Reviewer: zabin (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 06:38 PM · On: Chapter 4 A Deity at the Beach (V)
Please, do not copy from The Master of Universe. I am talking about Advil and the glass of water.LOL
Reviewer: sfalcon (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 12:22 PM · On: Chapter 34 The Iron Chef
Great story thanks
Reviewer: Veane (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2010 10:30 AM · On: Chapter 1 Beginning at the End (V)
I want moreeeee...:p
Reviewer: Lur2 (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2010 09:55 AM · On: Chapter 8 What Got Left Behind (V)
What a ass hole Sam is, did he really she would do anything to a pregnant women. He is a douche plain and simple.
Reviewer: Lur2 (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2010 05:33 AM · On: Chapter 7 Sweet Tea & the Southern Inquisition (V)
Okay, so I was wrong, the parents didn't think they were gay but in my defense I didn't know they were more than just roomate (they are brothers). And yeahEdward and Bella are moving a little too fast but is like a rush. Love this chapter.
Reviewer: Lur2 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 10:01 PM · On: Chapter 6 Piggly-Wiggly (V)
Hmmm, I think Edward want to meet Jasper girl because they think he might be gay? Great chapter, laugh my ass off at finger waves.
Reviewer: Rayday (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 11:49 AM · On: Chapter 34 The Iron Chef
Yay...So excited for Baby Whitlock!!!
Reviewer: jennayg123 (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2010 08:55 PM · On: Chapter 34 The Iron Chef
Aww baby time! Excited to read about that little one :) I'm glad they're settling ok- a little stress can be good because that means stress relief! Excited for the next chapter!
Reviewer: FutureHockeyWife (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2010 02:14 AM · On: Chapter 34 The Iron Chef
you are the first person i have reviewed on this site.
my main reasoning for the is the lack of a next button.
this fact makes me quite sad.
though it may be a hint for me to go to bed.
i am in love with this story and cannot wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: samekraemer (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2010 11:10 AM · On: Chapter 34 The Iron Chef
So glad you updated. I love this story. Great chapter.
Reviewer: ginkgo00 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2010 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 12 Ex Communication (V)
intriguing...
Reviewer: dsccc (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2010 04:26 PM · On: Chapter 34 The Iron Chef
Thanks for the update! Bella is such a perfectionist and needs to give herself some slack!! Moving, settling in a new part of the country, and starting a business suck individually, but all att once - good grief!
Reviewer: Arctic (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2010 03:53 PM · On: Chapter 34 The Iron Chef
Please post the next chapter soon! I have become addicted to it.
Reviewer: parkesy23 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2010 05:24 AM · On: Chapter 3 Back the Truck Up
loving it
thanks
Reviewer: parkesy23 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2010 05:14 AM · On: Chapter 2 Hell Coming Up on the Left (V)
great to have epov
great story
Reviewer: parkesy23 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2010 05:04 AM · On: Chapter 1 Beginning at the End (V)
great first chapter
sound very interesting
thanks
Reviewer: missscarlettbelle (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2010 10:25 PM · On: Chapter 11 Swate Tay, Plays (V)
I rarely ever review but this chapter deserved it. I laughed for ten minutes straight during the lunch scene when Jasper asked for a "coke." Only a true Southerner knows that all sodas are referred to as coke. And the sweet tea was another giggle. That alone makes your Jasper the best Jasper I have read. Yours is the first time Jasper has been truly Southern. A pair of cowboy boots and "ma'am" doesn't cut it. Thank you oh so much!
Reviewer: GGSophie (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2010 08:12 PM · On: Chapter 34 The Iron Chef
Great update, I think its more that just what she was thinking in the shower. I don't know I'm just taking a guess ;) Can't wait for the next update
Reviewer: gitgit (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2010 08:20 PM · On: Chapter 34 The Iron Chef
ohhh snap
that was definitely an awesome chapter
I cant wait to see what happens next especially brandon-whitlock rugrat
and bella and edward will resolve their little tiff
Reviewer: vegevamp7 (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2010 08:04 PM · On: Chapter 34 The Iron Chef
How could you leave me a cliff hanger like that???? I love this story btw.
Reviewer: khills (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2010 03:27 PM · On: Chapter 34 The Iron Chef
Oh Gosh, bb Jalice is borning!
Bella is overreacting, she has to understand she is in a commited relaysh and things work this way, you are not alone anymore!
Glad to see you updated! Dont worry if people get mad bc you can find enough time to update sooner, what matters is that you don't give up it! Thanks
XO from Brazil
Reviewer: cbell (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2010 11:42 AM · On: Chapter 34 The Iron Chef
So glad you're not jummping ship. I like this story and want to see it finished. I like that the gang is working together and that Rose is taking another job apart from them. Yes it sounds like she doesn't have faith in the projects, but life happenes and she's thinking of just incase. No one can fault her for that.
Reviewer: calientep (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2010 03:17 PM · On: Chapter 34 The Iron Chef
I love this story! I just caught up to the end! Keep it going. I will be forever grateful.
Reviewer: breakingdawn57 (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2010 12:20 PM · On: Chapter 34 The Iron Chef
Glad to see you are back!!! Good job as usual.
Reviewer: Victoria Maundrell (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2010 04:22 AM · On: Chapter 34 The Iron Chef
Awwww! And yeayyyyy finally a long awaited update. I looooooved it, update sooon please.
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