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Reviewer: tcrew (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2010 01:49 PM · On: Chapter 33 Missionary Man

Awwwh, the wedding was so Alice and Jasper!  I think Edward is going to pull off his new plans for the family business - he's determined.  So it's going to happen.  Oh lies...  Rosalie busted them!  LOL

Reviewer: tcrew (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2010 01:15 PM · On: Chapter 32 Don't Fear the Reaper

I just watched "Tangled" at the movie theater last week with my kids.  I say after reading this a frying pan is a girl's best friend!  OMG, James is a total psycho!

Reviewer: tcrew (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2010 12:50 PM · On: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found

Oh Jasper.  You were so strong at such a young age and into a incredible man - Alice and you are going to be so good together!  His parents were so selfish!  Listening to what a 12 yr old Jasper had to go through was heartbreaking.

Reviewer: tcrew (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2010 12:14 PM · On: Chapter 30 All Work and No Play

Oh, intriguing...  I can't wait for that talk!

Reviewer: tcrew (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2010 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 29 Another Day in Paradise

I saw your a/n on FFN about pulling the story over there.  So I am reading and reviewing here now.  OMG, wow that some big news for Alice and Jasper - I LOVE IT!  Oh, jeez.  I'm not looking forward to Edward telling Bella about his and Emmett's shenanigans.  She is going to FREAK!

Reviewer: MarieS (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2010 10:04 PM · On: Chapter 5 S.T.37

I thought I would add some more reviews to your thousands. Love the way you tease with the sex talk.

Reviewer: MyCullen893 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2010 10:19 PM · On: Chapter 34 The Iron Chef

UPDATE PLEASE!!! You can't leave us like this!! ....Please? )=

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2010 05:26 AM · On: Chapter 34 The Iron Chef

Sorry for the late review. Excellent job. I love how realistic their relationship is. Not all sunshine and rainbows. Can't wait to meet the baby! ;)

Reviewer: veronicalove78 (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2010 01:07 AM · On: Chapter 1 Beginning at the End (V)

Awsome I love this story i very rarely read an entire chapter in detail.  I usually get bored with intros. it's the stories like this that catch my attention from the get go.


Reviewer: MaryAliKent (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2010 12:29 PM · On: Chapter 34 The Iron Chef

Aww, baby time! Although I'm a bit jealous of Alice. JAction is my fav man! Swoon....

Love the story, so glad i found it. I'm new to Twilighted and this is only my second read here. I crossed over from fanfic. Looking forward to the next chapters.


Reviewer: lil_jess (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2010 09:40 PM · On: Chapter 32 Don't Fear the Reaper

Heya, I'm a Paramedic and I guess we just don't think about it. I haven't really thought that we only get called to bad things, I see it more as that we help those in need. But i guess, yea we do only get called to the bad things and it could be seen as quite depressing. Hmm. We just get on with and don't think about it.

On a bighter note, I love this story and am looking forward, not about the end but seeing how you finish it off, if ya get what I mean.

Merry Christmas. God Bless!

Reviewer: khanada (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2010 07:25 PM · On: Chapter 34 The Iron Chef

More, more, I need more! I started reading this story in the spring and got so excited when updates finally started coming again. Please tell me more are coming!

Reviewer: MaryAliKent (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2010 05:43 PM · On: Chapter 15 Fallout (V)


Reviewer: katemagpie (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2010 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 34 The Iron Chef

Really enjoying story please update soon

Reviewer: zabin (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2010 12:38 AM · On: Chapter 4 A Deity at the Beach (V)

Please, do not copy from The Master of Universe. I am talking about Advil and the glass of water.LOL

Reviewer: sfalcon (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 06:22 PM · On: Chapter 34 The Iron Chef

Great story thanks

Reviewer: Veane (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2010 04:30 PM · On: Chapter 1 Beginning at the End (V)

I want moreeeee...:p

Reviewer: Lur2 (Anonymous) · Date: December 07, 2010 03:55 PM · On: Chapter 8 What Got Left Behind (V)

What a ass hole Sam is, did he really she would do anything to a pregnant women. He is a douche plain and simple.

Reviewer: Lur2 (Anonymous) · Date: December 07, 2010 11:33 AM · On: Chapter 7 Sweet Tea & the Southern Inquisition (V)

Okay, so I was wrong, the parents didn't think they were gay but in my defense I didn't know they were more than just roomate (they are brothers). And yeahEdward and Bella are moving a little too fast but is like a rush. Love this chapter.

Reviewer: Lur2 (Anonymous) · Date: December 07, 2010 04:01 AM · On: Chapter 6 Piggly-Wiggly (V)

Hmmm, I think Edward want to meet Jasper girl because they think he might be gay? Great chapter, laugh my ass off at finger waves.

Reviewer: Rayday (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 05:49 PM · On: Chapter 34 The Iron Chef

Yay...So excited for Baby Whitlock!!!

Reviewer: jennayg123 (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2010 02:55 AM · On: Chapter 34 The Iron Chef

Aww baby time! Excited to read about that little one :) I'm glad they're settling ok- a little stress can be good because that means stress relief! Excited for the next chapter!

Reviewer: FutureHockeyWife (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2010 08:14 AM · On: Chapter 34 The Iron Chef

you are the first person i have reviewed on this site.
my main reasoning for the is the lack of a next button.
this fact makes me quite sad.
though it may be a hint for me to go to bed.

i am in love with this story and cannot wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: samekraemer (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2010 05:10 PM · On: Chapter 34 The Iron Chef

So glad you updated.  I love this story.  Great chapter.

Reviewer: ginkgo00 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2010 11:38 PM · On: Chapter 12 Ex Communication (V)


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