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Reviewer: EBF (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 05:02 AM · On: Chapter 15

awesome story update soon again

Author's Response:

Thanks so much! :)

Reviewer: m81170 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 04:50 AM · On: Chapter 2

I loved when Bella absolutely wailed on Edward and called him out in all his shit.

I've never really thought of this before, but I think this is the first fic I've ever read that mentioned somebody using Facebook. I don't know why that struck me as odd...

Reviewer: m81170 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 04:38 AM · On: Chapter 1

I think I'm going to love this! I can't wait to see what the future chapters look like but i'm glad that you've bridged the past between the present and past so we don't have a year-long wait between Edward and Bella getting reaquainted.

Admittedly, it was entirely weird to see Edward flirting with Alice and vice versa but I can live with it, lol.

Author's Response:

You're not the only one to think it was weird to see Edward flirting with Bella. I got a lot of comments about that. :P

Reviewer: PasQ (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 03:59 AM · On: Chapter 15

Loved the dresses!! Especially Bella's...really MY kind of dress...beautiful :D

I don't remember if I read it through the story and I really don't want to re-read everything, but for all intents and purposes, is Bella a virgin??  Though even if she's not I totally understand her reluctance to go so fast with Edward.

I'm still curious to know exactly what happened at prom...why Edward didn't show up?? I hope Bella gave him hell for that little stunt!! So sad :( Cos that's the kind of thing that you can't take back, even if you apologize profusely...

Loved this chapter!! Nice and long (TWSS) :P


Author's Response:

I had fun dress shopping for the girls. More fun than Bella had, at any rate. ;-) And I've never expressly said one way or another, but no, Bella's not a virgin. Might as well be, it's been so long for her, but no. All things prom will be revealed in the next chapter!

Thanks so much for taking the time to read & review! :)

Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 03:53 AM · On: Chapter 15

OH those two, I  love them. Way to go Bella make him work for it. I love this story, and can't wait for the next update.

Author's Response:

Glad you're still enjoying! :)

Reviewer: twilove1 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 03:52 AM · On: Chapter 15

You totally made my day with this great chapter. Your Edward always makes me sigh and Bella makes me smile. The prom sounds like such a terrible memory for Bella. I'm happy that she's mostly past it, but also glad that she's making sure Edward is sincere with his feelings. I, of course, believe in him 100% (yeah, no bias there), but it's still a good thing for them to to take things slow. 

Author's Response:

Bella's a smart girl - one bitten, twice shy, as the saying goes. But Edward *is* 100% sincere. He always was, he was just more of a tool in high school. ;-)

Reviewer: whoaacxh37 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 03:50 AM · On: Chapter 1

Only one thing to say: that was simply delicious(;

Reviewer: whynot (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 03:26 AM · On: Chapter 15

“You make things so difficult."

“I do, I really do,” she agreed,


HEY!  You quoted one of my favorite parts of 'Empire Strikes Back'!  Of course, Edward says Princess Leia's line and Bella says Han Solo's line, but...YAY!  I loved that part *sigh*


Now that you know what a total geek I am (too late!), I have to tell you that this is a very strong chapter.  Good dialogue, interesting characterizations..  Of course, you're torturing me with the Prom references, you evil woman!

Author's Response:

You? Win. Seriously, if we weren't each all ready married to wonderful men, I think I'd have to consider marrying you just for catching that. That's one of my favorite scenes in all the Star Wars movies, and I couldn't resist the nod when it fit so perfectly. :D

I think I'm killing everyone with the prom references, and it's totally unintentional!


Reviewer: SarahElizabeth (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 03:07 AM · On: Chapter 15

So sweet and romantic. Who wouldn't want Edward as their New Year's date? I'd die and go straight to Heaven....that I'm sure of.

Author's Response:

That makes two of us. ;-)

Reviewer: Hannah81 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 02:59 AM · On: Chapter 15

The chapter was amazing :)

The dresses were perfect! The pictures are exactly what I would expect each of them to wear :)

The little couch scene was smokin' hot!!!

Can't wait for more :)

Author's Response:

Thank you. Very glad it all met with your approval. :)

Reviewer: klim (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 02:34 AM · On: Chapter 15

very cute chapter.

Author's Response:

Thanks. Glad you enjoyed! :)

Reviewer: Suelue123 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 02:33 AM · On: Chapter 15

sweet chapter. 

Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Reviewer: alcg123 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 02:32 AM · On: Chapter 15

Is there gonna be more on why he stood her up for prom?  Cause thats a jerk thing to do!!!

Author's Response:

Yup! Edward gets his say in the next chapter. :)

Reviewer: Simonelecochon (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 02:30 AM · On: Chapter 15

Love the date and the makeout session in the hotel room. Bella has more will power to stop then I would.

Author's Response:

You and me both. ;-)

Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 02:09 AM · On: Chapter 15

Amazing amount of control those two have.  Very sweet and happy story.  Joy to read.  Would like to read more when you have something ready to post.

Author's Response:

They've got control, but it's a matter of for how much longer. ;-) Thank you for taking the time to read & review - I really appreciate it!

Reviewer: nerac (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 01:49 AM · On: Chapter 15

Wow!  Just... wow, what a first date!! :)  *fans self* 

Author's Response:

hee! Glad you approve!

Reviewer: TwilightAddict_NYC (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 01:20 AM · On: Chapter 15

Ohhh loved this chapter!  Sexy and sweet, my fave combo!  Please update soon! :-)

Author's Response:

Thanks so much. Glad you liked their New Year's Eve fun! :)

Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 01:17 AM · On: Chapter 15

Great chapter!!! Can't wait to see what's next

Author's Response:

Thanks so much! :)

Reviewer: KTCullen (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 01:12 AM · On: Chapter 15

I love these two!!  I'm so glad Bella's making Edward "work" for it, (Bella's no tramp, bb!) and can't wait to see what his devious plan entails. The girls grilling Bella for details was very reminded me of my college roommates.:)

I loved the first part of the prom flashback, and now I'm super curious as to what happened to make Edward ditch her...she obviously forgave him so it must have been a pretty legit reason.

I couldn't love this story more! You are a ROCK STAR!! Definately can't wait for more!

Author's Response:

Nope, Bella's definitely no tramp. She's no prude, but she's not about to hop into bed with anyone just for kicks - not even Eddie-boy. ;-) Thank you so much for reading!

Reviewer: esmie3 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 01:12 AM · On: Chapter 15

Good chapter. I'm glad that they stopped. It just makes the tension better. Thanks for the update :)

Author's Response:

Yeah, I can't have them get to the grand finale too soon. It'll ruin all my hard work of establishing the UST! ;-) Glad you enjoyed, though!

Reviewer: mopstyle (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 01:11 AM · On: Chapter 15

""Why," he nipped at her neck, "do you," he nuzzled the spot behind her ear, "have to be," his fingers danced lightly across her back, just above the bodice of her dress, "such a pain," his trailed lower, "in," and lower, "the," and lower, "ass?" His hand cupped her butt and gave a gentle, teasing squeeze."


Oh sweet mary, mother of god! That was FUCKING AWESOME!! lol I think I almost fainted.  I'm pretty sure I would have, if I were Bella. Damn, girl. I cannot wait for your lemons.


Sorry if this is the first time I've reviewed. I love your story. Feisty Bella. I work at a coffeeshop, and have for a long time. I find myself pretending now, that it's Edward I'm working with, instead of my emo coffee boys. It makes the day go by faster. I love my boys, but sheesh, none are quite as fuckable as your Edward. love

Author's Response:

hee! That bit was a fairly last-minute addition to the story, so I'm glad it worked! I'm also glad my Edward gives you workplace fantasy fodder. And never, ever apologize for reviewing - not if it's the first time or the 50th. Thank you for taking the time to comment! :)

Reviewer: dazzledinNY (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 01:11 AM · On: Chapter 15

aw! I love them!

Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm glad! :)

Reviewer: jajo (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 12:58 AM · On: Chapter 15

I love the drsses.  And I really enjoyed the almost sex scene.  Very hot.

Author's Response:

I had fun dress shopping for the girls, even if Bella didn't. ;-) And glad you liked the twist of citrus!

Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 12:53 AM · On: Chapter 15

WOW! Awesome Chap!

even the bit of sadness in it when Bella was thinking about when he ditched he at prom :S it fit but was terribly depressing.

I'm SO happy with how their first date went *yay*
If that was what they did on a first date, Shit i don't wanna see the 2nd and 3rd and 10th!! haha..well actually I DO! lol.
Cuz that shit was HOTTTTT!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! :D Poor Bella couldn't help but compare the two events, regardless of how differently they turned out. She got over it enough to have some fun with pretty, pretty Eddie, though, which is the important thing.

Reviewer: spanglemaker (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 12:46 AM · On: Chapter 15

Ah, I love your story. Such a great chapter and a fantastic semi-first date for them.

But seriously, you HAVE to tell us what the fuck happened at the prom!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much! And I promise - Edward will reveal the rest of the prom story in the next chapter. Bella was just setting the stage. :)

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