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Reviewer: silvaneous (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2011 11:50 AM · On: breakdown

so, after 2 years i have finally finished going through all the twilighted stories in alphabetical order - yours is also in my favorites along with 169 others.  people keep asking how do u manage to keep up with all those stories at once.  i have no idea, maybe cuz they're so good?  i don't have any friends who read this, so i can't really share that with anyone.  its a bummer that your life is so busy that u haven't been able to finish this story, its so extremely good!  but i do understand, i have 3 kids and a 4th on the way, and there are many things in my life that i haven't even started on - knowing that it won't ever work.  maybe later i keep saying.  my last years resolution was that by the time i was 40 i want to be the best house wife.  sounds corny i know, its not something that i want to do for my hubby but for me, i'm a stay at home mom, but u should see my house, actually u shouldn't, its gross.  so this gives me 10 years to get my act together and not have to be embarrassed by my dirty windows and grimy floors.   good luck with your momhood, and i look forward to one day reading the rest.  

Reviewer: Jadiona (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2010 10:43 PM · On: breakdown

Great chapter, I can't wait to read the next.

Reviewer: NOMnomNOM (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 02:29 AM · On: breakdown

i love this fic, its just as sweet everysingle time i read it! please direct any second of free time to this! i wouldn't want to push but, I cant wait for the next installment!

xx

Reviewer: KHolyoak (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2010 06:48 PM · On: breakdown

This story is amazing! I understand you're a mother, but I'm dying without updates! Have mercy! Lol! (But really, please update, this story is awesome)

Reviewer: twilightobession69 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 06:15 AM · On: breakdown

I was following you story over on FF. I have looked you up here. I just wanted to let you know that I love your story. You write beautifully. I can feel the love between Quil and Claire. There is so much love between the two. I can't wait for it to develop between them and to see how it grows.

I hope everything is going well with you and your family. Miss hearing from you.

Reviewer: Reese1603 (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2010 08:16 AM · On: breakdown

Please tell me you are going to finish this? I started reading it a few months ago and came back today hoping you would have added a new chapter...but I am very sad to see that you haven't. This is my favorite Quil/Claire story and I really want to see where it leads!!!!!

Reviewer: blondeboxer (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 11:41 AM · On: breakdown

that was so amazing!i love this story please update soon!:)

Reviewer: lizzybtmn (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2009 07:59 PM · On: breakdown

I loooovvvveeeee you're story! and I can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: ApplesForEve (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2009 11:42 AM · On: breakdown

love, love, love, this update! i'm so glad that claire and quil cleared the air a little bit. i'm interested to see how things are going to go between them now.  this was definitely worth the wait ;)

Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 10:40 PM · On: breakdown

Welcome back! I never messaged because I hate when people presure me, but I'm so glad you finally updated.  This is lovely & I enjoyed every moment of this chapter.  It's a talk that both fo them needed to have & I hope that they'll be able to move closer together now because of it.

Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 09:17 PM · On: breakdown

Just came across your story tonight.

It's amazing.  And ten different kinds of wonderful.

Eager for more- but know that kissing babies is way more important.

Reviewer: Blakely (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 07:33 PM · On: breakdown

Of course we're still here! We - your true fans - will never leave you! I loved this chapter. I love how Quil had a lot to say and how open and honest Claire was. Keep it coming. I'm here till the end and any other story you write!

Blakely

Reviewer: mandalynn (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 07:17 PM · On: breakdown

I'M STILL HERE! i would never leave this story! First, because I'm a mom of three as well and know almost to well exactly the things you have gone through and are still going through.(I have 3 under 3..yeah I have no life..) Second I LOVE LOVE LOVE this story..I love all the Quil and Claire stories you do. You are so dead on about them. I can't beiieve you would  even have haters...well anyways..welcome back WE all missed you! 

OK so as for the story..I didn't know Quil had so much to say...I was hoping for alittle more of quil talking and not just exhisting in the back ground. But I love that he is just so messed up with his own stuff and now he can get it all out. And yay they kissed...I love happy endings to chapters!!

Reviewer: colorthestars (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 06:28 PM · On: breakdown

I just read all your chapters in one sitting. You're doing a great job. Keep going!

Reviewer: rwe123 (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 04:32 PM · On: breakdown

I have never reviewed anything before but I was so happy that you posted an update that I had to. This is one of the best stories out there. Please keep going with it.

Reviewer: AshleyRae (Anonymous) · Date: September 28, 2009 12:56 PM · On: breakdown

I LOOOVE this story. Sooo much. Of course your baby comes first, but thank you so much for taking time out of your busy schedule for us. Very much appreciated.

Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 12:15 PM · On: breakdown

Hooray! Your back!

I love this story and hope you are able to update more frequently, but I understand, being a mom is hard work!

Just a request... can you do a little "Before on 'Broken'" just so we know the key points to remember? That would be awesome.

Reviewer: meeroom16 (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 11:49 AM · On: breakdown

That was so worth the wait!  I'm so happy they finally talked.  Quil is so adorable- it never even occured to me that he would be so screwed up from not feeling anything for all of those years.  I kind of pictured him just popping back to the Quil from New Moon and Eclipse without a backwards glance. Which is why I don't write fanfiction.  :)

 

Reviewer: forksfan86 (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 10:40 AM · On: breakdown

yay

Reviewer: Birgit (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 09:58 AM · On: breakdown

Ha! I didn't have to reread to know what happened ... I'm kind of an elephant ... but I will reread everything from the start again because it's just sooooo sweet ... with the kids ... just invite the grandmas whenever you have enough ... they'll love to spoil them and you'll have time to write chapter 12 ;-)

Love you and Quil and Claire.

Reviewer: dana_knockouts (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 09:54 AM · On: breakdown

Love love love Quil!

I'm so glad you're back!

Reviewer: Twinklefae (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 09:48 AM · On: breakdown

Oh my.  We do attachment parenting too, and I can't even imagine READING fanfic during the first few months with a high needs baby (my DS wasn't but friend's little guy was...).

It's amazing.  I love this story.  I'm so glad that you haven't abandoned it, and can't wait to see what comes next!

Reviewer: Twinsmom (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 09:32 AM · On: breakdown

I'm so glad you are still working on this fic!   Bless your heart!  My twins didn't sleep thru the night until they were about 9 mos.  I know you have a bunch of kids and we all have lots of responsibilities.  But, as long as I know you are still writing I will be coming back to check on this fic because its brilliant! 

I did have to go back and read a few parts to remember, but it was a total joy and reminded me how "worth it" this fic is. 

Now the fic: Claire was so sweet in this one.  I'm so glad Quil is trying to get out how he feels, I think his actions spoke louder than his words!  Yeah! 

~christy

Reviewer: Twinsmom (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 08:49 PM · On: Chapter 10

I may have missed this one.  I can't believe it!  So, to me Claire's pain hasn't gone away because QUil has been coming to her in the dead of night to be near her, touch her and talk to her.  With her thinking it's all a dream.  Right?  I can see them finally clearing up at least a couple of things here right? 

You are missed!  This fic is missed!  I still think it is the best fic on this site.

 

Reviewer: RarelyPureNeverSimple (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 04:50 AM · On: Chapter 10

AAAAWWWW!!!!

i absolutly love this story!!

here are three reasons

1. it is a great plot line, and it really gets into claires life.

2. no-one really pays attention to the other characters in the twilight books, they deserve a little creit.

3. i love Quil !!!

and this is really something worth reading and following.

love

RarelyPureNeverSimple

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