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Reviewer: This Girl loves to Talk (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 11:51 AM · On: Victoria
intruiging...wondering where all this is leading.. i like maria and jaspers story here
Reviewer: CSmith (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 01:23 AM · On: Prologue
Oh wow. That was intense. So very different from anything I've read! Can't wait to read more!! Onto the next chapter!
Author's Response: Intense and different are some of my favorite words :)
Reviewer: aurora-cisne (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 02:22 PM · On: Epiphany
Hello :)
(I'm portuguese, and my English isn't realy good enough to write I hope you understand what I'm writting).
Since I know from the other reviews that you like to know your readers theory’s, I’m going to tell you mine. (I have a lot so I’m just going to number my favorite one's)
1º Bella is Charlie daughter, and when she was little she used to live in the reservation or close to it, so that way Leah have seen her before.
2º Bella's mother is/ was married with Phil, so when Bella lie about her name she get her last name from him.
3º Bella is after Edward's money but she is going to have feelings for him that will stop her to kill him, even if she just going to realize it too late.
4º It doesn't seem that it is the first time she's doing this (kill a man for money or whatever it is).
5º From the phone calls I can guess that she isn't alone in this plan, and the person she was speaking with looks like a man because of her answers. It seems that this "man" (who could be james, charlie or phil? I’m just guessing), isn’t very patient and have a timeline for this plan, and is afraid that she will falling in love with him.
6º I’m not sure if Renée truly abandon her, most of my theories made more sense if Bella was just lying about that too.
7º I don’t think that the way she appeared in his life was just a coincidence, I think she plan it because:
1) She hadn’t anything broken. (lucky? Maybe, maybe not).
2) What is best to catch a man who is a doctor than a beautiful damsel in distress that needed to be protected? The first instinct of a doctor is help, and if the patient is a beautiful woman and doctor a man, is to protect.
8º I really can fit the way she is hiding for someone but that someone she is hiding for is someone who has power, otherwise she could go at least to the hospital. Is she hiding from her mom? I doubt it, most probably, in my head of course, she is hiding from her last subject, or the person who is responsible for the way she stopped believing in romance.
I think I’m not making any sense, and creating a new storie that has nothing to do with the one your writing.
I love Lesbian Tanya, I don’t think she should be consider the ho in every history just because in the book she liked Edward, c’mon everyone would like to get a man like him, I don’t blame her for having good taste.
I never thought about Leah and Charlie together, is weird but not bad, just different and original.
Your writing is spotless, and even I can notice when a good story is well written.
I have a lot to say, but by this time you are cursing me for writing a long review but I have bad news for you, If your story continue to be so good like it had been you are going to hear from me again and my stupid theories.
I know you have read it lot and is rude for me to asking but, Can you please update this story more quickly? , sorry I couldn’t resist.
Thank you for reading my thoughts, if you didn’t I understand,
Ciao.
Author's Response: Wow, thank you for taking to the time to write such a thoughtful review. I can tell you that you were very warm on a lot of your theories, which ones and how right they are I won't say (obviously). I am sorry about the updating...I can't keep my attention on one thing for too long which ends up with longer time between updates. I won't promise one soon, because I suck too much for that. But thank you so much for your review. It means a lot to me :)
Reviewer: dancingblondie (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 05:47 AM · On: Prologue
ya i was crying cause like when I read these I always get Edward's emotions. it's quite odd considering I'm a girl.
~ B
Author's Response: Wow, I'm happy he has such an effect on you. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: riddiculusvampire (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 02:00 PM · On: Epiphany
hehe fairy XD
wow good chapter...yeah i really dont know if Bella is good or bad. I have no clue what to think of her. I love that even though Edward really likes her, he doesn't trust her. He's not just some sappy "oh she's absolutely perfect, there's nothing wrong..this beautiful creature would never lie!" kind of guy XD I like that he has some sense. Great story so far!
-riddiculusvampire
Author's Response: ....I'm starting to think I didn't pull off what I wanted to with this chapter....Oh well. Sure....sense....::cough::;)
I'm happy someone got the fairy joke! Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: Jime (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 08:28 PM · On: Epiphany
I am feeling bad for Edward already and I know it's just the beggining of it ;( Great update!!
Author's Response: Yea, 'fraid so. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: princesspeach (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 04:58 PM · On: A Long Night
"Edward is a surgeon because I love the idea of him in scrubs." Hey -- me too! ;)
My only (teeny, tiny) quibble: Why would anyone wonder how a DOCTOR, a surgeon, no less, is able to afford a huge, expensive house? It's just a strange question for someone to ask. I can see asking, say, a school teacher how they can possibly afford to live in a house like that, but if I was talking to a doctor...I realize that SOME doctors make relatively modest incomes, but I would think that most people, rightly or wrongly, assume that if someone is a doctor, unless they are just starting out, they make scads of money.
Author's Response: Yea, that is an odd question. Hm...;)
(I'm trying to play this off as purposeful because it can work that way...But I honestly didn't think they made that much money. I figured that was more a plastic surgeon or something. But thank you!)
Reviewer: riddiculusvampire (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 07:31 PM · On: Snooping Around
Hmm this story has got me thinking a lot on the characters...I really like how they are them but have your own little flare in them. Interesting stuff here! Gahh I want to know Bella's story! haha
-riddiculusvampire
Author's Response: Honestly? As I keep writing their characterizations seem a little flipped in my head. But I'm happy you see it this way, makes me happy. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: Jime (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 10:23 AM · On: Snooping Around
Great update! It’s really interesting to see a Bella that is not so goody two shoes this time around. Oh, and lesbian Tanya is my favorite kind as well lol
Author's Response: And the amazing part: My favorite Bella is a goody goody Bella...and a badass Edward. Where the hell did this story come from? And YAY! Lesbian Tanya! Thank you for your review!
Reviewer: CaraMia (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 09:42 AM · On: Snooping Around
is it just me or does everyone find it really hard to like bella here? I cant help but feel like shes the worst person in the world! And that character analysis they did with the book was brilliant. I just hope it doesnt come true.
Oh and thank you for changing it up with Tanya's role. I was really getting sick of everyone making tanya the "other women" or the bitch or the hoe.
LOVE IT!!
Author's Response: Unfortunately, in rich land, an act of charity is kind of hard to be understood. He's also around a whole lot of women, so for the most part, they won't be very understanding of the situation. Not that there isn't something to be suspicious of, but the women in Edward's life would have probably been suspicious even if Bella was who she says she is.
This story is complicated enough to start bringing in "other woman" Tanya. Anyway, I don't like having a character I don't like...does that make sense? If Edward did have another interest I would try to make it into someone I could actually see him liking. So I'm happy you like it.
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: moon920 (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 07:16 AM · On: Snooping Around
hmm. intriguing. keep posting your chapters, as i have this story in my favorites already.
Reviewer: CherBella (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 05:26 PM · On: Snooping Around
I haven't heard of Waltz Into Darkness, but clearly (from Bella's and Edward's discussion) it sounds like it mirrors what is happening with Bella & Edward. Edward just doesn't realize it yet. Nice touch.
Author's Response: Waltz Into Darkness is the book the movie that I based this story was based off of...Wow, kuddos to you if you have any idea what I just said. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: dancingblondie (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 03:03 PM · On: Prologue
this is from later in the story, correct? & if i am does tht mean tht Bella is a gold digger & she poisons Edward? cause now im crying. i'm serious.
~ B
Author's Response: Yes, we will see this later. I'm sorry, can't tell you what's going on. And crying? I've gotten a lot of anger at assumptions about Bella...this is my first tears. Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: riddiculusvampire (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 02:50 PM · On: Doubt
Hmm wow...I wonder why Bella is so distrusting. Very INteresting story so far!
-riddiculusvampire
Reviewer: cornel (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2009 12:26 PM · On: Prologue
This is a great story and I really like your writting style. I read all of the so far written chapters yesterday and now I need to read more but there's nothing there.
I wonder what Bella is trying to keep from Edward. At first I thought she was a reporter that had done this on purrpose to get close to him and be able to get a story out of him with all those intimate questions she asked. But then lying about the beat up. I mean Edward isn't stupid and he is a doctor.
Ok so when you say Edward "reads" people I don't suppose you mean he's got an issue like Alice.
I know you've just updated the story but hey I just found it so please bear with me when I ask for more.
Author's Response: You are allowed to asks for more. Unfortunately, it's the end of a semester for me so I can't promise more in a timely fashion. I'll try, but it's doubtful.
You are actually the first to bring up the reporter theory. Kudos to you. (I won't say if it's true or not but it's different which I like.(
I can tell you that no, Edward is just really good at reading people. It was hinted in Twilgiht that as a human Edward was good at reading people which is why as a vampire he was able to read minds. I'm trying to bring that over to here. His dad was also a lawyer so I figure he'd try to train his kid to not judge a book by it's cover and don't believe everything you hear and all that.
Thank you for your wonderful review! Come join us at the forum!
Reviewer: CherBella (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2009 06:52 AM · On: Doubt
I had to go back and read your reviews because I've been reading faithfully but couldn't remember if I'd ever reviewed.
I love how teasingly (is that a word? LOL) this story is unfolding...you hooked me with the cup of poison in the prologue, and you continue intriguing me with each chapter and keeps me coming back. Is it really poison? Is Bella evil? How will who Edward is play a role in the story? Can't wait to find it all out!
Reviewer: dreampills (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 01:29 PM · On: Doubt
...boo =(
Reviewer: dreampills (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 01:28 PM · On: Doubt
I really really hope that Bella isn't lying! I hope she isn't making the entire thing up just to get close to Edward's money and fame... It would break my heart!!
Update soon!
Author's Response: ...Yea, I dont' know how to respond to that. All I can say is I'm sorry in advance. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: Jime (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 09:14 AM · On: Doubt
And the plot thickens.....great update!!
Author's Response: Will continue to thicken! Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: Jime (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 02:32 PM · On: Isabel Dwyer
Isabel is definitely the curios type, isn't she? Great chapter!!
Author's Response: Hm...it would seem so. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: dreampills (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 02:06 PM · On: Isabel Dwyer
I loved the Britney Spears joke! =) I totally agree that Edward would lose his virginity to someone smart and sweet instead of trashy! Way to go
I hate casting anyone...I like to imagine characters as they are described. When an actor is cast, I can only think of the actor and not the character. Hope that made sense. Although I think Diane Lane is a good choice. The strong silent type. =)
Update soon!
Author's Response: I am so happy you liked the joke! I thought it was as corny as Edward thought it was but I stuck with it anyway. And thank you, I've always thought Angela was the most plausible choice for him in this type of case.
See, I love using an actor of some sort to figure out what someone looks like. It helps me a bunch. I have a great imagination for a lot of things, physical features on a character is not one of them. Diane Lane really seems like the popular choice now. Wow.
Thank you for your review!
Reviewer: This Girl loves to Talk (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 01:31 PM · On: Isabel Dwyer
what are bella's secrets?? ohhhh dont leave us hanging...
Author's Response: Leaving you hanging over a cliff, get used to it! Hehe, sorry, but Bella will have a whole bunch of secrets for the most part of the story, hope you still like it. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: Ruby_Wednesday (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 05:57 AM · On: Isabel Dwyer
well this has captivated me so far.
I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes!
Author's Response: I love seeing familiar names in my reviews :). Happy to hear you have been captivated! Thank you so much for your review!
Reviewer: meimei42 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 05:02 AM · On: Isabel Dwyer
This is a lovely beginning to the story. Bella is being so secreative, I cant wait to figure her out.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, happy to hear the you're enjoying it. I'd love to hear any theories you have have the story progressives. Thank you!
Reviewer: The_Reader (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 11:11 PM · On: The Night After
Susan Sarandon as Elizabeth Masen perhaps?
Hers was the first face that came to mind.
I look forward to seeing the story unravel :D
Author's Response: Ooo, I thought that before. Then she kind of became more Grandma in my head...A really good looking Grandma. Since back then you married early and had kids early...But yea. I know what you mean. Thank you for reviewing!
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