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Reviewer: blkeyes_redlips (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 10:28 AM · On: The Weekend

Fucking A, man. It never ceases to amaze me when this is updated! As small as it was, my favorite part was when she fell asleep and during the night she rolled away from him. I imagined Edward's face completely confused and scared, but when she woke up realizing she was in his arms again, I smirked. She scared the crap out of him! I knew waking up abruptly was a jolt, but poor Edward.

Gah, waiting is still a hassle for a human.



Author's Response:

Yeah, the abrupt turn frightened him, but he overcame it alright. :) I'm glad you liked this one!

Reviewer: Eline (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 10:04 AM · On: The Weekend

Yay, update's for this story make me sooo happy :D

and yet another great chapter, nicely done! I love clothing-ward also :D

Reviewer: magpye (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 10:01 AM · On: The Hunt

What if they ran into a real life Buffy while hunting AND SHE KILLED EMMETT?

Ha ha ha...Love it!!!

Reviewer: lisamichelle17 (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 09:58 AM · On: The Weekend

Oh my.. It's so nice to see Edward becoming a little more comfortable with Emmett and Alice. I might be imagining things but 90 years of being imprisoned it would be hard to trust anyone. I love how Edward isn't scared of Bella. Them sleeping together was so tender and sweet.

To be honest with you, I think Rosalie is like a mom in this fic. I may be way off but that is why she is so protective of Edward. She wants to protect him just like Bella.

I loved the fact that you explained how Bella found out about the Cullens.

I loved the subtle introduction of the piano.

I do miss shirtless ward but it seems like he could use a bath :-)



Author's Response:

yes! And so many people are begging for him to just be better already -- I'm glad people realize that it'll take some time to get over that kind of thing!

She's very protective of him, and I'm trying to keep her close to canon, if that says anything :)

The piano was actually mentioned in an earlier chapter as well, :) It's like a piano scavenger hunt! :D

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Babette (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 09:48 AM · On: The Weekend

Michelle, this was beautiful! 

Edward didn't know what he was?  I guess if no one told him that makes sense.  He had to know he was different.  He was able to tell that Bella was different from the others.  I love how you're leaking out his history, bit by bit.  Keeping us on our toes. 

Bella and Jasper's game of playing with emotions was hilarious!  Some much needed levity in the middle of the angst.  It was so great to see her relationship with him.  Something sadly missing in the books, especially considering that Alice was Bella's best friend. 

I know all the Cullen's are concerned about Alice's vision.  I liked Emmett's reaction the best, let her choose.  Of course, she doesn't even know about the choice yet, does she?  I'm sure Edward does.  Has the vision only been of Bella as a vampire?  Not one of Edward and Bella together?  I would imagine Edward would be confused as to why Bella's eyes would change to red, when he doesn't understand what he himself is. 

I was glad to see Edward in some different clothes.  I think of each and every step toward healing as something that will help him and Bella have their HEA at some point.  I can feel the love growing between them (although I broke out in tears when she startled him and he thought she was going to hurt him!), and it is so wonderful to see him take these steps.  I would imagine that he could read, though.  I think Kyrene mentioned something about basic abilities coming with them, even if they don't have human memories?  Of course, this is AU, so do with it as you please.  It's been amazing so far.

And I'll end this epic review by apologizing for not being more constant on the thread.  Life has been seriously busy, so I've been sporadic everywhere.  When it calms down, I hope you'll have me back!



Author's Response:

Babette! I'm supposed to be studying but I'll take a minute to respond :)

Most of what you pointed out is still ambiguous, in fact, the whole question of "you're different?" was somewhat ambiguous, no? Bella sort of just rolled with it, but it's entirely possible that he meant something else. Although it's possible that he meant vamp/human, as well. Hmm.. so it's possible/probable that he knows what he is, especially given his mind reading. He's at least gotta know by this point, with hearing the cullen's thoughts on "the vampire" etc.

I'm glad you liked the jasper/bella game! I've gotten a lot of comments on it, people all seem to be in agreement that it's funny and lightens the tone. Snort :D

Alice actually had at least one other vision, which she mentions briefly. But it looks like her disconcerting vision was that of her and bella huggin.

and I agree -- basic  things are carried over. While I'm sure he's out of practice, I don't anticipate her needing to teach him to read.

And no worries about the thread! I'm so glad you're still enjoying it, everyone's life has been hectic lately, it's nuts! :D

Thanks for reviewing hon!

Reviewer: Twilightlurrvver (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 09:25 AM · On: The Weekend

i love it.

AND iim sooooo glad u write LOTS

thank youuu

Reviewer: careolinagirl (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 09:24 AM · On: The Weekend

Loved this chapter!  The story just keeps getting better and better.  Glad that Edward is getting more under control with vamps in the room too.  Keep it up, you're awesome at this!  Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: somelikeithot66 (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 09:22 AM · On: The Weekend

Greatness. Summary of this chapter? Greatness. I cannot get enough of this story. I really love the movement of your writing, and I love the new Clothed-ward. You're amazing, so keep it up. 

Reviewer: mysticvysgiyi (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 09:21 AM · On: The Weekend

Amazing!!! Of course I miss bare-chested-edward but...we've got access in the bed!! Almost as good as naked and partially naked edward. And at least now his psyche is a bit more normal. I hope he gets to go out on that sunday. Its obvious he needs and wants to be out there. And I'm glad that someone else sees how ridic Rosalie is being. :D on the downside I'm leaving for China for a month and I doubt ill be able to get access to this. :( so hopefully you'll have written tonnes more by the time I get back and well get to hear more about the elusive edward mason. Great job and good luck!!

Author's Response:

He's definitely getting better :) He does seem very fascinated by the outside, so we'll see :)

HAve fun in China!!!!!!!!! Hopefully there will be at least 4 new chaps, if you're leaving for a month :D

Thanks for the review

Reviewer: soclutch (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 09:17 AM · On: The Hunt

awesome chapter per usual. im glad he is finally speaking.. ughh poor vampire trapped in a lab all those yrs.. no wonder why he trusts no one. he cant even remember his family. i feel so bad for him... another review said they are glad james is out of the picture. i agreee, but no mention of laurent or victoria which means they have to be on the prowl. i wonder what other visions alice had. u made it clear that she had the one with bella as a vamp.. im assuming the other ones are where edward kills her.. ughh i love this story so far. 

Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 09:13 AM · On: The Weekend

awww that chapter was choc-full of sweet moments really, even with the laptop-panic, Bella's internal thoughts as she worked through the effect it was having was insightful.

Kind of glad to see James is already out of the loop hehe though I wonder if there's going to be some kind of earlier Edward connection - we're still unaware of how Edward got to where he was when the Cullen's found him, and if there's really a secret lab that close to Forks, how's it not been noticed with all the supernatural residents around the place? :) Many more chapters to look forward to the revelations from, I guess!



Author's Response:

It was fluff! FLUFF! How nuts is that! :)

And it's true -- there's really no way he travelled there on his own, right? Interesting, indeed :)

Thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 09:10 AM · On: The Weekend

They are getting so much closer and with every word he speaks, more is revealed. This is an awesome story!

Reviewer: kellyliz82 (Anonymous) · Date: April 28, 2009 08:56 AM · On: The Weekend

Another great chapter! Seeing an update made my day.:) I love that Edward is opening up to Bella more and more. I enjoy learning more about him and am looking forward to hearing about his vampire past. Thanks for telling the story of how Bella met the Cullens. I love how it wasn't all sunshine and roses, she was terrified of them by what she saw. Very believeable. I love that Edward dressed himself, it is more proof that he is healing. Looking forward to the next chapter. This story has me captivated!

 



Author's Response:

yes! he's most definitely healing, dressing himself was a HUGE step! :)

Thanks so much for the review :)

Reviewer: sunshine76 (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 08:55 AM · On: The Weekend

wow. I love it! You put so much emotion in your writting, awesome chapter! I check everyday for an update .....Im hooked :)

Reviewer: ladyebug (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 08:53 AM · On: The Weekend

coming out of a traumatic experience should be disorienting-you're capturing it beautifully.

I look forward to the next chapter!!

Reviewer: SAMm3 (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 08:49 AM · On: The Weekend

I've been so excited to follow this story.  Kind of sad to say 'bye to shirtless-ward.  But I like his exploration of books, laptop.  

Reviewer: katyt22 (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 08:46 AM · On: The Weekend

aaaaahhhhhh!  I love this story.  So far it is such a "feel good" story.  Please let Edward stay a good guy and not freak out and hurt anyone so that he ends up getting hurt.  This love between Bella and Edward makes me get all teary eyed.



Author's Response:

Edward = a good guy?!! Heh, we'll see ;)

Reviewer: sassyf (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 08:44 AM · On: The Weekend

I'm glad he has his own clothes now!!  LOL! 

What a sweet chapter.  He is responding to Bella.  I'm just wondering how they are ever going to figure out what happened to him?  And  when is he going to start talking to the others?

I'm also looking forward to a love story...maybe??



Author's Response:

Story notes ;) Chapter 1 A/N :)

It's a love story ;)

Thanks for the review! He'll start talking very very soon :)

Reviewer: thisistami (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 08:41 AM · On: The Weekend

I've read everything.  It all starts to get so predictable. I love this story. iFic material, I say.

Reviewer: missloonylovegood (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 08:35 AM · On: The Weekend

Soooo sweet! I wish poor Edward could remember his family, though. So... did Alice and Edward like... switch the whole memory loss thing?



Author's Response:

Nah, not switched. More like.. Edward gained one memory loss, and Alice still has her memory loss. Gah, makes no sense, sorry.

 

Alice still is alice.. so she probably doesn't remember her past :)

Reviewer: Laila Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 08:34 AM · On: The Weekend

90 year in captivity wow that's a tough one, poor Edward. I'm glad that he is healing slowly but still.

The Edward and Bella interacting was so cute. It broke my heart when Bella woke up and Edward held her and when he was scared because she moved so fast. He is getting better he even let Alice and Emmett in the room.

Bella and Jasper that's hilarious, speaking of inside joke. That was an awesome chapter again, my favorite so far.

Thanks for sharing. 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: anastasia86 (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 08:32 AM · On: The Weekend

I'm glad we finally got got the story about how bella met the cullens and I'm so glad he's getting better...once more this is by far my favorite story...you've done a wonderful job with it.

Reviewer: Olirin (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 08:19 AM · On: The Weekend

I think this was my favorite chapter so far.  I loved the littel Bella and Jasper interaction with the emotions.  That was so cute and funny.  I also loved the slight glimpse into the future that Alice sees for Bella.  I think I knew that is what she was seeing and why everyone was so upset. 

But most of all and as usual (I guess you are not the only one sounding like a broken record) I loved the interaction between Bella and Edward).  It is so absolutely touching.  It hurt my heart when Bella woke up and Edward was wrapped around her.

90 years!!  Sigh.



Author's Response:

Wow, I'm glad you liked this one!

I tried to make it obvious what Alice was seeing -- I'm glad you were able to tell!

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: LilMoCullen (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 08:19 AM · On: The Weekend

Aww. I cant wait for the next chpater :)

Reviewer: Cathy (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 08:14 AM · On: The Weekend

Edward is getting better ! He even let Alice and Emmett be in the same room with him without trying to jump at them! I'm really curious about what happend to him in his 90 years of being a vampire and I would like it if he would talk a bit more . First at his reaction to the laptop I thought that those people who did this to him had a laptop as well !

I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

Yours, Cathy



Author's Response:

Yes, he let them in, it's so nice!

He'll talk more in the future, no worries. He's just learning to talk after many many years, he needs some time :)

Thanks so much for reviewing!

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