I just read through the whole story and I really like it. However, the guys' over-protective nature has hindered Bella's decision making. Hopefully they'll learn to trust her. I also hope that the bet will blow up in Edward's face if he doesn't realize soon enough to cancel the bet.

Also, what's up with them not letting her drive. Can anyone say super- controlling.

hey great story great chapter i think its is a great idea i think its funny how over bearing and protective jasper james and anthony are and i think its sweet that anthony is spending more time with them. =]

&& That right there was amazing, totally amazing. :)

You make me fall in love with your story. But a Part of me is pretty sure that Bella will find out about the Bet and she`ll really get hurt badly. Can you kinda break it down for her mildly?

We love drama. But then...

Did you enjoy keeping us waiting???

UPDATE SOONER PLEASE? Suspense is wonderful... But then.. :)

LOVALOTS; Kat♥

I'm so glad you updated and I loved the date!

im glad to see that youre back. and i really enjoyed this chapter, i cant wait for more :)

At first i hated your Edward. But he is definetly growing on me. And i never thought that i would like James, i mean in Twilight i like loathed him- but seeing him like this, it is like he is actually nice. This is such a good story! Please keep writing, it makes me bubbly. Like i mean uber giggly and light hearted. Well okay alot of Twilight related things do that but whatevs. I have read like nine stories today but i think your has inspired me to post my own. It is slightly absurd but oh well.

I don't get why Bella doesn't listen to James about Jacob when she sided with James in the beginning about Edward. I don't get why she pushes so hard to go on this non-date with Jacob out of the blue, no warning, especially after she's been warned about him by everybody who cares about her. It doesn't fit with the concept of the story at all. She's supposed to be this self righteous girl, but then goes out the biggest dog of them all?

Edward suddenly realizes he really likes Bella within a weeK? He still had three weeks to make her his girlfriend!

This is just too many concepts scrunched up together, not making sense at all as to how their connection even develops. Convincing James to go into an alliance with him in a week after they've hated each other for so long?

For me, it's thet times not adding up that throws the whole story off for me.

I'm just not clicking with this as much as I would have liked to. But this is your story, and I am not dogging you out here. I like the over-a;; plot of it. But I just find myself going back to previous pages to make sure what I'm reading is right. I've done that three times now, and that makes it hard for me to stay focused with the story.

Overall, it is fan-fiction and you're allowed to espress your thoughts however you want. I'm sorry that I couldn't get into it the way I wanted to. Doesn't mean your other fans won't love it.

Be proud of yourself regardless of what I say. I'm just reviewing.

Excellent story. Just found it today. Love the story line and the characters. The plot is good, but I think Edward is in for big trouble! Gotta love it!            Love the banter between the characters. Update soon!

This is such a good story!

please update soon!

where ARE you?

Author's Response:

I am so sorry I'm taking so long to update! School has been keeping me busy and ever since school got off I've been busy with Christmas business! But I will update some time soon =) Sorry for the wait!

Great story so far! Just hope you update more often pls!