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Reviews For Alice's Twilight
Reviewer: lilmissb (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 11:30 AM · On: 1. First Sight

It would be intresting to put a few more visions in this one! But great writting

Reviewer: Niphai (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 04:44 AM · On: 11. Observing

Yaaay, a new chapter <3 I'm in love with your story.. honestly xD
And don't worry about Midnight Sun stopping at a certain point, you should just write whatever you think will happen next with Alice!

And I would love to read the whole book from Alice' POV, if you're up for it.. xD

Reviewer: hush (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2010 03:55 PM · On: 11. Observing

lovely..........plz write soon

Reviewer: chel-cee (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2010 10:32 AM · On: 11. Observing

I really enjoyed alice's POV!!! please do moree :)

Reviewer: fgeragosian (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 01:55 PM · On: 11. Observing

I really liked what you did with this chapter and I loved that Edward let Alice watch Bella sleep too.  I also like that it was just Edward and Alice, it was nice to see how they interact without the rest of the family.  I think that you would do a great job with doing the entire book, and I would love to read it.  Either way, I am definitely looking forward to more of this story.

Reviewer: yurrrri (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 09:57 AM · On: 11. Observing

try try please please i think im jumping of happynes but only if u finish the story  please please u know i love your work  ireally hope u finish i be waiting i hope so love your amazing work  oxooxx

Reviewer: yurrrri (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 09:33 AM · On: 10. Stepping Forward

i love your story is so amazing

Reviewer: yurrrri (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 09:33 AM · On: 9. A Visit

loveit amazing

Reviewer: yurrrri (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 08:35 AM · On: 8. A Lullaby, I Suppose

loveit i really really  hope u finish this is so amazing 

Reviewer: yurrrri (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 08:15 AM · On: 7. It's Only a Matter of Time

loveit amazing im spechless

Reviewer: yurrrri (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 04:42 PM · On: 6. Longing

amazing work

Reviewer: yurrrri (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 04:19 PM · On: 5. The Truth Comes Out

loveit i really hope u finish this is amazing

Reviewer: yurrrri (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 03:48 PM · On: 4. The Crash

loveit just so amazing

Reviewer: yurrrri (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 12:01 PM · On: 3. Not "Yet"

loveit just amazing

Reviewer: yurrrri (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 10:45 AM · On: 2. Decisions

ok i loveit is so amazing i really hope u finish this story the more i read the more im in the story is writted so amazing im in awe of your work...

Reviewer: yurrrri (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 09:37 AM · On: 1. First Sight

i have to said i love it its so alice amazing work and yes please please finish the story it will be the first time the i read samething good and completed in apov you are a verry amazing writter  i read parts of the story i allways doit because i dont whant to waiste my time if is not good  but yours im amazed by all i really hope you will be able to finish this story i promise i will review a.s.a.p each chapter i read  but just to let you fell the love i have for your good work thank you  ........................ you are amazing

Reviewer: emmarose47 (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 02:39 AM · On: 2. Decisions

oh crap keep writing more fanfiction

Reviewer: ludo (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 11:07 PM · On: 11. Observing

Just found this story and read it in one go. I love the way Alice got to come with Edward to watch Bella sleep. So cute!

Reviewer: fleur24 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 10:28 PM · On: 11. Observing

I love how Edward allowed Aliceto come with him to watch Bella  sleeep andtalk in her sleep!

Reviewer: TyreeThomas (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 07:33 PM · On: 11. Observing

I liked it.  I liked that Alice got to go see  Bella sleep.  Keep going! 

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 05:45 PM · On: 11. Observing

Awesome chapter

Cute

Reviewer: AnnieBella (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 02:42 PM · On: 1. First Sight

I just found this .. I adore Alice.. Thanks for telling it from her side. First chapter was fan--tastic. Headed to read more....

Reviewer: Twivamp (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 01:27 PM · On: 11. Observing

I love to challenge myself so I would try to do the whole book, but that's just me. I enjoyed this chapter and how Alice was so excited and came along with Edward to watch Bella sleep. Can't wait for an update!

 

~Twivamp :)

Reviewer: fgeragosian (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 01:50 PM · On: 10. Stepping Forward

I loved the way that Alice informed Rosalie of Bella's knowledge of them and how she put Rosalie in her place.  I know that I have said it before, but I really do just love this story and how you have captured the Alice that I have come to know and love.

Can't wait till the next chapter!!

Reviewer: latekate (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 08:45 AM · On: 10. Stepping Forward

Wow. Nice one Alice! Great fic. I like it.

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