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Reviewer: bumbelbee (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 01:48 AM · On: The Antidote

Oh no, that was cruel! How could you leave us with such an evil cliff hanger?

Please, update as soon as you possibly can!

This chapter was pretty intense and I love the way Bella's trying to protect him, although she's only a fragile human.

It's very refreching to read something, where Bella is protective and stronger than Edward, and not the other way around.

By the way, I really really like this story! ;)



Author's Response:

Sorry ;) ETA = Thursday maybe.

Yeah, bellas sort of irrational in this story.  she brought that from her OC ;)

I'm glad you're enjoying it.. eventually heopfully the vamp will be stronger than bella, though.  Although I think she'll always have the edge on him mentally :)

Thanks for reviewing!

- Michelle

Reviewer: Kirallie (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 01:48 AM · On: The Antidote

Please let that last bit be a nightmare! Did the antidote work?



Author's Response:

Chapter 10! :)

Reviewer: march14th (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 01:14 AM · On: The Antidote

sweet jesus... one hell of a chapter! i love it. and i like that you update regularly. this is currently #3 of my favorite fanfics ever and believe me michellephants, i have read a lot!

<3



Author's Response:

Ohhhh.. *wonders what 1 and 2 are*

I'm glad this made it so high on your list! *blushes* Hopefully I can keep it sort of interesting and not boring, but we'll see :D

- Michelle

Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 12:01 AM · On: The Antidote

It's getting pretty intense! I can't for the life of me imagine the reasons for his condition. I'm eager to find out!



Author's Response:

Yeah, something isn't right there! :K Who in the world...?  Anyway, that answer probably own't come out for a bit, so you'll just have to stick with the story! ;)

Thanks for reviewing!

- Michelle

Reviewer: mspolarisblack (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 11:22 PM · On: The Antidote

ohhh my god!!!!. i saw this rec'd in the forums and came over inmediately...and all I have to say is Oh MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is amazing..absolutely amazing, poor Edward..I mean thsi story is gut wrenching....and of course he hears their thoughts so it even harder for him...OH MY!!!!..I really reaally hope you update soon and its big ass chapter...=) I LOVE IT!!! I absolutely love it...

I've been obsessed with Twilight for the last couple of months and I have quite a few stories in the AU category that I love but this one...this one is by far my favorite...this is jsut amazing..I love it!!! You are amazing!!!!! Arghh...I cant wait for more...THIS IS BY FAR ONE OF THE BEST FANFICS I'VE READ...and i've read a looooot of fandoms...oh..i lvoe it..i love...and im ranting so...ill try to cut it short....



Author's Response:

I'm so glad I didn't disappoint you!

I'm so flattered that you love this so much, hopefully I can keep the future chapters on the same level! Lots to live up to! :o

Thanks for reviewing

- Michelle

Reviewer: elektrik_lady (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 11:08 PM · On: The Antidote

what!!?? you can't leave it like that!!! you are so mean! D:

Reviewer: Pumpkinette (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 10:55 PM · On: The Antidote

Ahhhh, to late I just sharted all over the place..... That was one intence ass chapter and really fricking good. I think I just died a little inside haha really, I hope that god I dont even know, its the Cullens and not the bad guys or that Bellas just dreaming! Great chapter again, That last part had me sittin on the edge of my chair an I about fell off to!

You are really amazing haha

Angel



Author's Response:

Hah, sorry.. I tried to prevent mass bowel movements by distracting you guys with reviewing, but it seems i failed hard.

I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for reviewing!

- Michelle

Reviewer: zess (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 10:43 PM · On: The Antidote

Gah---your pacing is fantastic.  I'm enjoying this so much...which might mean I'm some kind of sicko, b/c it's really heartbreaking.  ;)

You're a great writer. 



Author's Response:

Thank you! It's so nice when I get positive pacing comments.  It's just what I need to counter the 'hurry the fuck up' reviews..!

Thanks for reviewing! (p.s. if it makes you a sicko, we're all sickos............ :))

Reviewer: Jawands87 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 10:33 PM · On: The Antidote

i love this story!! cant wait for the update... its so well written and thought out.. absolutely LOVE IT!!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it!

- Michelle

Reviewer: latuacantante4him (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 10:30 PM · On: The Antidote

You stopped here???  UGH!!!  Evil.  :)  Great chapter.  On the edge of my seat waiting for the next one.



Author's Response:

I did.  /hangs head in shame/

Sorry about that :P

Reviewer: mikki13tx (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 10:27 PM · On: The Antidote

Fantastic...



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: khhc (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 10:07 PM · On: The Antidote

crapping myself cause now im all caught up and now i have to wait for an update.  livin in a dark basement might be worse...maybe

Reviewer: CaptainKirk (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 09:48 PM · On: The Antidote

You should be sorry for the state you have left me in after this cliffy. I only like cliffy's if the next chapter is already up. I tend to be more of a block reader than a read-a-little-bit-at a time person. I read Breaking Dawn within twenty-four hours.

You must update again....really really soon.

Oh...and I loved the action in this chapter. I hope that Bella gets to be Edward's hero for once and saves him from the bad scientists. If she does save him it might convince him to speak to her. Fingers crossed.

Keep up the great work!!!!!



Author's Response:

If it's vamps then there's no way in hell Bella will be able to be the vamp's hero.

Although, maybe she already is??

Thanks for reviewing again :)

- Michelle

Reviewer: Cendy Hale Cullen (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 09:43 PM · On: The Antidote

It's building up now and I love it. Can't wait for chapter 10!

Reviewer: khhc (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 09:31 PM · On: The Trial

still lovin it

Reviewer: Missa (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 09:29 PM · On: The Antidote

Evil cliffhanger! I like the way you've developed the relationship between Bella and the Cullens, and the little ways they dispense information to her.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad the fact that Bella is friends with Cullens seems to be growing on people ;)

 

Reviewer: EmberIce22 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 09:14 PM · On: The Antidote

Aw damn it!!!!  Here I am just hangin'....waiting to know who the hell was behind that door!!  That's just mean...now I'm gonna lay in bed and wonder what roller coaster ride your going to take my fragile emotions on next (but hey at least it's something to think about....insomnia sucks!)  haha.   So yep this story is still my own personal crack!!!  Can't wait to see what's in store for our poor vampire next.....when will he speak, does he understand Bella, does he remember what happen to him?  Gaa, okay enough with my rambling!  Thanks for the great chapter.

Sorry for all the late night/early morning reviews but with insomnia and working an 6 pm to 6:30 am shift, three times a week my sleeping schedule is shot to hell.....



Author's Response:

It's cool -- I need to apologize for all the late night/early morning replies.  I usually go back and read them and think 'wtf did i say..' :)

So thinking is definitely good -- also, check the thread on the AU forum! That's a fan-tastic way to occupy yourself in the wee hours! :)

Glad it's still your crack! thank for reviewing! :D

- Michelle

Reviewer: bells123 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 09:12 PM · On: The Antidote

What??!  Maybe she's dreaming.  That must be it - she fell asleep rubbing his back.  I can hope, can't I? ;)

I love how Emmett is teasing Bella and yet remaining sensitive to her feelings at the same time.  Great interaction between them at the diner.

And the continued development between Bella and Edward is so heartbreakingly precious.  I can't wait for him just to be able to speak.



Author's Response:

Yes, you may hope, if you dare to! :)

I'm still pulling for him to start speaking soon, but he's traumatized, dammit! :)

Thanks for reviewing!

- Michelle

Reviewer: SeanEmma4Evr (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 09:12 PM · On: The Antidote

Seriously love this story. I'm anxiously waiting!

Reviewer: Twilight_Lurker (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 09:07 PM · On: The Antidote

Missed reviewing the past couple of chapters.  The story is terrific and deserves all the accolades it is getting.  The pacing, characterizations, plot...all wonderful. 



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm so glad you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: ThreeAM (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 09:05 PM · On: The Antidote

I am so seriously addicted to this story it's not even funny. Talk about my own brand of heroin. The plot is incredible so far, and I love the feeling I've got that there are plenty of surprises in store for us. (His first words: "My name... is James.") 

But seriously, the relationship you've created between this completely vulnerable Edward and a completely protective Bella is awesome. I love that it defies reason for both of them and is pure instinct.

Can't wait for my next fix!



Author's Response:

(His first words: "My name... is James.")

You and I are definitely on the same page there.  It's my dream to make those his first words. Literally. I think about it all the time.. like, what would happen, if it wasn't edward? heh, that's *my* brand of heroin!

 

I'm glad you're enjoying it! Thank you for reviewing

- Michelle

Reviewer: JMCullen (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 09:01 PM · On: The Antidote

OMG!!!!!! You have got to update ASAP. I'm dying here! I need to know who he lunged at. Please, please, please, don't make me wait too long. Lol.



Author's Response:

Lol I'll try not to :P

Thanks for reviewing again! :)

Reviewer: puzzle fan (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 08:54 PM · On: The Antidote

That was a cruel, cruel cliffie.

Reviewer: BellaWillow (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 08:54 PM · On: The Antidote

That was the best chapter yet! A little more progress was made in the personal relationship between Edward and Bella and the last part was a purely evil cliffhanger!

Looking forward to seeing what Edward jumped at next chapter! :)



Author's Response:

It was! On both counts.  Lots of progress and mean cliffie.  No lies :)

Thanks for reviewing!

- Michelle

Reviewer: twilight_stupor (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 08:44 PM · On: The Antidote

Oh my goodness!  A cliffie!  But I still love this story and I still love you for writing it.  I was trying to wait until I went to bed, but I just couldn't resist reading it once I checked my email.  I am hoping beyond hope that it's really not his captors at the door--and that it is just someone else unexpected instead.  I guess I'll just have to wait and see, though.  Thanks for writing!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're still enjoying it, despite my pure evilness!

And.. you'll find out soon! :)

Thanks for reviewing!

- Michelle

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