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Reviews For One More Shot
Reviewer: green2luvly (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2011 08:08 PM · On: All The Things She Said

omg is this the end?

Reviewer: mariec625 (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 08:05 PM · On: All The Things She Said

Omg I just found this story, pretty pretty please will you update? It's phenomenal!!

Reviewer: cavilah (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2009 08:28 AM · On: My (Not So) Dream Man.

Been waiting patiently, but just wondering if you're going to continue the story...It'd be a shame if you didn't... ;-)

Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 07:17 PM · On: My (Not So) Dream Man.

Hi there :)  Do you like beer? I'll buy you a case if you update. :)  haha! No, really - I'd LOVE to see you continue this story - it's funny and lemony and cute, and a nice change of pace for Jalice. C'mon, don't you love thinking up smut with Jasper in it??? :)

Reviewer: jazzluvr (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 10:03 AM · On: All The Things She Said

**sniff, sniff**

Reviewer: aliceontherun123 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 11:45 PM · On: Because I'm a Pisces

This chapter was funny and sexy and romantic. I liked this one. :P

Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 06:33 AM · On: All The Things She Said

Hi there :)  What's up with our horny couple lately? Is Jasper out fundraising for money to hire a kickass lawyer to get his daughter back? Is Alice still mental?  Is Edward still a poopy head?

Hope life is going OK for you! :)  Love the story and look forward to more chapters. :)

Reviewer: Jmemac (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 04:41 PM · On: My (Not So) Dream Man.

Please update soon...............

Reviewer: katiedear (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 09:10 AM · On: All The Things She Said

I just discovered this story, and I have to say I'm completely addicted!  So beautiful.  I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: soofine11 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 03:09 PM · On: All The Things She Said


Reviewer: Barbiegirltwilighted (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 12:01 PM · On: All The Things She Said

ooo... jazz is so messed up he needs alice to help him & she needs him...

PLZ!!! WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Ash Night (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 11:33 AM · On: All The Things She Said

i'm begging you to read more i've read this story about 20 times it's my favorite story on twilighted.  


ps. i love the fact that you put in my wish by rascal flatts in this chapter my fave song by them!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Nicka (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 10:36 AM · On: All The Things She Said

Interesting story I'm looking forward to more.

Reviewer: MeIshAlice (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 04:17 AM · On: All The Things She Said

awwwww!! im soooo about to cry....

Reviewer: annettelovez (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 10:00 PM · On: All The Things She Said

Why is everyone angry and overreacting? Poor Jasper. He's being dragged through the mud and his only supports have jumped to the other side. That's unfair. I'll be Team Jasper then. :)

Reviewer: jennayg123 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 08:24 PM · On: All The Things She Said

Ah! I can't believe he just left her like that! Of course he can be the man that loves her!!

Reviewer: soofine11 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 12:45 PM · On: It's The Way




Reviewer: Ash Night (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 10:50 AM · On: My (Not So) Dream Man.


Reviewer: VampireNinjaPenguins (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 03:33 PM · On: Thanks for the

Reviewer: Mademoiselle Chocolat (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 05:21 PM · On: It's The Way

YOU WAIT, GIRL! AMEN. I love this story. I'm glad Alsper is going semi-strong. It hurts when they aren't wonkin' it out, but I love that Alice is taking charge and making Jasper work for what he wants. Update soon...notifications in my inbox that you've updated are like Alice surpassing Aunt Sammie, and becoming the CEO of the Maria is a Cunt Club!!!

XoxoX, Mademoiselle

Reviewer: cullenfreak (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 05:17 PM · On: Thanks for the

This is such a sweet story but I must say that your Alice is a bitter harpy that says fuck a lot.

Reviewer: Word Play (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 09:22 AM · On: Because I'm a Pisces

In the middle of the chapter and I have to go to work . . . Fuck! I'll be back in aproximatly five hours. Keep up the good work!

Thanks :0)

Reviewer: CherBella (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 05:19 AM · On: It's The Way

Oh my gosh...I think I'm emotionally spent, so much happened in this chapter! When she was going through her story with james and she heard someone in the apt. was it really just Bella or was Jasper there? She saw him in the mirror when she was cutting her hair? I will assume not, I just didn't know if Bella showed up unespectedly or if Bella and Jasper had talked?

Anyway, I felt even worse for Alice, knowing she had been through a similar situation once before (dating a man who had a hidden kid) I loved the whole Bella and Alice part of the chapter. (Ben and Jerry are Godsends...Chocolate Fudge Brownie is my personal fave but brownie batter is a close second) We finally know that it is Bella who is dating Edward. Bella comes clean to Alice about being related to Jasper and is able to tell Alice all of Jasper's story. I do hope Alice and Jasper finally get their stuff together and sit down and talk. Loved the little twist of Bella actually taking Alice out to do all the shopping and "girly stuff." So cute how she bought all that stuff for Jordan without even knowing her.

Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 10:07 PM · On: It's The Way






Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 09:52 PM · On: It Pours

1. THANK YOU for the picks of Jackson. HOT HOT HOT!

2. "Paying for it" - did Maria have his kid, and he's poor and has no contact?

3. Edward is a big bully and a butthead and needs to GO. He's like her musical pimp. What a tool.

4. FYI, I think you might be confusing "defiantly" (with attitude) with "definitely" (most certainly.)  :)

5.  envisioning Jasper doing a strip tease made my eyes cross. Seriously.

6.  Rose is evil, and must die.

7. Maria is more evil, and must die before Rose. (who may get to live, depending on her actions in following chappies.)


9. Jasper needs a lawyer. I'm a lawyer. I'll save him. :)

10. Damn it! I only have 1 chapter left to read. WAAAA!

11. Your story is going on my faves list. Please reward my loyalty with more chappies!!!

12. This story ROCKS MY WORLD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  xoxooxox

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