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Reviewer: Emmie_and_Jazzy (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Dreams
Oh, I hope you continue! I've been looking for a story like this. A well written one. This fills that! Please continue...when you can.
Reviewer: Quivering Quill (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 02:38 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Dreams
this is a great start, please write more!
Reviewer: anna14 (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Dreams
ugh wow those parents have problems!! loves this story so far! update soon plz god i just want to punch the dad grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr :P --{--@
Reviewer: Delicious Dreamer (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 01:12 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Dreams
wow. this is a wonder of a story. it invites people to read more and makes them really think.
im very curious to see what will happen next. how you will relay alice's life as a human and then vampire. already i see an interesting story line and creative writing.
i give this a nine. i would give it an eight. but being the guilty,me who thinsk to much. i cant bear to give anyone of such a talent any less.
dreamer.
Reviewer: margar (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 08:18 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Dreams
Your writing style is so beautiful! I am completely hooked after only one chapter. Please continue!!!
Reviewer: MrsDoctor (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 10:26 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Dreams
that was so good!!
Reviewer: Tayanna-Ushlee (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 02:31 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Dreams
Alice being abused? By her human father? Her mother not caring? I'm glad she can't remember her human life. I don't get how some parents can abuse a child they know can't stand up to them and a child that depends on them. It makes me sick. Alice needs to escape. Hopefully, Alice will get lucky with the people who're taking her away. They should take Cynthia too.I'm also happy that you are creative with Alice's beginning. I am liking your story. Update soon. xoxo-Tayanna-Ushlee
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