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Reviewer: Stefan9 (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2012 05:02 PM · On: Chapter 23: Alice
When will you write the next chapter?? This story is too good to end
Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2011 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 23: Alice
Hey this was a great chap i am so glad that alice is starting to remember more info !!!!!!! But i hope they are all ok and they will be able to stop bella getting shot !!! and i hope alice is ok !!!!! i really just loved the chap !
Author's Response: So glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: distinctly_forbidden (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 05:05 PM · On: Chapter 23: Alice
I really like this story and can't wait to see where it goes, but I was really confused at the end of this chapter. Didn't really know what was going on.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing, and I'm glad you liked the story. I admit, the ending is meant to be confusing because Alice herself is confused by all of the drugs in her system. Without ruining the cliffhanger, let me try and clarify things. Think about what could be red and drip from someone, and how would that tie in with Emmett passing out? If you're still confused, the next chapter will clear up any confusion. I'll try and post that soon, but I have to write it first. Thanks again for reviewing!
Reviewer: Nali (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 10:52 AM · On: Chapter 23: Alice
:x cliffhanger!!! slightly confusing too but hey w/e awesome :D more more more more /o/
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll do my best to get another chapter up soon, but I haven't started the next one yet *hides* It'll clear up any confusion though :)
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Screaming Mimi (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 07:36 AM · On: Chapter 23: Alice
Noooooooooooooooo don't leave Emmett and Alice in trouble like that! I'm not above jumping into the next chapter and rescuing them!!
Author's Response: LOL, I'm sure Emmett would appreciate that very much! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: viking (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 07:13 AM · On: Chapter 23: Alice
A lil confusing...;)
Author's Response: Haha, so you liked the drugged out Alice? The next chapter will clear up any questions since it'll be from Emmett's point of view. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: viking (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2011 01:47 PM · On: Chapter 22: Bella
:)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for all of your reviews. I'm so glad you're enjoying the story so much, it makes everything worthwhile!
Reviewer: viking (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2011 01:41 PM · On: Chapter 20: Edward
This doesn't sound good...
Reviewer: viking (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2011 01:34 PM · On: Chapter 19: Rosalie
Glad she got over the hurdle!
Reviewer: viking (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2011 01:31 PM · On: Chapter 18: Alice
Smiles!
Reviewer: viking (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2011 01:28 PM · On: Chapter 17: Edward
Geez...
Reviewer: viking (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2011 12:54 PM · On: Chapter 15: Jasper
Holy crap! WTH!
Reviewer: viking (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2011 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 12: Emmett
I really enjoy the different pov's!
Reviewer: borntobewild (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2011 11:57 AM · On: Chapter 1: Bella
I normally dont review stories, but I had to for this one! I stayed up until 3 reading your story. Its so interesting. Sort of like a cross between Hunger Games and Twilight. I have to say that I am pretty obsessed. The only thing that Im not completely satisfied with is Edward and Bella's relationship. It might just be me, but it doesn't seem as authentic as Emmet and Rosalie or Jasper and Alice. I think that is probably because with Emmet and Rosalie, we got to see that progression, and Jasper and Alice's actions really just speak for themselves. I think where it got unreal was when Laurent confronted Bella and Edward saved her. She went from terrified of his possessivness to completely entrances. haha but thats it! Love and story, and please update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I will definitely work more on fleshing out Bella and Edward's relationship so that's it feels more realistic. So glad you like the story :)
Reviewer: Screaming Mimi (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2011 04:07 AM · On: Chapter 22: Bella
Just read this story all the way through. It's very interesting and I like not only your character development, but how you've woven bits of Stephenie Meyer's stories into yours.
Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!!!
Reviewer: Nali (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2011 10:50 PM · On: Chapter 22: Bella
awww :3 need more!
Author's Response: Haha, will do! About to put the next chapter in the queue :)
Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2011 12:36 PM · On: Chapter 22: Bella
Hey awww this was a good chap i am glad we heard from emmett and we got some morebackground story ! I really do love this story !
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2011 07:41 AM · On: Chapter 21: Emmett
Hey this was a grreat chap !!! i really loved it =] i loved the relationship that alice and emmett hjave they really look after each other ! I also loved that u included the bit about em and rose it fave the chapter a sense of hope because you want everything to be ok !!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing! I'm so glad you've enjoyed the story so much :D
Reviewer: renesme carlie cullen (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2011 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 21: Emmett
good story thanks
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing :)
Reviewer: distinctly_forbidden (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2011 11:34 AM · On: Chapter 21: Emmett
It's good to see you updating again, please don't wait too long till the next update :D
Author's Response: I'll definitely try! Thanks for reviewing :)
Reviewer: samantadrusila (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2010 04:19 AM · On: Chapter 1: Bella
I'm loving this story so far. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'll try and get another chapter out soon; life's just a little hectic right now.
Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2010 07:40 AM · On: Chapter 20: Edward
Hey i loved this chap expecially the Edward and Bella Part !!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for all the reviews! I'm so glad you like the story :D
Reviewer: LostHalo (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2010 06:32 AM · On: Chapter 16: Bella
Lovley chapter
Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to leave me so many wonderful reviews. I really appreciate it. I am so glad you like the story, and glad you've become an awesome new reader!
Reviewer: LostHalo (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2010 06:27 AM · On: Chapter 15: Jasper
Poor Jasper! Hope he makes it out of this one!
Reviewer: LostHalo (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2010 06:23 AM · On: Chapter 14: Emmett
It's nice to get more back story on the Volturi!
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