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Reviewer: TessLouise (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 07:07 PM · On: The Party
good chapter!
Reviewer: gcgonc (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 06:40 PM · On: The Next Day
hello!!
i'm still new here, but i love u story so far, i'm trying to read it really quickly but since i'm really sick right now it's kind of hard (with a headache and all), but still i love it... and eventhough i'm reading it, i will make reviews every other chapter, to let u know... i have no comment so far, but to let u know how great and different i think it is...
hope u keep the good work, and if u finished with this story, very good luck on any other project!!
Gabs!!
Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 05:29 PM · On: The Party
Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: TessLouise (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 04:39 PM · On: The Bath
So beautiful . . . sigh.
Reviewer: nanny (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 10:44 AM · On: The Party
just had to come back and read it again
wonderful sorry
Reviewer: dnabgeek (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 09:31 AM · On: The Party
yay for Bella figuring it out... I loved Edward's response to finding out that Bella loved him :)
Reviewer: rohmareng (Anonymous) · Date: May 29, 2009 09:16 AM · On: The Party
I liked it! I know that Edward has a long road ahead of him, still, a part of my mind wished that she'd slice her finger and Edward would protect her from Jasper :-)
Reviewer: annienow (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 06:35 AM · On: The Dance
I'm confused about the Voluturi. I'm not sure why they are coming. I guess it will come out later but I can't figure out why they would get involved.
Reviewer: annienow (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 03:44 AM · On: The Sunset
Progress finally, I am so happy. I really am enjoying this story.
Reviewer: elislyn (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 01:23 AM · On: The Party
Mmmm, I must have more of this. It is so good. I am very interested in finding out what will happen with Edward and Bella next, and anxious about the Volturi.
Reviewer: henbane (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 01:06 AM · On: The Party
I ADORE this story! It's a huge reversal of roles, and an enthralling read. I'm looking forward to future chapters!
Reviewer: rocko (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 09:56 PM · On: The Party
I know it's not much, but I really love your story =)
The plot is great and fresh and I like a lot this vulnerable Edward.
Keep up the great work ;)
Oh, and the artwork was also great, you should have it posted in the story!
Reviewer: gcgonc (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 09:14 PM · On: The Hunt
hi!!
wow!!! great way to catch ur readers attention... like the characters and where the story is heading... i'll keep reviewing as i go along hehehe!!!
thanks in advance for ur story!!
Gabs!!
Reviewer: JingleBells (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 08:41 PM · On: The Party
Love. *Le sigh* I am scared though -- of both the Volturi coming and the group that had Edward (I'm not sure which frightens me the most?!?)...
Another great chapter :)
Reviewer: wildeyes (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 07:57 PM · On: The Party
More, more, please!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: annienow (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 05:24 PM · On: The Face
Loving it!
Reviewer: annienow (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 04:44 PM · On: The Hunt
I stumbled upon this story and figured I'd check it out with all the reviews. It has definately caught my attention. I'm glad so many chapters are done. I'll let you know as I get further in how I like it.
Reviewer: naty1121 (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 04:41 PM · On: The Party
GREAT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: twilighted007 (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 04:03 PM · On: The Party
Yay! Edward made progress! I haven't been able to read anything the past couple of days and I just wanted to tell you thay this was the first story I read. You should feel special:) You have a great gift and I truly enjoy reading & sometimes re-reading your story:)
Reviewer: msKuhlena (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 12:26 PM · On: The Party
ok, this is story if unbelievably amazing! I am so happy that i found it! ha ha ha I hope you up date soon!
Reviewer: runner28 (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 10:31 AM · On: The Party
so so good.
Reviewer: bumbelbee (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 09:55 AM · On: The Party
Well, I'm not so very surprised that the "badboys" are human... I already thought so since Edward told Bella that he never saw a vampire before meeting the Cullens. But anyway I really like this chapter, Edward's making great progress and developing more and more in the Edward we all love and adore.^^
You're doing a wonderful job and I want to compliment you, because his developement seems so realistic and you aren't rushing it.
Well, that's all I guess and update soon please. ;)
Author's Response: Lots of people thought werewolves! I figured I'd explicitly say it was humans x)
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Twilightlurrvver (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 09:18 AM · On: The Party
when are they gona KISSS coz that would be AWESOME!!!!!!
Reviewer: Nissa (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 08:00 AM · On: The Party
I read your story today and I love it. Judging by the number of reviews you have I'm not the only one. You are doing a wonderful job with your writing. It's funny to know that even if Edward had not been in the family Bella would have ended up befriending the Cullen's. I guess her relationship with Rose wouldn't have been any better though. I am glad that Edward is making such improvement though. The fact that he was able to come down stairs and sit through the party was a big deal. I'm sure Edward is worried about the Volturi coming, he has to deal with meeting new vamps and possibly them hurting Bella. I will be interested to read when that happens. Keep up the great work you are doing a wonderful job.
Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much for giving it a shot!
And yes -- it's interesting that, even without Edward, things turned out more or less the same. doesn't really agree with Chaos theory, but this *is* AU, so some of their history is different! :)
Thanks for the review hon!
Reviewer: Midnight Belle (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 07:19 AM · On: The Party
I loved the chapter. It's nice to see Edward slowly trust.
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