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Reviews For You Could Be Happy
Reviewer: IdontSparkle (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2013 05:05 PM · On: Collide

i hate where its going. she should have moved on. its so unfair that she gets stuck with him after all

Reviewer: cheese96 (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2013 10:44 AM · On: Never Think

I LOVE YOUR WRITING!! i THINK YOU PORTRAY JACOB PERFECTLY! iT'S LIKE i'M WATCHING A DAMN MOVIE!! YOURE AWESOME!!!

 

Reviewer: nebfan51 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2012 08:48 PM · On: Life in Technicolor

I liked your story.  Glad I found it!  Take care and thanks for sharing!!

Reviewer: Suzanne02 (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2012 07:38 PM · On: Life in Technicolor

10 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++  <3



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it! Thank you for reading this little story! It really means the world to me!

Reviewer: corriander (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2011 06:53 PM · On: War of My Heart

I want Bella's character to go away. And she's old enough for grad school?!? Ugh

Reviewer: corriander (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2011 06:44 PM · On: She's Out Of My Life

Forget that noise, i say Edward throws her the deuce again and hits Italy. She needs to grow up



Author's Response:

She really did, and I hope that she did by the end.

Thank you for leaving reviews. I really appreciate you letting me know your thoughts and reactions. :)

Reviewer: ita87 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2011 12:00 PM · On: The Beginning of the End


Reviewer: abk (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2011 12:45 PM · On: Life in Technicolor

wonderful,jus what i needed to relax this evening. abk



Author's Response:

So glad you liked it! Thank you for reading and leaving a review!

xo

jakeward

Reviewer: IzzaBella Marie (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2011 12:50 AM · On: Life in Technicolor

I was Up till 6am reading. I couldnt stop!! lots of emotions... I really love the "I hate you, I hate you, I hate you, I uh love you LOL I've totally been there...



Author's Response:

Six?? Seriously? Wow! I'm so glad you liked this one. The "I hate you's" ...sigh. Yeah, that was when I burst out crying writing it. You've been there, too? It's so...guh!

Thank you so much for reading this story. I'm beyond happy that you liked it!

Huge hugs!

jakeward

Reviewer: IzzaBella Marie (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2011 02:21 AM · On: Life in Technicolor

wow what a wonderful sad happy story... Ive stayed up all night reading it!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading it! You stayed up all night? Wow! I hope you liked it.

Thank you for leaving a review!

xo

jakeward

Reviewer: TLRichard05 (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2011 01:49 PM · On: Uninvited

omg..love growly edward :)



Author's Response:

He really is lovely when growly! ;)

 

xo

jakeward

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2011 06:09 PM · On: Life in Technicolor

Great Ending to a wonderful story.    I could see and feel the tension, especially in Edward.   Perfect ending!



Author's Response:

Yay! I'm so glad you liked it! He was quiet nervous asking her. I'm glad those emotions translated. I'm so happy you liked the ending!

Thank you so much for reading this little story!

xo,

jakeward

Reviewer: C9E (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2011 04:11 PM · On: Life in Technicolor

Loved it! I really like your writing style and I liked Bella standing up for herself throughout the fic. Please continue to update your RPFs as well!



Author's Response:

Thank you! Wow! Thank you for such kind words! Bella really did stand up for herself, at times I didn't think she would back down. ;)  Working on the RPF tonight, too.

Thank you so much for reading this little story!

xo,

jakeward

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2011 03:53 PM · On: Collide

Give in Bella...You know you want to....

Reviewer: djwolf55 (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2011 12:00 PM · On: Life in Technicolor

What a wonderful story!  Loved it!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm so glad you like it!

xo,

jakeward

Reviewer: rjcarreno (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2011 08:16 AM · On: Life in Technicolor

*Sniff* This story is over!

That was a fantastic ending. Something in the back of my mind was hoping Edward was going to propose to Bella in epilouge. I wasn't exspecting Bella's announcement that she was pregnant though. That's so wonderful! I'm so glad that not only Edward and Bella will be getting married but also be having a baby as well. :)

Loved the HEA you had for this story. :)

I'm so glad I finally gotten caught up on this story.

Thanks so much for this fic. Loved it!

And as always, I'm looking forward to more of "Behind The Lens", "The Bunny Tale", and "Happily Ever After". ;)

Author's Response:

Aw, yay! I couldn't leave them not at least engaged, could I? ;) Yup, that was hopefully a little surprise - her being pregnant. HEA was always the way to end this one.  I'm so glad you liked this one. And thank you so much for leaving a review. {hugs}

I will be working on those three in the next few days, too.

Huge hugs!

jakeward

Reviewer: rjcarreno (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2011 07:13 AM · On: Chasing Cars

Finally gotten caught up on this fic as well. LOL!!

Loved this chapter. :) Glad Edward and Bella are back together for good.

And I loved the love scene. It was perfect!

I'm kind of looking forward to the epi. LOL!! Looking forward to seeing how this story is going to end. And I'm not looking forward that it's ending. LOL!

And keep up the excellent job on your other fics. I love them all!

:)

Author's Response:

Thank you, sweetie! I'm so glad you like this one. Yeah, I'm glad they got here, too. Epi needs to be smoothed out and and should be posted soon! As to the others...I sure will try. :)

Hugs!!

jakeward

Reviewer: edward and jacob lover (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2011 02:20 PM · On: Chasing Cars

this story has taken me on an emotional ride, i mean i cried so many times. this was just such a beautiful story on love, heart, pain, friends, and forgiveness. i kno that your story has given someone the courage to forgive their spouse, no matter if they left or hurt them in any way. Great job on this story.



Author's Response:

Wow. Thank you so much for your thoughts and wonderful words. I can't lie - I did tear up when I read your review. I always wondered what NM would have been like if they were adults and that thought brought forth this story. If this story could give someone the courage to do that, that would be amazing. I'm beyond happy that you liked it as much as you did. Truly!!

Huge Hugs!

xoxo

jakeward

Reviewer: lain16 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2011 08:50 PM · On: Chasing Cars

i just sat and read all the chapters ,parts were hard to read but i glad they got back together looking forward to the epi



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading this one. Yeah, some parts were hard to write and reread. I was happy to write this last chapter befor the epi...it's they pay off for the pain, right? ;)

Thank you so much for reading and leaving a review!

xo

jakeward

Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2011 07:16 PM · On: Chasing Cars

well im glad they are complete!  keep the updates comming



Author's Response:

Me too! It was a long and hard road to get them here. Epilogue should be posted soon

xoxo

jakeward

Reviewer: SunnySRZ1 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2011 03:59 PM · On: Chasing Cars

Love your writing stlye and read all of your stuff...waiting patiently for the BTL update to see what you were tweeting about lol...



Author's Response:

Aw!! Thank you so much!! I hope the BTL chapter answered the tweeting comments. LOL

xoxo

jakeward

Reviewer: akaalice (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2011 01:26 PM · On: Chasing Cars

You did this story justice. I'm so glad Bella didn't just fall into his arms and take him back. He hurt her tremendously and she needed to heal. He needed to recognize her pain and forgive himself. He was hurt too, just as much as Bella and she needed to recognize that and forgive him. She also needed to acknowledge the fact that she was now deliberately huring him. You gave them time to heal and forgive and get to know each other as friends first. Thank you so much for allowing them that time. Beautiful chapter.

Author's Response:

Wow. Thank you! I really never wanted Bella to forgive as quickly as she did in the books, but as she was a teen...it made "sense." Since this was the grown-up Bella, there was just no way that was going to happen. ;) They really did need to see what pain the other felt - as raw and real as it could be. Oh yes, they did need get to know each other again.

Thank you so very much for your wonderful and kind comments!

xoxo

jakeward

Reviewer: djwolf55 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2011 07:11 AM · On: Chasing Cars

LOVED IT!



Author's Response:

So glad! Thank you!!

xoxo

jakeward

Reviewer: Screaming Mimi (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2011 05:18 AM · On: Chasing Cars

Well that certainly sounds like it was worth the wait for those two. Woo hoo!



Author's Response:

Hee hee! I think we all waited a long time for that. ;)

xo

jakeward

Reviewer: Beignet (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2011 03:29 AM · On: Chasing Cars

amazing isn't strong a enough word.



Author's Response:

Wow. Thank you. It's been a long road and I thank you so much for staying with this little story.

{hugs}

xoxo

jakeward

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