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Reviewer: la_bella_sera (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2013 04:48 AM · On: Chapter 6 - Invitations aka "One of THOSE Days"
Ha! I've never quite been able to put my exact love of Jasper into words... but you my friend have the right idea..."want his sparkly Southern babies." I love it! LOL
Oh, I also love your story! The probability of me getting any work done today with all these enthralling chapters is about as good as Lauren's hair growing out any time soon...
Reviewer: iloverob32 (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2011 09:38 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Epilogue: An Occasion aka "The Part That Comes After"
I really, really enjoyed this story! Very well written. Even though the they were mostly out of character, they were belivable. Great job! Would love to read more of your stuff.
Reviewer: iloverob32 (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 08:03 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Blood Type aka "Bella Faints at the Sight of Blood"
I am loving this story so far!! I love how you are keeping me in suspence. I want to know what is so tragic in Bella's life. On to the next chapter.
Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 01:43 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Epilogue: An Occasion aka "The Part That Comes After"
very nice story thank you for sharing it I will be sure to check out more of your stuff!
Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2010 07:31 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Mind over Matter aka "Murphy's Law"
i m glad she feels ashamed of how she treated him and i am glad he kinda made her work for him but i am also glad he didnt push her away either. I love that alice is making jasper work for it to but isnt hateful at him either....edward is a great guy to her.,,,almost like a brother
Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2010 06:09 AM · On: Chapter 10 - "Cold and Wet"
im glad he didnt say he loved her then...she would probably just use it against him later...i really hate jasper in this one...poor alice deserves better and i hope she breaks up with him or edward convinces her too...
Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 10:53 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Blood Type aka "Bella Faints at the Sight of Blood"
Carlisle seems like a douche..i wasnt sure if that is the intention but it seems that way...alice seems like a sweetie,,,,so sad that jasper is a douche,,,i hope that rosalie and emmett see how alice is treated and let him have it!!!
Reviewer: justtwilight (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2010 02:16 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Epilogue: An Occasion aka "The Part That Comes After"
thanks for the awesome story
Reviewer: koolchick262003 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 09:52 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Epilogue: An Occasion aka "The Part That Comes After"
Great story. Thanks. :)
Reviewer: Delicious Dreamer (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2010 11:40 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Epilogue: An Occasion aka "The Part That Comes After"
WHAT DID SHE DO TO KATE?! this is the only question running through my mind after finishing the story...
Reviewer: ssuryan (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 01:18 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Epilogue: An Occasion aka "The Part That Comes After"
Thanks to TLYDF, I found your story. I loved the characters, and look forward to your next story. Clicking add Author To Favorites...
Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 09:18 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Epilogue: An Occasion aka "The Part That Comes After"
The story got so seriously interesting at the end that I just had to stay up and finish it.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading it. I'm really glad you liked it! This story was incredible to write, and I'm so glad I did because of readers and reviewers like you. I hope you'll read and like my other story, too! ^^
Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 09:14 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Mind over Matter aka "Murphy's Law"
After knowing what she did with James, I don't think I could be with her (if I was a dude).
Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 08:22 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Blood Type aka "Bella Faints at the Sight of Blood"
You were so clever with the confederate flag comment. It was really funny. As for Bella's story...it's so sad!
Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 3 - "In Twos"
Lauren and people vain like her totally deserve what Bella did...but it was still messed up.
Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 2 - "Dead Fish"
what is wrong with Bella?
Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 1 - First Sight aka "I Hate You"
Edward was really funny. First with the tennis ball and later thinking about the possibility of Bella murdering a cat so thatt she could stuff it into some poor girl's locker!
Reviewer: alianthe (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 06:52 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Epilogue: An Occasion aka "The Part That Comes After"
Wow, great story! Good plot, well written - loved it :D
Reviewer: Chrisstars1 (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 04:44 AM · On: Chapter 3 - "In Twos"
so yeah! Bella kicks ass!!! That was totally me in highschool! My mom ditched me and my dad my 10th grade year and some fucked up shit happened and i was almost expelled twice, but they felt sorry for me. I got in a billion fights but my little group of friends (John) especially saved my ass and senior year life kinda started again!
Reviewer: AuroraJean (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 07:07 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Open Book aka "You Make No Sense"
hey check out anberlin. they're pretty good:) ha they're my favorite band of the week pretty much. it changes fairly frequently:P
Reviewer: LittlePixieStick (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Epilogue: An Occasion aka "The Part That Comes After"
Awe agora, I'll admit it. I'm a little sad to see your story come to an end. It was dark, a little twisted, and very highly entertaining. You've kept me on the edge of my seat for quite some time now, and I really appreciate your taking the time and effort to put yourself and your story out here for others to read and review. While I myself have not had the gumption as of yet, I'm working on finishing up something right now, I know it cannot be easy to face the criticism of others, and you have my sincere admiration.
It was a fitting end to a wonderful story. While it was an HEA, I appreciate your acknowledging the struggles Bella and Edward still faced as a couple working towards their engagement and future marriage. It's refreshing to see someone who isn't afraid of telling it like it is. Real life isn't always roses and bunnies; thank you for keeping it real. Can't wait to see what you've got up your sleeve next!
LittlePixieStick
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 01:23 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Epilogue: An Occasion aka "The Part That Comes After"
"Bella by my side and a small velvet box in my pocket, housing the ring I would put on her finger tonight." WOO HOO!!!!! GREAT ENDING!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: SarahBella (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 11:06 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Epilogue: An Occasion aka "The Part That Comes After"
**le Sob**
I'm so sad that it's over!
So sad!
I loved the story and your twisted ooc characters! I loved them! It's nice to read a fic where Edward is the normal one!
I'm keeping my fingers crossed for an epilogue.
Reviewer: m81170 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 09:18 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Epilogue: An Occasion aka "The Part That Comes After"
OMG!!! I can't believe it's just over! I'm so sad! This was such a great story and I loved the characters so much even though I hated Bella a lot of the time (like 95% of the time). She's like family, you hate her but you have to lobe her anyway.
And Edward!!! I loved your Edward so much and how committed he was to love and to his Bella! I wish we got to see a bit more of them together when she's not insane but I also think that it's good you wrapped it up where you did and didn't drag it out!
If you need a banner for your new story, let me know if I can help you out! (Though totally understand if not). You, my dear, are the one who is made of awesome!
I'll miss this story so much but great job with the whole thing!
Reviewer: msbutterfly23 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 07:19 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Epilogue: An Occasion aka "The Part That Comes After"
Absolutely loved this story! I truly admire you (and all of those here who venture into putting themselves out there!). Stories like your's keep me coming back daily and I am utterly and unashamedly (is that a word? LOL) addicted!
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