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Reviewer: twilove1 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 09:06 PM · On: The Dance

Uh oh, the Volturi are coming... that can't be good. I'm not so worried about the human mad scientists, but maybe I should be? I'm having trouble figuring out just how mentally mature Edward is, since he's been deprived of so much for so long. Is he like a child or are his thoughts more complex? I guess it would be a lot easier if I could read his mind :)

Reviewer: twilove1 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 08:37 PM · On: The River

I'm so surprised that it was humans who held him captive. I wonder how they restrained him? That does explain the chemicals to make his body reject blood, though. I'm so happy he's communicating now. I really enjoyed Carlisle's POV in this chapter and all of his wonderful memories of Bella. They really became her family in only a short time and I love that she helped them recapture their humanity.

Reviewer: twilove1 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 06:58 PM · On: The Weekend

So good!!! I guess I should be alarmed that Bella is so obsessed with Edward and that he is so dependent on her, but of course I'm not cause this is my Twilighted happy place and not my daughter we're talking about :) I'm really looking forward to seeing Edward interact more with the Cullens. I wonder what he remembers from the past 90 years...? I'll bet it will take you chapters upon chapters upon chapters (getting the hint?) to tell us about it all.

Reviewer: twilove1 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 06:30 PM · On: The Balcony

I was so completely surprised that the vampire was named Edward! (I'm just kidding. Really.) Each chapter I read becomes my favorite so far, and this one was no exception. I'm dying to know what happened to him (a cage? wow) and watch his relationship with Bella continue to develop. I'm worried about what is coming up next to start driving them apart, cause you know there's always something... Thank you!

Reviewer: twilove1 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 06:16 PM · On: The Bath

Yay!! I know I keep saying the same things all over again in each review and it probably sounds pretty lame, but I really love this story. Bella is so wonderful and compassionate and patient, the Cullens are perfectly in character, and I think I'm falling for the unnamed vampire too :) There's still so much to learn about and from him that I hope this story goes on a long, long (long) time. Thanks! 

Reviewer: twilove1 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 04:41 PM · On: The Sunset

Wow, they made such great progress! I love how you ended the chapter with him watching the sunset and Bella watching him. It is a little scary how connected they've become in such a short time (still, 'sup with Rosalie?), but it's not unexpected. I wonder how much he's been aware of things up until now, especially since we have a hint now about his power. Can't wait to hear about Bella's first experiences with the Cullens.

Reviewer: twilove1 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 04:26 PM · On: The Bedroom

Well, I'm happy that he's doing so much better now that's he's fed a little and also that he's out of the basement. That's also a nice touch to have him in Bella's guest room since her scent would be in there. Anyway, what's up with Rosalie? I wish I could know what our vampire is thinking too. (I just read over what I have written, and it seriously sounds like I am a freak... oh well). Still love the story and not getting a bit of work done today cause reading this is so much more fun.

Reviewer: twilove1 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 04:12 PM · On: The Antidote

Aaaaggghhh!! Cliffhanger, can't stop reading, no time to review....

Reviewer: Aimee (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 04:11 PM · On: The Reunion

i noticed you havent updated in a while. i hope you update soon :)

Reviewer: twilove1 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 03:59 PM · On: The Trial

This is so touching and I still love it everytime Bella refers to him as "my vampire." My eyes glaze over a little bit on the science, but it's probably just flashbacks to high school biology. Anyway, I adore this story. Thank you!

Reviewer: twilove1 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 06:28 PM · On: The Venom

This story is in such new territory for me, but it's done in a way that is so touching and truly makes sense. I'm really really enjoying this, but I have to go back to work now....

Reviewer: twilove1 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 06:14 PM · On: The Pillow

I'm so glad that Bella's taking it slow, and I'm dying to know what thoughts are going through his head. Can he understand her? Are the Cullens the best family ever, or what?

Reviewer: twilove1 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 06:05 PM · On: The Next Day

My heart just breaks for him. And you've written such a wonderful and compassionate Bella. I love this story :)

Reviewer: twilove1 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 06:33 AM · On: The Exam

Wow. I just feel so drained from reading this chapter and also sympathetic & sad for what could have lead to this (where's Jasper when I need him?) The only distracting thought that I keep having while I read is the fact that he's still naked and I just want him covered (I know, odd thing to say). I hate to stop reading for the night, but I really have to now. Looking forward to more tomorrow :)

Reviewer: twilove1 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 06:16 AM · On: The Face

I noticed how quickly Bella started to think of him as "My vampire." I wonder what's going on in his head...? This really is good!

Reviewer: twilove1 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 06:06 AM · On: The Basement

This is so totally different from anything I've read and it's very very good. It's hard for me to identify with Bella (strong, witty, compassionate Bella - I like her) since she has no sense of self preservation, but it must be because of the draw she feels towards him. Can't imagine what horrible things would put a vampire into this state. I really need to stop reading and go to bed, but I just can't :)

Reviewer: twilove1 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 05:56 AM · On: The Hunt

Wow, so different and so interesting! It was also really cool to read Alice & Carlisle's POV's cause I never get that look inside their heads. I'm really enjoying this and can't imagine what would lead the boy (Edward, I assume?) to such a desperate place. Well done!

Reviewer: JMCullen (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 03:43 PM · On: The Reunion

OMG. I have officially died and went to TVITB heaven. This was beyond amazing, my dear. This is by far my favorite story here!

Reviewer: JMCullen (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 03:11 PM · On: The Visit

GAWD, I jut LOVE this story so damn much!!!!!

By the way, I nominated TVITB for both the Indies and the Bellies. I'll be voting for this fic definitely.

Reviewer: stargrl678 (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 12:57 AM · On: The Reunion

very very cute!!! I am so glad that Edward is continuing to open up!

Reviewer: ajacob9 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 10:24 PM · On: The Bath

out of all the fan fictions I have read on this website.... and let me tell you, its a lot... I find this one absolutely the most outstanding/creative/imaginative of them all.  To finally get to see Edward in such a fragile state with Bella being the stronger of the two, is so refreshingly different.  PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN!

Reviewer: bella93 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 05:15 PM · On: The Reunion


it took me awhile to catch up

Reviewer: edwardlover98 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 02:53 PM · On: The Hunt

i really liked how u started! its very interesting!!

Reviewer: Adik_sayyo (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 03:16 AM · On: The Reunion







Reviewer: esmegmom (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 03:02 AM · On: The Reunion


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