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Reviews For Tropic of Virgo
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 02:34 PM · On: Visuals

OOOH!! LOVED it!! The chemistry and the sexual tension between Edward and Bella is just yummy!!! if they only knew that they were writing to eachother!! This story is so good! I am totally hooked!

Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 02:30 PM · On: Phenomena

There are no words for how incredible that chapter was! LOVED it!!OMG!! Edward saving Bella!Them working out their sexual frustration on their own!! GAH!Nothing is better than a naked edward jacking off in the shower! Emmett was cracking me up on how he teased edward!!! Cannot wait form ore!!

Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 02:26 PM · On: Opening Lines

OMG!! Loved that Bella called Alice to help her! that shirrt she wore was priceless!!Love the interaction between Bella andEdward!!

Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 02:25 PM · On: First Listen

OOOH!! Bella is knowcking edward on his ass!! he doesn't know what to make of her!! Love that she sang in the auditorium and he and alice heard her!! GAH!! Cannot wait for more!

Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 02:24 PM · On: Nocturnal Prelude

Ok! Just wanted to let you know that I printed out the first 8 chapters of this to read at the gym and i am hooked!! This is very intriguing and I look forward to more!

Reviewer: emma austin (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 02:07 PM · On: Bloody Hale

I love rock and roll - Joan Jett. Loving this story. 

Reviewer: smile4thepaparazzi (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 02:06 PM · On: Bloody Hale

ahh!!! bella is such a tease! haha, i loved it! this chappie was amazing, i love the tension between them, its so goooood! hehe, i can't wait to see what happens next, please update soon! thanks :D

Reviewer: mojo (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 01:27 PM · On: Bloody Hale

love this story and your writting is amazing... cant wait for more... anticipation is high

Reviewer: Nox (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 11:07 AM · On: Bloody Hale

haha! NICE! I LOVE the ending. Actually, scratch that, i love the entire thing, this story is awesomness storified 

Reviewer: red delicious (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 10:06 AM · On: Bloody Hale

brilliant chapter! 

and cheap trick wins everytime on a jukebox.

Reviewer: dank (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 08:47 AM · On: Bloody Hale

Maggie M'Gill, or The Spy.. we're all spies in the house of love.

great chapter.

Reviewer: cullengirlx (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 08:33 AM · On: Bloody Hale

Noooo! You can't leave it there! I think the suspense you leave me in at the end of each chapter is slowly killing me!

I love love love this story.

Please update soon! I'm dying to see what happens! Please tell me they find each other soon!

Beautifully written.

Reviewer: alternate universe (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 07:58 AM · On: Bloody Hale

got to have faith by george michaels hehehehe

Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 04:42 AM · On: Bloody Hale

That was the best ending to a chapter, I was laughing while picturing Edwards face, with his mouth hanging open.

Reviewer: Ms Monkey_Man (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 04:08 AM · On: Bloody Hale

your words are quite interesting to read. very captivating. I must say that i was pulled in deeply to them. keep them flowing.............


 I shamefully disclose that my "barfly tune" has to be Prince's, Let's Go Crazy. always a party starter. followed by a little metallica or G&R.

Reviewer: ylimee (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 03:52 AM · On: Bloody Hale

ahhhhhh you cant end it there!!!!!

Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 03:35 AM · On: Bloody Hale

oh oh oh!  I want the next chapter now!!!  can't wait, can't wait!

Reviewer: Aalfons (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 02:30 AM · On: Bloody Hale

omg.. that was not a nice ending :p Great chapter though as always. :)

Reviewer: infektion (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 02:11 AM · On: Bloody Hale

Lovely chapter, as usual. Looking forward to seeing Bella 'up the stakes'. ;)

Reviewer: ksm (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 01:30 AM · On: Bloody Hale

Man, their on-line flirting is driving me crazy!  I want him to find out about it so that he falls even more for her and knows he won't just use her and will want to keep her!  I liked how she is a pro at darts and really threw them all for a loop!  HA!  I don't know who I would rather see win...Bella so she gets her kiss (as well as Emmett!) or Edward so that she has to sing a song!  But maybe if Edward lost and he has to sing he can either a) sing a song to Bella which would be terribly romantic or b) pick a duet so that Bella has to sing with him!

E/N answer:  Well, I'm a 41 year old mother of 3 and it's been a while since I picked music off a juke-box in a bar; but, when I did, I love Def Leppard and Bon Jovi!

Kathy M.

Reviewer: m81170 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 01:19 AM · On: Bloody Hale

Awesome way to show up Edward- I LOVE IT!

Great job!

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 12:20 AM · On: Bloody Hale

Great chapter. I loved the last bit and the messages they've been posting.  

Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

Reviewer: itanaru18 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 11:34 PM · On: Bloody Hale

I am completely addicted to this story.  I don't I can express in words how great this story is.

Reviewer: The_Reader (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 10:06 PM · On: Bloody Hale

Anything by Creedence Clearwater Revival!

Same goes for the Beatles.

..and Elvis Presley.

Maybe the Beach Boys.

“Because I know you, and you don’t smile like that for boys. At least, I hope you don’t.” -adored this line!

Their email exchanges are so refreshing to read!  Well done :D

Reviewer: cdg921 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 09:51 PM · On: Bloody Hale

omg...need more. Intense story. Let's get to it already! shit!

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