but I get it.
Reviewer: not_done_baking (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2008 07:55 PM · On: Chapter 24: The End
Sad chapter, but well written. I'm assuming Jake will come back into the picture in a chapter or two?
Reviewer: jliane (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2008 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 24: The End
This update was perfect! It made my day :) Definitely wasn't expecting it, but I'm also not complaining!!! Poor Bella..
Reviewer: jenniesmith (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2008 07:37 PM · On: Chapter 24: The End
Okay... I don't like this Bella. I wish that she would get over herself and realize that Edward is not Jacob. Gah! Please hurry and help her realize! I am still loving it!
xoxo
jennie
Reviewer: Lena (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2008 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 21: Run Like Hell
I just don't see why she didn't go to the front desk and ask to have the lock reset, assuming they were the card kind.
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