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Reviewer: txgrl (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 06:32 PM · On: The Bedroom

I love this story.  I wish you could write as fast as I can read!  Can't wait for a little verbal action from Edward.  More More More!!



Author's Response:

Heh, if we count all these review responses I type up, I've got a lot of writing under my belt each week! :D

I'm excited for him to talk as well, I hope I do him justice!

Thanks for the review

- Michelle

Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 06:31 PM · On: The Bedroom

Aww, he's getting better and how cute was Bella and the Vamp in the bedroom. This is a great story and I look forward to the next installment.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying it still; I think this chapter answered a few of your previous questions, and I'll answer the naked question in the next a/n!

Thanks for reviewing (x10 give or take)!

- Michelle

Reviewer: JennaJakul (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 06:05 PM · On: The Bedroom

okay so i love it...

please tell me this *boy* will talk to her soon..cause it's driving me nuts!

also...i love the fact bella is still dependant on "edward'



Author's Response:

Haha, he'll talk soon, no worries x)

Thanks for reviewing

- Michelle

Reviewer: WiththeMurf (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 05:55 PM · On: The Bedroom

Gah, I just love this story! Best chapter so far in my book. When Bella got back to the mansion and realized he wasn't in the basement, I knew he was in a bedroom! :) *sigh* Quick question: Was he protecting Bella against Jasper in the beginning or just acting defensively because he was getting some of his energy back? That will probably be addressed in future chapters and I will totally go check out the thread, but that part is bugging me a little. I'm just impatient!

And, I just love Emmett and his dialogue. He makes me smile! *giggle* 

You are wonderful, as always. :)



Author's Response:

According to Jasper, he was acting to protect her :) He didn't actually get any energy from the antidote itself, so whatever he used to spring himself, had to have been stored.  Which means that -- it would take some serious business for him to want to use what he had left in him!

Glad you enjoyed this one!

- Michelle

Reviewer: drkvctry (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 05:53 PM · On: The Bedroom

im so damn happy and torn about him getting better.

i am so happy that we get email updates now that i could cry



Author's Response:

lol, I'm glad you worked out the email update thing! This site can be confusing, that's certain x)

You're torn about him getting better?!

I guess I can see that.  I'm just sad he's out of the basement. /cry.

Thanks for reviewing!

- Michelle

Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 05:47 PM · On: The Antidote

Wow, I just feel so sad for the vampire. His life seems like utter pain except for some of the peace that Bella provides to him. 



Author's Response:

Yep, Bella is his white light.. yanno, all hokey and stuff.. but she is.  Seriously, I can't imagine he's been shown much kindness in a long time, and even the Cullens are forced to do mean things to him.. so it's so nice that he finally has someone to help him through it x)

 

Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 05:08 PM · On: The Trial

The science is daunting but I am with you. I love the Author's Note about Alice, Emmett and Bella having no clue either so I feel good about questioning it. Great exchange between Bella and the vampire to get him to drink the anecdote.

Reviewer: princessitavalevale (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 04:47 PM · On: The Bedroom

yay! he's getting better!!! =)

pls continueee sooon

XOXO



Author's Response:

Yep, he's gettin better indeed! :D

- Michelle

Reviewer: Venus (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 04:46 PM · On: The Bedroom

 I love this fic! It breaks my heart how broken Edward is and how Bella tries to comfort him but it's never enough, it seems. I'm so, so happy that they're finally makng progress in his recovery and he can digest the blood they're giving him. Hopefully, he can see that they're helping him and starts to open up to them a little bit, especially Bella. It makes me sad how much Charlie misses her though, and she just sees it as a punishment. :/ 

And about your summary, I don't think the summary is bad but I think maybe you should say something about Edward being weakened by outside forces or something, because I couldn't understand how they could hold a vampire with all the strengths from the books, in a basement. i didn't know Edward had been experimented on and brutalized. But I'm so glad I read it now! I look forward to the next update! 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying it!

He's already opening up to bella a bit, I'd say :)

Meh, I'll work on the summary.  I hate hate hate writing summaries, so.. we'll see x)

Thanks for the review/advice!

- Michelle

Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 04:29 PM · On: The Venom

I was thinking he was making himself sick by not drinking blood to combat the monster inside him. I have never been so glad to be wrong. This is really interesting information about the venom findings and the inhibitors. I like that they also decided to bathe him. How about clothing? Isn't Charlie going to be suspicious about the amount of time that Bella has been at the Cullens? I know they stalled him with the project excuse but that can last only so long.



Author's Response:

Since you're still not caught up -- I'll let you get through ch.10 then answer any questions you still have (that won't ruin future plot, of course!)

Thanks for the continued review!

- Michelle

Reviewer: somelikeithot66 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 03:59 PM · On: The Bedroom

I absolutely love where you are taking this story!!! I am constantly checking for updates from you, and I get so excited when I see that there are! This story is so well-written and I'm loving it! Thanks for sharing it with us!



Author's Response:

you're welcome! Thank you for reviewing! It makes the long nights of writing and rewriting all worth it!

- Michelle

Reviewer: mcc101180 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 03:53 PM · On: The Bedroom

Yay. So happy he's on the mend and that he'll still be there when Bella comes back.  Looking forward to how Bella learned about the Cullens.  Once again Emmett cracks me up.  Loving this, and cant wait to see what happens next.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing!

- Michelle

Reviewer: NicoleRea (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 03:47 PM · On: The Bedroom

Yay, he's not Basementward anymore!  Can't wait to see what happens next.  Still enjoying the pace of this story, btw.



Author's Response:

Glad you still enjoy the pace! Thanks for the review!

- Michelle

Reviewer: EdwardsBloodType (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 03:25 PM · On: The Bedroom

I am very curious to know if he can read minds, which would explain why he is comfortable most with Bella. And when is he gonna get some clothes on? The peen hanging in the wind is still a major distraction for me. LOL. I am not sad to see Basementward go, cause we need some answers damnit!!!Great story, love it so much.



Author's Response:

There are several indications that he can read minds -- so I'd say it's a fair assumption that he can at this point.

I'm going to make a nice little beginning a/n explaining why he doesn't have clothes on next chapter, no worries x) There are very real reasons for this!

Glad you enjoyed this one, thanks for the review!

- Michelle

Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 03:01 PM · On: The Pillow

Really awesome response by Carlisle about the pillow and Emmett to Bella having the vamp on her lap. Great chapter. Thanks.

Reviewer: marvelousmarbles (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 03:01 PM · On: The Bedroom

Hmmm, I wonder what Alice's big goofy grin is about??? DUH!!!  love this... it feels so nice to imagine his cheeks filling out, him getting healthier...



Author's Response:

Yeah, it's so good that he's finally improving physically.  We've seen emotional growth slowly over the past several chapters, but here we actually get some physical proof of his progress!

Thanks for the review

- Michelle

Reviewer: puzzle fan (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 02:52 PM · On: The Bedroom

I just love this!

Reviewer: BabyVampBella (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 02:49 PM · On: The Bedroom

Very glad basementward is getting better. I wanted to throttle Rosalie for trying to keep Bella away from him. I love love love this story; its so interesting!

Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying this story!  Thanks so much for the review!

- Michelle

Reviewer: KRo (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 02:14 PM · On: The Bedroom

I totally forgot that he was naked until you mentioned it in the AN but it totally changes my mental picture of him in a bed.  Yum!  So I am going to miss basementward but I am super happy that he is getting better!  Can't wait to see what happens next!



Author's Response:

LoL, I think my AN  might've changed the tone of the whole chapter, which is hilarious :P

Glad you enjoyed this one, thanks for reviewing!

- Michelle

Reviewer: Dropped the Pen (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 02:11 PM · On: The Bedroom

I hope Alice's smile is about what I'm thinking it's about~! I totally forgive you for that cliffhanger last chapter because of the way this one ended. Even though Bella has to go home, I'm so happy Edward's getting better. :) Though, I really am going to miss Basementward. There's just something about Bella being the protector that's so ... right. *happy sigh*

And I must say, Charlie thinking Bella was dating Emmett was too cute. Poor guy doesn't have a clue. Of course, he never seems to have one when it concerns Bella and the Cullens, but that's besides the point.

Anyways, I'm rambling, but I'd like to end this with an apology for only getting around to review now, and a big heaping spoonful of gratitude for you for writing this story. I absolutely love it. :)



Author's Response:

Yes! The ending of this chapter is so hopeful, which is such a different tone than the previous ones!

And no apologies necessary -- you reviewed! That's all I ask :D Thanks so much for that,

- Michelle

Reviewer: MotoBella (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 02:10 PM · On: The Bedroom

I still love it :-)  So glad he's finally getting better.  This whole concept of a broken Edward makes me uncomfortable!  I seriously can not wait for their first conversation.  When he opens his mouth to speak I'll probably have heart palpitations LOL!

And UGH, Rose.  Isn't that just like her to get all attached to Bella's vampire.  Ha!



Author's Response:

Yeah, it's sort of a rough situation, but I think all the angst will pay off in the end.. I hope.

I'm glad you're still enjoying it ! Thanks for your continued reviews :)

- Michelle

Reviewer: SecretlyObsessed (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 02:09 PM · On: The Bedroom

So excited you updated! Loving it! I'm glad he's in a bedroom even if it doesn't really matter to him.  Can't wait for Bella to get all snuggly with the Vamp. :D Thanks for all the awesomeness that is this story!



Author's Response:

Aww *imagines them cuddling*

I love reading the reviews because it always puts these fluffy images in my head.

Someone else got me thinking about basementward sneaking back into the basement in the middle of the night.  It made me all happy/sad.  Gah, I love it! :)

- Michelle

Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 02:00 PM · On: The Next Day

Awesome chapter. Great writing. I like how Bella has began referring to him as "my vampire". It is adorable. I also love the vampire and Bella bonding scenes.



Author's Response:

Glad you're still enjoying and reviewing! I love when people read through the whole thing but review each chapter, it's refreshing!

- Michelle

Reviewer: hexagonalprodigy (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 01:40 PM · On: The Bedroom

Nakkkkeddd joy. <3

This is so uncliched, and fantastic, and I love at how the progress moves at just the right speed, much like a  creek. I'm very excited to see more. Oh, and I just wanted to thank you for your dedication to this, and because you update so frequently, it keeps me from losing the momentum of the story. :)



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoy the pacing, I get so worried about it! Glad you're still enjoying it, thanks for reviewing!

- Michelle

 

Reviewer: maddaq (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 01:35 PM · On: The Bedroom

cant go wrong with a naked vamp. 

i'm am glad that basementward is finally getting better.  i just hope he does't drain bella.



Author's Response:

Haha, it's true.  Everyone wants him clothed but I say -- keep him naked! :)

Thanks for reviewing

- Michelle

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