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Reviewer: dutchvales (Anonymous) · Date: July 12, 2009 06:29 PM · On: The Reunion

aww, they kiss... finally!!

I love the description of him waiting outside for her...

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 06:17 PM · On: The Balcony

OH poor Edward...again riveted. Why would someone ever put him in a cage

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 05:55 PM · On: The Bath

I do believe you are a talented writer I am spellbound by your writing...I can't wait to see what you write next

Reviewer: Alaric123 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 05:43 PM · On: The Reunion

Please Please update soon! I just read your entire story in a single day and I'm completely hooked! Please hurry! I need more, like Bella needs Edward! 



Author's Response:

Ack, thank you SOO much for your reviews hon. I'm sort of spazzing by these reviews, it means so much to me to have you on board!

Reviewer: Alaric123 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 05:43 PM · On: The Reunion

Please Please update soon! I just read your entire story in a single day and I'm completely hooked! Please hurry! I need more, like Bella needs Edward! 

Reviewer: dutchvales (Anonymous) · Date: July 12, 2009 05:37 PM · On: The River

SOOOOOOO good! I'm completely addicted and dreading finishing the chapters...

Reviewer: CaptainKirk (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 05:37 PM · On: The Hunt

Hi! 

I just can't stop rereading this story. I like the details and I like trying to figure out what Edward must have been thinking in the begining...although to be honest I don't think he was thinking very clearly.

Anyhoo...just thought I would try and get an ETA out of you if you have the time. Keep up the great work I can't wait for more!!



Author's Response:

Hahaha, I always have time for you :P

You're always welcome to PM me if I somehow fail to respond to your "where the hale is the update" reviews! Sometimes I get bogged down :P

But know that I still love them :)

Tomorrow if this chapter goes well with my beta, Wednesday if not. I think. That's estimated, dependent on tonight ;)

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 05:18 PM · On: The Bath

I am thrilled he is getting better...ohhhh he asked her not to leave...that about breaks my heart as much as it does Bella

Reviewer: oceanwaters2006 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 03:58 PM · On: The Sunset

Ohhhhhh Rosalie! UGH! Still kinda wondering what is up with her!

But....the ending!!! *sobs* Beautiful!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!

You're writing is beautiful!! I love this story!

XOXOXOXOXOXOXO Jess

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 03:48 PM · On: The Antidote

Oh My  God!!! can't wait to see what happens next

Reviewer: missymarieb (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 03:35 PM · On: The Hunt

Just Found the story, I like so far!

Reviewer: oceanwaters2006 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 03:28 PM · On: The Bedroom

A curfew!! Damn it Charlie!! He's supposed to be the COOL parent! HAHAHA! Okay, but I see his point. Just sad that she has to spend even more time away from her vampire than what she already does with school and stuff.

SOOOOOOOO glad he was able to do the one feeding and is already feeling better and GAH! in a bedroom with a bed!

What the hell is up with Rosalie though?? ugh, I kinda want to hit her! I kid, I kid.

Love it as always!

XOXOXOXOXOXO Jess

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 03:20 PM · On: The Trial

This is awesome and so far your science is sound...

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 02:52 PM · On: The Venom

Awesome she finally got him clean...

Reviewer: oceanwaters2006 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 02:25 PM · On: The Antidote

Oh I really hope this antidote works and Holy Hell!!!! What is going on! GAH!

Love it!! I am so hooked on this story!! AHMAZING!!!!!!

XOXOXOXOXO Jess

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 02:11 PM · On: The Pillow

Such a heart felt story...I am really looking forward to reading more

Reviewer: oceanwaters2006 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 01:59 PM · On: The Trial

Oh Bella, I can see how hard it was for her to made him drink what they hoped to be an antidote when she knew it would be horribly scary for him.

I am still wondering who it the hell would so such a thing. Sick mind or vengance are the only two reasons I can think of.

Another exceptional chapter!

XOXOXOXOXOXO Jess

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 01:13 PM · On: The Face

I absolutly love this!!!!

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 12:47 PM · On: The Basement

Oh my God this is absolutly mind boggling! I love how you wrote this chapter...its beutiful

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 12:28 PM · On: The Hunt

I can't quit figure out why she thinks Emmett is the one that is a pile of ash?

Reviewer: oceanwaters2006 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 09:24 AM · On: The Venom

Very interesting thought on the synthetic inhibitors!! I bow to your genius on that!! I love it!!

And the sponge bath....too perfect for words!!!!

XOXOXOXOXO Jess

Reviewer: oceanwaters2006 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 09:06 AM · On: The Pillow

That was great, I can practically feel what Bella is going through as she tries to get him to trust her. Heartbreaking.

XOXOXOXOXOXO Jess

Reviewer: oceanwaters2006 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 08:52 AM · On: The Next Day

Crying, again. Ugh!! I just want to take him and hug him and do just what Bella is doing!! Truly, amazing writing!

I even love to pace it goes at too because earning his trust is going to be a long hard road and I love seeing it play out.

Amazing!

XOXOXOXOXOXO Jess

Reviewer: My Hubby is no Edward (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 08:36 AM · On: The Reunion

*squealing like a teenager* (and I'm 23) He kissed her, he wanted to kiss her, HE KISSED HER!!!!!!! *sighs* He said he need her, too. Awwwwwwe, I think I love him. I am so proud he's opening up to her.

Oh shit, I'm caught up now, what the hell am I suppose to do now?! Your story is beautiful, I'm completely enraptured in this fic. I will be eagerly awaiting your next update.



Author's Response:

Ahh! THHANK YOU! for reviewing each chapter! Yes, he kissed her! I'm rather proud of him, as well :) He's come so far :P

Thanks so much for reviewing bb, makes me smile so huge!

Reviewer: oceanwaters2006 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 08:21 AM · On: The Exam

Oh my, I am crying at the ending!! Letting Carlisle and Jasper near the vampire to "help" him just ended up destroying the small amount of trust he had put in Bella.

Heart breaking!! GUH!! Love this story!

XOXOXOXOXO Jess

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