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Reviewer: cyndilu32 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 01:41 PM · On: Next Day
oooh...its getting good now....let Bella give Tanya a beat down....oh please let her beat her down....lol
Reviewer: Zoey0223 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 01:31 PM · On: Next Day
I love Bella when her mouth censor is off...
Reviewer: tmbilling20 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 01:29 PM · On: Next Day
What an awesome chapter! I can't believe Edward is so blind!! Looking forward to seeing the next chapter! Awesome job!
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Reviewer: jackiebtl (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 01:24 PM · On: Next Day
Edward is an ass...
Reviewer: twinklyspecialkag (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 01:15 PM · On: Next Day
Yay another great chapter:-) keep going!!!x
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 01:09 PM · On: Next Day
Well I did get to preread the chapter but I am still gonna review becasue it was great. You write a mean lemon and all the Tanya trashing was pure classic sarcastic bliss.
Reviewer: piperann_25 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 01:03 PM · On: Next Day
Hott damn go girl, hopefully this will wake rose up. If bella is now trying to fall asleep with emmett instead of edward
Reviewer: DeeZ750 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 12:59 PM · On: Next Day
Awww I wanted her to sleep with Edward again but she was right not feeling right sleeping with him.
Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 12:56 PM · On: Next Day
Good on Bella!
Reviewer: kaybrans (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 12:47 PM · On: Next Day
Wow !! What a day for Bella, I can't wait to hear what happens next................
Reviewer: Mrs Jasper Hale (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 12:41 PM · On: Next Day
Loved it. Great APO
Reviewer: LittleMissSwan (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 12:41 PM · On: Next Day
God Edward is so blind!!!
Reviewer: smeloise (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 12:33 PM · On: Next Day
edward really has got his head stuck up his ass. when sthe next chapter going to be? :)
Reviewer: branflake (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 05:07 PM · On: Barbeque
awwww i readed it to fast please hurry and uptade!!!!!!!
i am new to this story and forgot to reveiw LOVE the story!!!get a beta fast...(vjgm!!good one ask her)
Reviewer: Line (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 06:20 PM · On: Barbeque
When are you submiting the next chapter? This chapter was so funny! I want to read more!!!
Reviewer: wearefanpires (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 12:06 PM · On: Barbeque
AH! That was brilliant! I would have put a laxative in her food. That would have been funny.
I love this story! Please continue writing it! It's AMAZING and totally hilarious!
~wearefanpires
Reviewer: laced (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 03:56 AM · On: The Cullens
OMG I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH PLEASE HURRY I NEED MORE MAKE THAT TANYA GO AWAY AND I LOVE HOW BELLA IS ACTIVELY TRYING TO GETRID OF HER
Reviewer: jingles4thestorm (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 11:03 AM · On: Barbeque
crazy freaking intense
But are you telling me I have to wait 30 more chapters to see Edward profess his love to Bella? I don't know if I can handle that. Though I could see an epic 'stopping the ceremony' thing happening but man that is a lot to wait for.
Oh well I will still read every single moment of it!
Loved it!
Author's Response: No...not 30 more chapters...less than that.
Reviewer: mental_bella (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 04:59 AM · On: First Day
awww... that was so sweet!! It was written really really well. Good job. I like where the story is going!
Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 06:10 PM · On: Barbeque
great story.please update soon.
Reviewer: Phae (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 06:26 PM · On: Barbeque
Edward needs to start thinking with the brain that isn't in his shorts. Until then... more power to his sisters and Bella!
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 02:32 PM · On: Barbeque
There is a phrase my friends and I say when we don't like someone: Die Tanya Die! (Now we don't actually wish death to that person, but you get the point.)
I would like a chance to edit for you. I graduated a major in botany. I am editing one story on fanfiction - "The Lost Princess," and am the creater of approximatelt thirty banners by now. Um.. I think.
If nothing else check out my banners I would be happy to assist if you need one in the future. Here's the link:
http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=27&t=5683
Thanks Becca aka readergoof
Reviewer: chst (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 03:00 AM · On: Barbeque
Great! Bella's accident was typical her. She really should tell them about James.
Reviewer: MadiCullen (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 11:30 PM · On: Barbeque
wow. Im really enjoying this story so far. Thanks for a great read. Cant wait for more.
Reviewer: writertobe (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 08:52 PM · On: Barbeque
hmm, can't help feeling that you've made the Cullen girls as bitchy and nasty as the one they're trying to show up, which doesn't make them likable characters at all, sorry, just my feeling on the story. Edward is pretty dense for someone studying to be a doctor, I like your style for the most part, but can't feel much connection with Bella, and the way she thinks about those she doesn't like. Still, maybe she won't turn out to be as shallow and nasty as she seems to me at the moment.
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