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Reviewer: sydbear (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2011 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 1 Beginning at the End (V)
oh my god! oh god im laughing truly louder than i should be! but... damn!
Reviewer: little_01 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2011 09:47 AM · On: Chapter 35 Babies, Babes & Bribes
Perfect ending! Great job with all the story :)
Reviewer: shopperlm (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2011 10:55 AM · On: Chapter 1 Beginning at the End (V)
I just finished reading your story and have to tell you that I LOVED IT!! I love the characters you created, the story you told. It was just great.
Also want to say something about the people that were not nice to you about updating the story. Umm, I have some bad words to say about them but why stoop to their level. It sounds like you moved twice, had a family and a RL while you wrote this story. How kind of you to give us your time and creativity. It took me a full week to read it and I had a slow week of RL and I did not have to create anything. So please know that most of your fans appreciate your time and efforts and think you are the BEST!!
Shopperlm
Reviewer: sarahuk (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2011 01:52 AM · On: Chapter 35 Babies, Babes & Bribes
Amazing story, wonderfully written.
Reviewer: Rebeca (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2011 02:21 PM · On: Chapter 35 Babies, Babes & Bribes
LOVE IT!!! I read this story in a month and i loved every secong!! you really know how to make someone feel right there in the moment with them!! I felt every emotion!! Thank you!! :) Xxxxxx
Reviewer: Rebeca (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2011 02:19 PM · On: Chapter 35 Babies, Babes & Bribes
LOVE IT!!! I read this story in a month and i loved every secong!! you really know how to make someone feel right there in the moment with them!! I felt every emotion!! Thank you!! :) Xxxxxx
Reviewer: frances fatuma (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2011 12:12 PM · On: Chapter 1 Beginning at the End (V)
Wow. That was hot. More please.
Reviewer: sweetowl (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2011 11:53 AM · On: Chapter 35 Babies, Babes & Bribes
Amazing! Thanks.
Reviewer: MrsMichellePattinson (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2011 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 1 Beginning at the End (V)
Great start - I am going to keep going!!!
Reviewer: AmyTX (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2011 05:54 AM · On: Chapter 35 Babies, Babes & Bribes
I so love this story and I'm sad to see it end.
Please do write some epilogues and outtakes. Let us see Edward and Bella have a baby or two and living a happy life together. I just love it when he calls her Sugar!
Reviewer: missy peterson (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2011 10:58 PM · On: Chapter 35 Babies, Babes & Bribes
I hope you have written other stories as well.This is my second time at reading this story--I love it first its completed second it light and no heavy topics, its so loving and good. TY
Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2011 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 24 Spoiling for a Fight
im not surprised that james is going to attack bella...i wonder how it will happen and how far he will go..
i cant believe that edward sees bella as practically perfect....nothing bothers him about her at all? come on,,,i am not surprised that bella harps on everything,,poor edward lol
Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2011 07:05 PM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
i wonder if bella will tell edward about her offer....i really hope they go back to hiton head,,,i hope edward gives up opn seattle....it would be better...
Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2011 06:31 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide
bella should have been more responsible with how she called in...i get she was upset but edward was ok and she knew it wasnt life and death,,.she needed to make sure her job was covered before she left...especially considering she runs the place and bruce is away alot,,,,i mean come on! she left the message with a regular staff member and didnt even talk to bruce.,,,,i wouldnt have,,,,also esme! what was she thinking? MARRIAGE!! they havent been even dating more then a couple months,,,,where is her head?
Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2011 05:46 PM · On: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
i cant believe that they bought a house together,,,are they insane! you never do that with someone that is as committment phobic as bella at this poinjt and edward doesnt even know if he is going to like the job,,,renting would have been smarter,,,omg! what were they thinking! a little fast,,,,,poor jasper!
Reviewer: Kvampire_fan (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2011 05:11 PM · On: Chapter 35 Babies, Babes & Bribes
fantastic story!!
Reviewer: obsessivebehaviors (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2011 03:06 AM · On: Chapter 35 Babies, Babes & Bribes
What a beautiful ending! I have followed this story from the first chapter. I’ve cried and laughed so many times. What women (in her right-mind) does not “secretly” wish to be woken by an Edward in the middle of the night? Every girl’s fantasy, and to see the story come full circle one year later was perfect. Taking “the plunge” has such a duel meaning for this couple.
I look forward to your future writing and maybe an Epi with some brown haired, green-eyed cherubs.
Reviewer: 1nimi (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2011 02:11 AM · On: Chapter 11 Swate Tay, Plays (V)
where I work I get to meet people from alot of places and there was this one girl who had a hilton head hoodie. lol so I asked "oh is that a school?" she said "no it's actually an island in south Carolina" lol small world! I was giggling for like 30 minutes with my inside joke! btw love your story, I'm totally hooked! ~ Jazmine
Reviewer: CatWhit (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2011 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 29 Another Day in Paradise
I can't believe people would write just to insult you. That's so not cool. Love the story.
Reviewer: looloolinda (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2011 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 35 Babies, Babes & Bribes
Well done! I thoroughly enjoyed it!
Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2011 08:04 PM · On: Chapter 17 Yes! Yes! Oh God, Yes! (V)
well i am glad that bella is giving a little...edward is sweet adn considering this is his first real relationship of love then he is doing better then most guys,,i find it interesting that edward is the one that has to move to make this work...bella being as inflexible as she is hasnt atleast to my knowledge,,,considered moving to hilton for edward...i think she could be happy there,,.i mean her parents will be gone and she could be in a restuarant anywhere,,,emmett and rose of course will be in seattle but still...i think hilton could make her and edward happier then seattle,,,jmo though
Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2011 07:51 PM · On: Chapter 16 Get What You Need (V)
maybe meeting an ex for coffee isnt a good idea but when his mind is innocent and he really believes he needs advice then what is so wrong with being friends with an ex,,,,ppl that are mature do it all the time,,,bella needs to stop living in her head so much and jasper needs to be supportive of his brother,,,so far he is more supportive of bella then what edward has had to deal with,,,
Reviewer: ulimategirlfriend (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2011 07:28 PM · On: Chapter 35 Babies, Babes & Bribes
I love Southern Edward too hot!!!! Awesome story :)
Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2011 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 15 Fallout (V)
edward is right and i get why he is exhausted,,,he did nothing wrong but i get why bella is unsure as she cant read his mind and she has been through alot,,,,but honestly she needs to be an adult and talk to him honestly and not make assumptions,,,as for the job,,,,i think he should do it if he wants to but if family atleast if not bella is important to him then he should move on because this career isnt good for someone that vaules family and a romantic life,,,
Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2011 06:54 PM · On: Chapter 14 Relations & Revelations (V)
i think edward was right before when he said he wanted to move for himself somewhere and not just for bella...because that would be stupid...honestly i hope he moves for himself because first time love can make you do stupid things,,,but i really think that bella has nothing to lose if she moves to carolina with edward...she can get a job in a restuarant there and edward can take over his parents company while expanding it to more then just residential stuff....plus they would have family...but i realise that bella is difficult and edward will do anything for her...i hope she does stuff for him too though...i dont get why she is so weird about change when she came from a normal home...
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