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Reviewer: bella1 (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2011 12:56 PM · On: Tied Together With A Smile
Reviewer: XxBloodPromisexX (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2010 12:21 PM · On: Tied Together With A Smile
hey this is really, really good i love it. Come back and post more!!!!
Reviewer: DezLMT (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 05:52 PM · On: Tied Together With A Smile
BOOOO! What do you you mean you're not doing any more hide and seek!? It was just starting to get good!! Maybe try just writing one story at a time, then you could hold your focus better cuz you wouldn't be trying to juggle more than one story line at a time. I feel teased lol, not that Bella and Edward were finally starting to get some where. Hope you hurry back around to it, now I gotta find something else to read
Reviewer: DezLMT (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 05:52 PM · On: Tied Together With A Smile
BOOOO! What do you you mean you're not doing any more hide and seek!? It was just starting to get good!! Maybe try just writing one story at a time, then you could hold your focus better cuz you wouldn't be trying to juggle more than one story line at a time. I feel teased lol, not that Bella and Edward were finally starting to get some where. Hope you hurry back around to it, now I gotta find something else to read
Reviewer: DezLMT (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 04:33 PM · On: Night Terrors
Good chapter, just having a hard time understanding how if Edward was right with her for the last dream and he can hear her thoughts in this story, why didn't he wake her up? And also curious, up to this point of the story do the Cullens know James, or of him? Or has Alice just seen him in her visions which means her and Edward both have seen what he looks like and know his gifts?
Reviewer: DezLMT (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 03:03 PM · On: Journal
edwarrrrrdddddd.....where are yoooooouuu?????
Reviewer: DezLMT (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 03:03 PM · On: Journal
edwarrrrrdddddd.....where are yoooooouuu?????
Reviewer: DezLMT (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 03:02 PM · On: Journal
edwarrrrrdddddd.....where are yoooooouuu?????
Reviewer: DezLMT (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 02:45 PM · On: The Emerald Necklace
not a bad story so far, cant wait for bella and edward to get things moving. But DAMN this bella cries A LOTTTT!!! Jeez. I get that her parents died, but yikes!
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 04:38 PM · On: Tied Together With A Smile
It's always sad to see stories put on hold, but that's better than just vanishing/stopping... I, for one, will hope that your muse for this tale returns at some point and you're able to find the words to wrap it up :)
In the meantime, we'll see a different story unfold :)
Reviewer: Stefan9 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2010 06:01 AM · On: Tied Together With A Smile
you should post the story, Just Breath, just by the few sentence you have posted, it got me intrigue
Reviewer: monica1981 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2010 10:43 AM · On: Tied Together With A Smile
I'm kinda sa that you;re not going any farther with this right now, but I understand. No one can control writers block.
Reviewer: Vampire_luva (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 10:21 AM · On: Stand By Me
u have to write Fated to be forever. i red the little bit that u posted and now i REALLY wanna read it!!!!!
Reviewer: where_the_books_live (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 05:41 AM · On: Fingerprint Bruises
Just found H&S and am truly enjoying it. For a first fic, you're doing a bang up job. Keep the chapters coming. I can't wait to see how it ends.
Reviewer: IrishLove (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 08:07 AM · On: Fingerprint Bruises
Great chapter! Loved the Bella and Edward scene. Hope you update soon!
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2010 12:51 AM · On: Fingerprint Bruises
Wow Emmett really flipped his lid didn't he. LoL...was glad that Alice and Jasper were able to hold Edward back. I am so excited about were you are taking this, ohhh I can't wait for the Cullen's to catch up with that sadistic SOB James.
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 06:13 PM · On: Fingerprint Bruises
Well I have to say I'm disappointed in Emmett, though I guess I can allow that the frustration over the years has got to him. I'm immensely relieved though that you've had Rosalie take him to task over his treatment of Bella.
Edward was just brilliantly supportive through the whole chapter, something that's always great to see.
I think B&E's little "private" moment in the hallway was the highlight of the chapter though (for me at least) :)
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 03:18 PM · On: Fingerprint Bruises
is james "possessing" emmett
Reviewer: kivacute (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 01:51 PM · On: Fingerprint Bruises
the whole edward and bella fluff is really cute!!! but seriously wahat the hell got into emmett???
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 12:53 PM · On: Fingerprint Bruises
Can't wait for the update, and the post of FTBF.
Reviewer: peygan (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 04:48 PM · On: Stand By Me
As usual this continues to be an awesome story I found the James and Bella chapter plain creepy but well done. Thank you for sharing your vision of the characters with us.
Reviewer: Saphie1990 (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 02:39 PM · On: Prologue: The Beginning of The End
Where was emmett during the night of the attack? If he is only a year older than bella then he was 8, soo why wasn't her at home?
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 02:19 PM · On: Stand By Me
I like that Bella's going to get a chance to really connect with Esme - and for her part I think she'll be torn between being the therapist and wanting to be more of a mother "figure" since Esme would never try to actually replace Renee.
As for the flash drive - yeah, I've lost a few major assignments once or twice because I didn't look after the stick :S I didn't have so much on paper the first time either :P
Looking forward to the next installment whenever you get a chance :)
Reviewer: kivacute (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 12:59 PM · On: Beautiful Nightmare
hey i've been looking for your story fated to be forever because it sounds great! have you posted it yet and if you have were can i find it?
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review. "Fated To Be Forever" hasn't been posted yet. I'm still working on it, and I recently lost all of my chapters, so it's going to be delayed a bit. But when I do post it here on Twilighted, I'll be sure to mention it in an author's notes on Hide And Seek.
Reviewer: kivacute (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 12:51 PM · On: Stand By Me
love this story i just read it all and i love it can't wait for more!
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