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Reviewer: rarishness (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2011 04:22 AM · On: ...

Dude, frickin' awesome! Sorry if you don't get beautiful,long, intensive reviews, I'm just gonna read this and be super excited about the whole idea. Anywho, you're beautiful, and I wish I could write like you. Much love

Reviewer: JBC719 (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2010 10:20 AM · On: ...

I don't tend to read one shots. I'm not sure why, because they are very often really good. After all, good things come in small packages! It was great. Really good, considering it was your first!

Reviewer: rebirthfry25 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 06:24 AM · On: ...

I like!!!!!!

Reviewer: angel 057 (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 01:17 AM · On: ...

Very nicely done.  I enjoyed it very much.  Please continue to write more.

angel 057

Author's Response:

Thanks. I'm writing more. I've got another story on the website. It's called "Dealing with the Kangaroo" in case you don't konw it already :)

Reviewer: wolf lover (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 05:57 PM · On: ...

very nice, thanks

Author's Response:

Thank you.

Reviewer: leelator (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 04:59 AM · On: ...

Sweet story. Thanks for sharing!

Author's Response:

THank you.

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2009 02:14 AM · On: ...

Your oneshot was very good.  This is the second time I've read it and I enjoyed it more the 2nd time around.  Keep up with your writting, you have a great story telling mind!

Author's Response:

Thank you! When I read it I don't really like it because it was the first thing I've written in English and it has a lot of mistakes. I've proof-read it a few weeks ago and put a new version on if you want to read the improved one-shot (same pen name, same story title!)

Reviewer: Tamuno2 (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 04:11 PM · On: ...

This was....AWESOME!!!

This is completely how it should've went...

ur an amazing writer, don't stop writing, u amazing person, u! :D

Author's Response: Wow, thanks a lot! It is definitely how it should have been!!! No more Edward. Reviews like yours just make me wish I could be less lazy and write faster!!! I have another story on this website called "Dealing with the kangaroo" if you want to check it out. It's another Bella and Jacob story. Again thanks a lot.

Reviewer: Kandykanegirl34566 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 07:10 PM · On: ...

continue it it fabulos


Author's Response:

I don't plan on adding more chapters but you can read my other fanfic if you need more B/J. It's called "Dealing with the kangaroo". THank you for your review.

Reviewer: MJW (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 02:22 AM · On: ...

This was really great!!  I'm a crazy Jacob fan .... if only it really happened this way?!

Excellent last line!

Author's Response:

Yeah, if only....I thought from the start that it is the way the story should have turned out. No more Edward!

Thank you.

Reviewer: Kandykanegirl34566 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 08:28 PM · On: ...

it was good


Author's Response:

Thank you.

Reviewer: MoriaAngel (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 07:25 PM · On: ...

Oh, this one shot ir really lovely and sweet!!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: TwilightChicky (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 12:51 AM · On: ...

Really sweet. I liked that Bella realizes she wants to live and that Jake was a happy way to do this.

Author's Response:

Thank you.

Reviewer: Twilightxofan (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 11:03 PM · On: ...

Wow amazing!

Very good english too for someone who is second nature to english.!!

Author's Response:

Thank you.

Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 06:47 AM · On: ...

It was very good for your first time!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: vhdnet (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 06:53 AM · On: ...

I enjoyed your story. Thanks for sharing it, :)

Author's Response:

Thank you and you're welcome.

Reviewer: silencechaser (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 09:50 PM · On: ...


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Reviewer: cavilah (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 06:01 AM · On: ...

Absolutely perfect! Jacob, je peux être ta BELLA! ;-) Seriously, though, I love all Jacob/Bella stories & yours is a great one! I'm also enjoyng your other story, "Dealing With the Kangaroo (Yours, right?)..."

Author's Response:

Mine right! I think every one of us wants to be Jacob's Bella or (in my case) get rid of Bella and takes her place!!!


Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 05:13 PM · On: ...

Merci beaucoup!  Tres bien fait!  Quelque fauts de temps, mais tres petit, et natural pour une francophone! 

C'est un histoire tres tendre et vraiment comme les livres pour moi!  C'est une momment que manque du moi dans les livres, mais j'aime le fin du SM beaucoup aussi! 

J'espere que je peut ecrite en francais aussi bonne!  (Je manque du pracice recemment.)

Merci encore!  Ecrire plus!!!  :)

Author's Response:

Merci beaucoup! I'm writing more don't worry^^ I'm writing my third story right now.

Your French is very good, practice makes better.

Reviewer: diamondheart (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 10:14 AM · On: ...

Merci pour votre petit histoire de Bella et Jacob, ca me plait bien!  Excusez mon pauvre francais: j'ai si peut d'oppotunites de practiquer ces jours ci!  Votre anglais est meilleur que mon francais. <>

Author's Response:

Thansk for your review. Your French is very good!! If you practice you'll make it even better.

You know that i'm reading your fanfic called Moonshadow and i'm waiting with excitement for the next chapter!

Reviewer: folm (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2009 11:06 PM · On: ...

Tres Bien! That was very well-written, and extra points since English is not your first language. I enjoyed the story, even though I am an Edward fan.  I love the last line, great ending!

Author's Response:

Thansk very much for your review. Yes, I like the last line too^^ In all the things i'm writing i put a particular attention on the last line. I try to make it close to perfection every time.

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