cant wait for the rest

James??? I think you're going somewhere with him & I'm not convinced it's going to be good, you've hinted a couple of times now. What are you up to?

Love it! Feel a little heated myself now, need the hubby to come home to get some relief haha!!

 

Isn't that what a summer romance is all about...moving to fast....you only live once, you may as well make the most of it and you just never know where it will end. My holiday fling has ended up as a marriage of nearly 14 years(and going strong) and 3 beautiful children.

As for the story....love it love it love it!!! What more can I say.

I love your story. its amazing; however, i'm new to twilighted and was wondering how the update alert worked if there is one. if you could help me it would make me very happy because I would love to be able to continue reading your story

~Haley Lynn

Just Fantastic, I Love this story, Edward is just Hot especially with the southern accent. Doing my happy Dance :0)

Looking forward to the next Updates,  can't wait!!  MWAH!

wow, actionpacked chapter! Go Edward! Woot! Eh, no i don't approve of violence in general but...whew, that was just neccesary!! (and hot ;) ) Kick ass!! He's getting his dream job and his dream girl, hopefully! But I'm a realist bore and I started thinking about how difficult things are going to be for them with two illmatching and busy schedules...well, that's a later problem... ;) Great story! <3

mmm...this is gonna be good. He's not going to be able to leave when they're done with each other... ;) I like sneaky Alice! :D And Bella in the kitchen is a rockstar!! ;) <3

chapter 6

hmmmm interesting, I think I'm gonna like this one.

Dear friend the writer,

I normally do not review, because I never know what to say, but your comment here touched me - so here I am.  You have done a fabulous job with this story and it has kept me completely captivated throughout.  Now, you take your time and do your next chapters at the pace you need to set.  You do not suck, and you do not need to cry.  You are great and Ii am so happy that I chose to read your lovely story.  No crying now.  Hugs to you and thank you so much for being such a great storyteller.

I almosted cried that was really good writing.

I'm pretty sure I already reviewed this chapter when it first came out but I just read it again because of the erroneous update alert - which incidentally had now gotten me hooked on your other story!   Anyway, I read that you've been having some RL issues and I just wanted to offer my support and encouragement.   We all have stuff to deal with so don't let those who may give you grief get to you.  We are lucky to have such a wonderful story to read and I thank you for all you've done to take my mind off my RL crap by writing this.  If there was something I could give you to take your mind of your problems, believe me I would!  Unfortunately I'm just a reader so this is the best I can do.   Looking forward to the update and conclusion of this story whenever you are ready to finish it!

XOXO,

Lori

I love the solid characterizations in your story.  Bella and Edward are well developed through the unfolding plot develpment, which is always the difference between fanfic and the 'good stuff'.   I really like how Alice/ Jasper and Rose/Emmett really add to the story's texture, rather than fluffy filler.  I like how you use the dialogue move the story along and how you let the characters retain their original voice/ point of view.  I especially love Bella's dilemma of independence vs dependence and I think you've done a good job as showing her actions in an empathetic way, rather than melodramic.  Her conflict is most effective when you have us see Bella through Edward's POV. I love Edward's dawning realization of Bella's struggle and his quiet patience; so heartwarming and effective. He has to move her along, but he can cross the line, which is pitch-perfect.  I'm lovin' it!

Now please just remember what Renee told a disbelieving Bella; "You don't suuuuck!"