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Reviewer: Tookie83 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 12
wow sexual tension much? i loved it
Author's Response: Glad the UST is working for you! :)
Reviewer: Aggie (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 02:01 PM · On: Chapter 8
NOT REFLECTION ON YOUR WRITING>>>>
So he needs a game plan... really are guys that DUMB.. LOL hello his buddies ask her friends... Flash... So sorry this what my hubby's issue when we beining to date 17 years ago.
You got it so right that I lost my self. :-)
This is fun to read... I am hoping some day he gets the girl..
Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 01:44 PM · On: Chapter 12
OME! that was FREAKIN sexy as hell. I love your Edward. I am going to read this a few more times, I love it. Hava a great vacation and I'll be waiting for the update.
Author's Response: Glad it worked for you! :)
Reviewer: Aggie (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 01:13 PM · On: Chapter 7
Whoop!!!! you used my favorite saying
"FOR FUCK SAKE" it is so wonderful, can be used in so many ways.... Love the chapter. Poor Bella!
Takes me back to college days...
Reviewer: Julesnerd (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 12:54 PM · On: Chapter 1
If Edward doesn't make an honest to God move soon, I'm going to beat his ass!
Author's Response: Really, really soon, I promise! :)
Reviewer: Greenever (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 12:53 PM · On: Chapter 12
Good chapter...very sexy...have a great vacation!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! :)
Reviewer: kellybelle (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 12:42 PM · On: Chapter 12
Maybe I'm Addicted....loving the way your Bella and Edward play off of each other. Great stuff!
Author's Response: hahaha Nice! :D Thank you so much - I'm glad you like my versions of Bell and Edward, and the way they interact.
Reviewer: Aggie (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 6
Loved the ending... Happy that they did not have a drunk oops I fell down naked moment... I like the tension with out the brooding angst! This story feels very original!
Reviewer: Cocnnor11857 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 12:22 PM · On: Chapter 12
Awee..this chapter was so good!
i loved it
cant wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! :)
Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 12:14 PM · On: Chapter 12
WOW! Great update! The flirting, dancing, sexual tension, licking, sucking, kissing.... just so good!
Have a wonderful vacation! I will looking forward to the next chapter when you return!
Author's Response: Hee, I'm glad it all worked for you! :)
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 11:44 AM · On: Chapter 12
Wow, I love that things are really heating up between them. I can't wait for the eruption of passion! Enjoy your vacation! Then come back and write! I love this story so very much!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much - glad you're liking it! :)
Reviewer: Aggie (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 11:31 AM · On: Chapter 5
really enjoying your writing... Having a hard time stopping since I am at work. damn real life!
Love another chapter with Bella being a bit feisty! Poor Jake still an unrequited love for Bella.
Keep keep the story going!
Reviewer: stargrl678 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 11:24 AM · On: Chapter 12
I hope that you have fun on you vacation! but I really can't wait for you to get backa nd write some more fluffy goodness!! all I have to say in responce to this chap is TGFTS! (Thank God For Tequila Shots!)
Author's Response: Well, I'm glad I could at least leave you on a high point. ;-)
Reviewer: mandilm14 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 11:11 AM · On: Chapter 12
Whew, that is a whole lotta sexual tension. I'm ready for them to just start ripping each other's clothes off!
Author's Response: Glad the UST is working for you! :)
Reviewer: Heather U (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 10:50 AM · On: Chapter 12
I am really enjoying this story..it is hot!!!! hope to see an update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)
Reviewer: semper thine eye (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 10:45 AM · On: Chapter 12
Oooh I loved it! Sexy tequila shots! x
Author's Response: Glad you liked the shots! :)
Reviewer: Aggie (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 10:38 AM · On: Chapter 4
Whoop!!! a B/E moment with too much angst! I am sure that will change:-) LOL
as if...
- meg
Reviewer: Jace Nox (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 12
Uggh *bangs head on table* They have got to get together, this UST is killing me. Edward needs to man up and admit to Bella. Bella needs to grow some and jump Edward's bones and show him how it is to be with a woman.
Great writing!!! I can't wait for more,
Jace
Author's Response: The UST will just make it that much more fun with it finally becomes RST! ;-)
Reviewer: Solidae (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 10:22 AM · On: Chapter 12
FANFREAKINTASTIC! I heart this story so hard - I owe you a million plus reviews, but I have twilighted FAIL at home and can't review for some 'cookie' reason - so instead, I will make sure you know that this is one of my favorite stories, and I get sooooo excited when you update!
The UST is moving towards RST at a nice little pace! I can't wait for more!!! (but of course, I will...)
I hope you have a GREAT vacation - and thank you for this addictive little story!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :) And yes, trying to keep the pacing as realistic as possible, for a situation like theirs. It's not as easy as people seem to think to make the transition from friends to more than friends.
Reviewer: Sophia (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 10:21 AM · On: Chapter 12
hot .
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! :)
Reviewer: newtothis (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 09:42 AM · On: Chapter 12
oooo~ angsty! write you heart out after vaca!
Author's Response: I intend to. :)
Reviewer: Aggie (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 09:39 AM · On: Chapter 3
Ugh his sex hair! Damn that boy has great hair! Love the line
"...and hooked his thumb in one of her belt loops. Now that he had her, she wasnwasn’t going anywhere."
Made my heart flutter! meep ... Love the ending!!! God shedifficult!
Author's Response: Gotta love the sex hair. :) Glad you're liking the story!
Reviewer: Aggie (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 09:09 AM · On: Chapter 2
I am enjoying your writing. I have printed out the story, so I may not remember to give you all the reviews you deserve. The flash backs are great. I have not been reading AU-AH too much , but your summary interested me.
Love that Alice found Bella! totally dug that Bella's poem was about Edward. awwwwe the teenage / young adult angst. It is fun to escape to. Hope you keep the story going!
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 08:58 AM · On: Chapter 12
Whew, those tequila shots were pretty hot! Loved Edward's sneaky kiss strategy, lol. Hell, I would have snatched the lime from his mouth, spit it out, and attacked him!
Have an awesome vacation!
xoxo Sarah
Author's Response: Yeah, well, Bella's not quite that brave. Yet. Give her time. ;-) And thanks!
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 08:58 AM · On: Chapter 12
Now we are getting to the good stuff. Body shots off of Edward so fucking hott!!!!! Sign me up for that please and thank you. Heheheh!
Author's Response: There'll be more good stuff from here on in. ;-)
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