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Reviews For Maybe I'm Amazed
Reviewer: Shannon Carr (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 04:38 PM · On: Chapter 4

Absolutely lurvely.  My appetite is sated for a while. 

Maybe I can get back to writing my own story now.  :)  My readers aren't rabid, per se, but there's clamor. I just needed a few days to read. 

Thanks again!



Author's Response:

Yay, I'm glad it worked for you! But yes, go write more. I'm loving "Afraid to Dance". :)

Reviewer: psvtiger (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 02:41 PM · On: Chapter 4

Great chapter -- again :) You are 4 for 4 with me, and that's unusual.
"Ho. Lee. Shit" -- I love that you write in such a way that I can imagine the conversations as clearly as if I were actually a part of them. Looking forward to Ch.5!

Author's Response:

Four for four... go me! :P

No, seriously, thank you. :)

Reviewer: dancingblondie (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 02:06 PM · On: Chapter 4

DANG IT! I wanted lke some hawt dancing or something. *snaps finer* Oh well. Next time, maybe.



Author's Response:

Give them some time. ;-)

Reviewer: GiveUsAKiss413 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 02:02 PM · On: Chapter 1

He'd ask to watch.

 

I'm pretty like that. 

 

This is me... leaving you a review, and asking if I can pimp this when I post the next chapter of "Past and Present"?



Author's Response:

heee! I like you. You're fun. :D

No, you absolutely can NOT pimp this. What are you thinking, trying to encourage people to read this story? How dare you! Gawd, the nerve of some people!

**coughs** Um, yes, that would be lovely, actually. Thank you so much! :)

Reviewer: rosalieluv (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 01:57 PM · On: Chapter 4

I really enjoyed this chapter.  I can't wait to read more! 

Reviewer: Suelue123 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 01:56 PM · On: Chapter 4

Totally liking it.  Can't wait to see where you go next.

Reviewer: Rinna (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 01:47 PM · On: Chapter 4

Cute chapter!  Like that B&E finally caught up w/each other!!  Can't wait to read about their afternoon together :)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much - I'm glad you enjoyed it! :) The afternoon should be interesting. Oh yes, it should be...

Reviewer: GiveUsAKiss413 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 01:27 PM · On: Chapter 4

Haha, cheap drugs.

 

I just... I can't tell you how much fun this story is, and how much I like it, because I'm afraid that if I did, I'd end up just trying to... feel you up.

 

And it would be awkward.



Author's Response:

HAHAHAHA! Okay, you officially win for funniest review so far.

Glad you're enjoying the story. And thank you for not feeling me up. I think my hubby would be unimpressed if you pawed at me. (Or he'd ask to watch, I'm not sure which.) ;-)

Reviewer: LadyKai220 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 01:04 PM · On: Chapter 4

update soon k



Author's Response:

I'll try!

Reviewer: Purple83 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 1

really nice chapters! I can see this story line has great potential. Would love to see some updates asap :) good luck writing :)



Author's Response:

Aw, c'mon. I've posted four chapters in five days. I think that's pretty good! ;-)

Thank you, really. I'm glad you're enjoying it so far!

Reviewer: Regetta (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 4

Ooh, I like this story. Officially awesome :)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! :)

Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 12:07 PM · On: Chapter 4

OMG!!!! LOVED LOVED LOVED IT!!! Your story is Awesome and I love your Edward! The way Bella and Edward interacted was so cute and I loved the flashback of him teaching her how to play the guitar!! CANNOT wait for the next update!! Awesome job! Off to recommend your story to my friends!!



Author's Response:

Thank you, thank you, thank you! I'm so glad you're still enjoying it.

By all means, recommend away. The more readers, the better. ;-)

Reviewer: kismet510 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 12:06 PM · On: Chapter 4

I'm loving it. :)

This Bella is great. I like her a lot more than most Bellas that are weak and smitten and unable to be a normal person around Edward. So, I thank you for making a lovely character. :)

Oh. And update super fast please.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm so glad my Bella's going over as well as I'd hoped. I rather like her, so I'm glad I'm not alone. ;-)

Reviewer: Sarahcini (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 11:44 AM · On: Chapter 4

cuuuuuute



Author's Response:

Aren't they just? ;-)

Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 11:15 AM · On: Chapter 4

That was so sweet of Edward to start teaching Bella the guitar.  Maybe she'll have some more "lessons" on campus?  *wink wink*

Great chapter, I hope you have a chance to update soon.

xoxo Sarah



Author's Response:

Who knows what those two crazy kids might get up to.? ;-)

Glad you enjoyed!

Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 11:10 AM · On: Chapter 4

So glad that they reconnected.  I really like this Bella.  The flashbacks are great!

Can't wait to see what happens next!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like this Bella - I'm rather fond of her myself. :)

Reviewer: ImprintedForever (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 10:45 AM · On: Chapter 4

BSG ROCKS MY SOCKS... You are amazing for including it.



Author's Response:

BSG is, hands-down, one of the best shows ever to be on TV. So say we all! ;-)

Reviewer: cindysark (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 10:14 AM · On: Chapter 4

I had a goofy grin plastered on my face the entire time I was reading this chapter (mental note: don't read ridiculously fluffy and sweet fanfic in front of husband unless prepared to be teased for it). I love that they finally reconnected and I also love the flashbacks in each chapter that give us little tidbits of how they came to this point. Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

I know all about the pain of being mocked by the husband while reading/writing fanfic, believe me. **rolls eyes** Glad you enjoyed the chapter, though! :)

Reviewer: Kim620 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 10:12 AM · On: Chapter 4

Sweet chapter....a little history.....a little chemistry.  So glad that Edward asked her and didn't debate and talk himself out of it LOL. 



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it!

And just remember, he didn't ask on a date, just to hang out. Very important distinction. ;-)

Reviewer: wishfulthinking (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 10:07 AM · On: Chapter 4

Can't wait for the next chapter! ... but I will ... half-patiently.



Author's Response:

hahaha Thanks, I appreciate that. ;-)

Reviewer: April2460 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 10:06 AM · On: Chapter 4

More than enough to tide me over but please don't make me wait too terribly long. ;)



Author's Response:

I don't think it'll take me too long to get Ch 5 done. I'll get it up as soon as I can, though, I promise!

Reviewer: mystichearts (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 10:00 AM · On: Chapter 1

Great story!! I really like the flashbacks that you add into the story, it makes it very interesting. And I loved the Jasper/Picardo (not sure I spelled that right) part, that was hilarious! I can't wait until your next chapter! Adding this to favorites.

~Mystic



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! :)

That BSG/ST:TNG conversation wasn't even supposed to actually happen - I was just alluding to it in an earlier draft of the chapter. But I thought it could be an amusing addition. And the Jasper/Picard comparison... well, Bella insisted on including that, just to embarrass poor Alice. ;-) 

Reviewer: Bluenoserbaby (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 09:34 AM · On: Chapter 4

Thanks for a great chapter.



Author's Response:

You're welcome. :) I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 09:24 AM · On: Chapter 3

What a good way to greet someone you haven't seen in a while, I would love Edward to dance like that with me. ( in my dreams )



Author's Response:

You and me (and probably a few million other folks) both!

Reviewer: khhc (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 06:45 AM · On: Chapter 3

Im putting this in my favorites.  really good!



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

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