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Reviewer: sweetcrimefighter (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 10:48 PM · On: The Pillow

Ah, I love this little filler, loved this chapter! Loved the pillow thing! Good luck with your finals and update when you have the time. Bye ;-)

Reviewer: Iris917 (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 10:41 PM · On: The Exam

This story is very interesting and different.  I am really enjoying it so far.  Was Edward experimented on and used as a specimen to see how different forms of torture affect vampires or something?  I am eagerly awaiting your next update to find out what happens next.

Reviewer: TeamJasper13 (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 10:00 PM · On: The Pillow

It may have been a filler, but it was nice to see Bella's growing affection for Edward and the Cullens gaining confidence in Bella, mostly thanks to Alice. I just can't get over how amazing this story is and it's so nice to read something so unique. The pillow was cute, even though it was more necessary for Bella than for Edward. It kinda showed how much she wanted to help him cause often when we care about someone we just want to find someway to feel like we are helping them and that was just one of the only ways she could think of. I'm totally excited for Edward's sponge bath, hehe! Great chapter....can't wait for the next one!



Author's Response:

Excited for a sponge bath, eh?  Shooccckkkinng :)

And I agree, there was purpose in the filler.  Which is why I even bothered with it.  It'd have been easy to throw a couple lines in depicting the passage of time, but I think Bella addressed some very real concerns of hers, I think the Cullens came to a bit more of an understanding, and we get to see Alice's support of both Bella and the vamp, her efforts to convince the family.. yeah yeah, I could go on.  In the end, while it's a filler, it had some of those boring necessities laced throughout it!

 

Thanks for reviewing!

- Michelle

Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 09:49 PM · On: The Pillow

I'm enjoying the development of the story and looking forward to more - good luck on your finals and have fun on the vacation :)

Reviewer: puzzle fan (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 09:48 PM · On: The Pillow

This is great!

Reviewer: brain candy (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 09:47 PM · On: The Pillow

Nice chapter!  I feel so bad for Edward!

Reviewer: Midnight Belle (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 09:41 PM · On: The Pillow

very cute I liked it. keep up the good work

Reviewer: Coriea (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 09:23 PM · On: The Pillow

I love it! Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: Suelue123 (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 09:01 PM · On: The Pillow

I'm liking the story. Looking forward to see how things evolve. Good luck on your finals.

Reviewer: tea_for_too (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 08:53 PM · On: The Pillow

omg i love this story sfm im dying to know what happens i just read these all in a row like in a trance like whaaaaat the fuck happened to poor edward?! . the mystery deepends dun dun dunnn



Author's Response:

SFM = so fucking much?  I'm not down with all the acronyms yet, but that's immediately where my head went :)

 

I'm glad you're enjoying it sfm!  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: silly bj (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 08:33 PM · On: The Pillow

A filler chapter is better than no chapter.  How long is your vacation?  What about WIFI?  Snail mail?  Homing pigeons?    Pony Express?  Smoke signals?

I guess I'll just have to wait.



Author's Response:

Haha, I didn't mean to imply that I'd not update the entire time I was away; I just mean that they'll come sporadically over the next few weeks, ETAs won't be possible.. but when I get online I'll be happy to post chapters :)

Reviewer: Twilight_Lurker (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 08:32 PM · On: The Pillow

Another terrific chapter!  Like others have said, the dynamic with Bella as the strong one is refreshing.  Looking forward to seeing this story continue to develop.

Good luck with finals, and enjoy your vacation!



Author's Response:

Thank you, x3 (the story, the finals & the vacation)... x4 -- add reviewing to that list!

Glad you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: Capricorn75 (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 08:20 PM · On: The Pillow

I appreciate the pacing on this story. Having worked with abused and abandoned animals before, I understand that it takes a lot of time, love, and patience to earn their trust.

Reviewer: Babette (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 08:08 PM · On: The Pillow

This was wonderful.  Edward is definitely able to hear what is going on, like Carlisle's discussion with Alice.  He was also able to read Alice's thoughts about Bella leaving to call Charlie, and I'm betting the consequences of Bella's phone ringing. 

I think Edward is also disturbed that he can't read Bella's thoughts.  It makes him unable to trust her words (not that he trusts anyone else's thoughts, just it makes it harder for him).  Edward also knows they are lying to Charlie, so this increases his distrust. 

I can only imagine what went through Edward's head when he was given the pillow.  He was expecting pain, but received kindness.  I think that is what has been confusing him for a couple days now.  I'm interested to know when they plan on giving him something else besides human blood to feed on.  The Cullen's don't drink human blood, and I know they don't view donated blood the same way, but when will they offer the alternative?



Author's Response:

My take on this is that, since Edward is operating on instinct in the moment, they think it'll be easier to get him to drink human blood than animal blood.

Whether that is true or not is yet to be determined, but I think that right now they just want him to drink any blood!

Reviewer: Hidden_Forces (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 08:03 PM · On: The Pillow

Your 'filler' is going over BEAUTIFULLY!! If what you wrote is just 'filler' then sweetheart, bring it on! I absolutely ADORE this story.  You write so well!  I feel like I'm there in the basement with her (I wish lol).  I know that you're busy, but PLEASE update soon.  I'm so addicted!

 

Hugs,

Kristi



Author's Response:

I'm VERY excited about the next chapter, and getting more excited the more I plan it out, so hopefully I'll be able to throw it out there before umm.. yanno.  I leave next Tuesday.

 

We'll see, thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: an_edward_chick (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 07:46 PM · On: The Pillow

I enjoyed the transition chapter.  There is so much I have questions about, and so much I look forward to happening regarding this vampire.  Please update as soon as you are capable.

Reviewer: getshorty8 (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 07:41 PM · On: The Pillow

OK, Carlisle needs to analyze that venom, now!  I'm running out of patience.  And, I love how Bella is a source of extreme comfort for him, how Jasper and Alice recognize it and are amazed and bewildered. 

Looking forward to some bathing of Edward in the next chapter, woot!



Author's Response:

Don't run out of patience yet!  Edward still has quite a ways to go, it'd be a shame to be fresh out of patience already!

Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 07:41 PM · On: The Pillow

I love that despite Alice's lack of clarity on her visions, she just knows that Bella is going to be okay with her vampire.  Emmett provided some much appreciated comic relief.

 

I liked that this chapter shows Bella falling further and further from her old world and giving into her new world - which revolves around her vampire.  Even with her ominous thoughts, "I couldn’t help but wonder if he would be so innocent when he was better."

 

I'm so looking forward to the clean-up... i'm doing some research...

 



Author's Response:

Alice FTW.

She's golden.

And your research astounds me!  I have not yet looked into the things you are looking into for me.

I think I can't thank you enough at this point.  You're making the process so much more pleasant!

Reviewer: JAustenlover (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 07:30 PM · On: The Pillow

What a really, really interesting and intriguing story! Of course I want to find out what happens...is he some bizarre government experiment gone bad? Is he a vampire that resorted to self-mutilation? Hope not.

 Bella appears to be drawn to him in a similar manner to Canon Edward; yep, I caught the 'Messward', and since he was missing from the Cullen family...

Looking forward to more!

 



Author's Response:

Glad you're enjoying it!

Thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: WiththeMurf (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 07:24 PM · On: The Pillow

I understand the point of fillers. It's important and adds to the significance of description. And, you're such a good writer that it's not the least bit boring. Ah, can't wait for the next post!

Good luck on your finals and have a great vacation! :) 

Reviewer: wannabet1901 (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 07:16 PM · On: The Pillow

i love it so far and i'll be checkin compulsively for updates!! great writing!

Reviewer: Venus_Star2_com (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 07:09 PM · On: The Pillow

Poor edward waht happened to him? was he experimented on by Aro? then again how the hell did he end up in the forrest? something evil is going on in Forks....

 

 

Bella is very brave but you write her and edward's moments as there is this unseen cord pulling them together..i myself feel the same feeling when bella is with edward in this chapter...beautifully written and I look forward to reading more soon

 

 



Author's Response:

"Bella is very brave but you write her and edward's moments as there is this unseen cord pulling them together..i myself feel the same feeling when bella is with edward in this chapter...beautifully written and I look forward to reading more soon"

 

It's that gravity business that Smeyer is always talkin about! :D Ahh!!

No, really.  At some point, I'll be able to explore the mechanics of what is going on right now, but it's so raw at the moment, no one is really thinking in terms of the bigger picture yet (except maybe alice????)

Thanks for reviewing, glad you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: RomperStomper (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 07:06 PM · On: The Pillow

Incredibly engrossing story line. Looking forward to your updates.

Reviewer: Sophz456 (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 07:03 PM · On: The Pillow

Oh wow. This is such an interesting story to read, it's absolutely fascinating.

I feel so sorry for Edward, and I think Bella is just amazing... She cares about him so much that she's willing to risk her life to try and help him. Beautiful.

A random thought just occured to me, but I'm going to send you a message about it instead of typing it in this review because if I'm right it might be a bit spoilery.

Anyway, I really like this fic - update as soon as you can please =]

Sophy x



Author's Response:

Okay, I look forward to your message :)

I'm glad you're enjoying it!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: CaptainKirk (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 07:01 PM · On: The Pillow

Edward can read minds can't he? Jasper makes a comment about how Edward tenses up like he is expection Jasper to grab him.

Bella's going to have to be the one to help get Edward cleaned up isn't she. She's the only one he allows close enough to touch him.

So are we going to get an update before you go on vacation? Or are you planning on writing several chapters and then posting after you get back?



Author's Response:

"Edward can read minds can't he? Jasper makes a comment about how Edward tenses up like he is expection Jasper to grab him."

The implications of that comment specifically is that he can read minds, although it's neither outwardly confirmed nor denied at this point.  It's a fair bet that he can, though :)

The cleaning up q -- will be answered in the next chapter :) 

And the updates.. ahh, the updates.  If I am able to get another chapter finished before I leave I most certainly will post it, and I have high hopes of being able to do so, but it's no guarentee.

Then while I'm actually gone -- I'll still have internet access, just limited.  So I'm planning on writing plenty, getting ahead some maybe, and then posting chapters whenever I get online.  Which means I basically am unable to give ETAs at any point, but I'll still try to update as often as possible. :) I'll get a couple chapters out during my break, hopefully.

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