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Reviewer: Ailisraevyn (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 07:12 PM · On: Epilogue in Review
One thing I've noticed re-reading through some chapters is that the first half of the entire story was better than the second half. Something feels like it got lost along the way, in Bella and Edwards characteristics. Does that make any sense? It's not meant to sound like a put down, more just personal opinion and helpful criticism. Again, great read.
Reviewer: Ailisraevyn (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 06:17 PM · On: Epilogue in Review
Thank you for an amazing story, some new music influence and inspiration, and some breathtaking love and lust filled poetry. I hold a new respect for blues now, and have so many new favorite songs. Every time you had them sing a song you mentioned specifically, i purchased the song and i added it to a playlist, and now have them all on repeat for the last 2 days reading this tale and many more days to come.
Lovely poetry, and amazing journey, with its own intriguing soundtrack.
My new fav FF!
Reviewer: edwrdcu77enlover (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 04:52 PM · On: Nocturnal Prelude
WOW!
But really, do horny 17 kids write that kind of stuff??? it feels so grown up to me... though I was pretty innocent at 17 haha
maybe that's why I feel to outdated to them (sigh)
anyways it was excellent to read... brilliant I must say =)
Reviewer: Ailisraevyn (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 04:21 PM · On: Hunting
Favorite Leftovers: Toss up between Cold Steak and A1 Sauce, and Sushi.
Reviewer: Lalaranya (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 07:34 AM · On: Epilogue in Review
aww!!! this is such an amazing story...:D ive beenreading it for way too long-thanksto th damned homework. but i absolutely love this! i just wish i had read it sooner-i hd added it to my favouirites months ago, but i dont look on my faves on here-just in my favourites on my computer. and i completely forgot about it...and that seriously SUCKS!!!! lov this...:)
Reviewer: Lalaranya (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 07:34 AM · On: Epilogue in Review
aww!!! this is such an amazing story...:D ive beenreading it for way too long-thanksto th damned homework. but i absolutely love this! i just wish i had read it sooner-i hd added it to my favouirites months ago, but i dont look on my faves on here-just in my favourites on my computer. and i completely forgot about it...and that seriously SUCKS!!!! lov this...:)
Reviewer: LadyChery1 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 06:03 AM · On: Epilogue in Review
Definitely YES for Tropic of Gemini
Reviewer: Ailisraevyn (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2009 11:52 PM · On: Matters
While doing dishes: Nat King Cole- Unforgettable
Reviewer: Ailisraevyn (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2009 11:33 PM · On: House Cullen
Favorite dirty song: The Cure- Lullaby, and of course Closer, by NIN.
Reviewer: Ailisraevyn (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2009 11:01 PM · On: Unconfessional
Angry Song: Nine Inch Nails: Wish
Reviewer: Ruka (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2009 06:26 PM · On: Ghost Stories
Music notes =]
Reviewer: nicole22 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 03:38 AM · On: Aisle C
it s october and in greece it s still hot.. out in t-shirts kinda hot...
Reviewer: wendywar (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 01:20 AM · On: Epilogue in Review
I'm sad, it's over lol. I loved this so much, it kept me up late at nights, lol. It feels like I could share her feelings, your a great writer and your diction is epic. =] I'll read your other stuff thanks for the stories <3.
Reviewer: Berasheth (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 03:47 PM · On: House Cullen
Your story has been my obsession all day. I blame my Sister for recommending it. Maybe tomorrow I'll be worth a shit at work. Thank you for writing exactly what I needed when I needed it. You fucking rock.
Reviewer: Chaos Pg (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2009 11:21 AM · On: Epilogue in Review
Love the story... expertly written... great poems too ;)
Reviewer: nicole22 (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2009 03:07 AM · On: Ghost Stories
a picture of a finished toilet paper with the words "what would macgyver do?"
Reviewer: nicole22 (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 07:58 AM · On: Melodic
''Esme would tell me to approach the situation with gentle humor and perhaps offer a joint''
''Alice would mail order Bella a care-package of phallic buzzy toys and never speak to me again.''
funny as hell
Reviewer: nicole22 (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 04:37 AM · On: Dazed and Invited
Did someone put a sign on my back that says ‘I do anal’?”
still laughing!
Reviewer: nicole22 (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 03:55 AM · On: Phenomena
''realizing too late that I sounded like a gay Starbucks barista'' priceless!!!!!!
Reviewer: phoe_girl (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 01:08 AM · On: First Listen
Your poems are beautiful, but I just had to review because I thought the biology scene was genius. You incorporated the book into an AU-Human fic perfectly, twisting it on its head. Just thought you should know that it was very clever :)
Reviewer: britishangelsoul (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2009 02:17 PM · On: First Listen
I'm glad I started reading this, your writing is exquisite and certain clauses hint at classy influences. I can tell I'm going to enjoy further exploration.
Reviewer: justonekiss (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2009 11:43 AM · On: Port Obvious
I'm totally obsessed with this story. I can't get enough...thank god it completed. Sooo awesome! glad i stumbled upon this.
Reviewer: Rowzy (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 04:05 PM · On: Opening Lines
The most fabulous thing anyone has ever said about my eyes is that they are the brightest blue eyes they have ever seen. (becaues I have blue eyes and brown hair they are bright.)
Anyways... love the fic so far
Reviewer: Mace (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 07:24 PM · On: Epilogue in Review
Oh why oh why oh why did I wait so long to listen to EVERYONE in this ficdom before I finally read this story?
God that was good, my obsession and occupation for three days straight, I feel like I lived this story.
My favorite parts were your poetry. I wish I could read a bit of it each day...
Reviewer: elliebelle (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 05:48 PM · On: Nocturnal Prelude
I love this entire story! The poetry and interaction between O_G and D66 is lovely. My heart hurt several times for them but it ended well. You are an incredibly gifted writer. I do hope you do the sequel Tropic of Gemini. This story had me addicted from the very beginning and so sad when it was over. You seem like a very interesting person - loved the questions for the readers at the end of each chapter. Perfect!
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