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Reviewer: loulouau (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 04:53 PM · On: Aisle C
Still lovin it.........27C Australia Summertime
Reviewer: loulouau (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 09:59 AM · On: Unconfessional
Sorry I have been forgetting to review too rapt up in the story Great read loving it.
Reviewer: kaye dizzle (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 09:16 AM · On: Type set
The chemistry between them is soo thick. I'm just ready for them to move forward and start a relationship. But Edward is treating her gently, which is a good thing.
Reviewer: c_kristy (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 06:51 PM · On: Nocturnal Prelude
Great first chapter...excited to read on!! I love FanFic with some poetry thrown in :)
Reviewer: kaye dizzle (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 04:52 PM · On: Visuals
I am loving this story and with every chapter it gets better and better. I also like the fact that Edward and Alice call each other twin, and they both know where they stand at with each other.
I wonder how long its going to take Edward and Bella to realize that they msg each other. Hopefully he will lighten up around Bella and be himself, and also keep it cordial towards her for the sake of his sister. Alice and Bella gets along great, and besides Angela, alice is the only friend she has.
Reviewer: kaye dizzle (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 02:45 PM · On: Nocturnal Prelude
New reader here. After reading the first chapter I'm liking it so far. Both Bella and Edward are longing for someone, each other prephaps. I have a feeling that they both have internal issuse within themselves. Still have a lot to read.
Reviewer: Rayday (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 05:08 PM · On: Epilogue in Review
I absolutely loved this story. I will definitely be reading this more than once.
Reviewer: Jessie Chase (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 10:36 AM · On: Epilogue in Review
Thank you. For writing this amazing story that kept me up until my internet gave up and I spend 20 minutes trying to revive it so I could finish. I didn't, so I practically ran home to finish the last few chapters...
Thank you for creating a world so believable I wanted to jump right in and be friends with Alice, hang out at gigs, learn to sing... everything.
And thank you for giving me the inspiration to write my words again.
Reviewer: wordplay (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 02:06 AM · On: Party Favors
I was a playable scrabble board. It's a great way to make new friends.
I almost feel bad for Tanya. Almost.
smb.
xo
Reviewer: wordplay (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 10:20 PM · On: Visuals
Lots of milk and a dash of vanilla.
smb.
xo
Reviewer: wordplay (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 09:46 PM · On: First Listen
Her voice cut my heart to ribbons, then pasted it back together with honey.
Beautiful.
smb.
xo
Reviewer: wordplay (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 09:24 PM · On: Nocturnal Prelude
Two words for you: Sucked in.
The passion in this first chapter gives me goosebumps.
smb.
xo
Reviewer: wishberry (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 08:14 PM · On: Short Ended Stick
oww, this chapter was sooo difficult! i'm so sad right now... must keep reading. love it!
Reviewer: Mallers (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 07:39 PM · On: Epilogue in Review
wow. just wow. i just finished this and...speachless. i don't have words like Bella or Edward for a review so sorry if this dissapoints, but this story was filled with passion and moved me more than i can tell you.
i'll be looking for more writing from you!
Reviewer: grlanachronsm (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 03:19 PM · On: Epilogue in Review
Beautiful. Damn beautiful and so haunting. This was pure perfectionl it was honey and sex and blues and flying and burning and... Well, damn I'd need forever to really express everything this was.
Your Edward pissed me off and made me swoon. Your Bella had me quaking and giggling. I love how intense their passion was, how incredibly REAL every word felt. Alice was just genius and I loved your Rosalie. I actually liked Lauren at the end. I cried and shook and I had to stop reading at one point so I could collect myself. Especially when Edward goes over all the bruises the evil bitches gave Bella. It was horrible, yet you gave Bella strength. And there, at the end, you let Edward say the words I've been dying to hear him say. Gosh, if this was any better, it'd be sinful and illegal.
I'm so looking forward to reading more of your work and I hope that, one day, you'll give me something else to rave about!
Reviewer: modernmyth (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2009 09:55 AM · On: Epilogue in Review
i loved it, god i'm so sad this is over. what a jouney, amazing. let me tell you i loved the way you described voices, sounds. the range of adjectives you used left me shivering. i swear all i wanted was to be a fly on the wall and listen to them playing songs in the basement. I'm totally obsessed with bellas voice, ridiculous i know, cause i've never heard it, but the way you discribed everything made it palpable for me, i swear i could really hear them!!! amazing! thanks a lot! there are not enough adjectives in my mind right now, to tell you how happy you made me!!!
Reviewer: modernmyth (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2009 03:04 AM · On: Seeking
i'm yours by jason mraz
or black velvet :)
Reviewer: vampire-25-princess (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 02:00 PM · On: Epilogue in Review
Awww this was sooo beautiful! Hey I'M a Gemini, can I have my own Debussy_88 :). Lovely story and I'm so glad I happened upon it!
Reviewer: modernmyth (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 07:40 AM · On: Party Favors
we went as cullens.... and as gilmore girls!
Reviewer: Thaitetwi (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 08:03 PM · On: Epilogue in Review
Great Story and Great writing! The story line was very believable and that made it even better to me. Hope to read more from you soon!
Reviewer: modernmyth (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 08:26 AM · On: Imps
if i could be a guy robert p. as he has such an amazing voice, i would try to find the smallest pub in soho and sing, that would be great.
if it was a dead person it would be johnny cash, jon bon jovi would be great too, i wonder what's going on in a great musicians head like his
female: actually i cant come up with one.... hm....
Reviewer: modernmyth (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 07:49 AM · On: The Goods
kill hendrix (because who knows what disease that guy had :P), fuck page and marry Jack
Reviewer: modernmyth (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 06:56 AM · On: Patience
gras hoppers, my heart starts to pound so hard, i'm scared it burst through my chest! suffer from a serious disease like aids or cancer would be the most threatening thing to happen
Reviewer: feross (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 05:57 AM · On: Opening Lines
God, I LOVE the way you write!
Reviewer: modernmyth (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 04:05 AM · On: Aisle C
cold, there are some clouds but still some blue sky!!
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