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Reviewer: Noelani (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 02:23 AM · On: Dazed and Invited
i don't drink but if he made me a drink i would drink something nasty for all i care :)
Reviewer: Naelady (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 01:24 AM · On: Night Marish
Um... oh my... *fans herself* Niiiiiiice. Verra verra nice. Although poor Edward seems to be, well... just a bit confused now. I'd like to know where the hell Lauren came from, though. She certainly wasn't there when Bella left. Now I want to know what Bella was thinking as she left the room. And what Edward will do next. It's fairly obvious that nothing happened after Bella left, but Lauren still shouldn't be there.
I liked the teaser about her liking lemony drinks. He really should have picked up on that one a little better. But then, I suppose he is still a guy, and they're oblivious like that sometimes.
Excellent, wonderful chapter as always. I especially liked the feel the run-on sentences gave the sex scene. It was like she was focusing on everything individually, and it was all blurring together at the same time.
I seem to be completely incapable of sleeping after 7am when I'm hungover. My favorite cure is three ibuprofin and stumbing back into bed for a couple hours with my cats curled up under the covers with me.
Reviewer: danarst (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 12:29 AM · On: Night Marish
WTF indeed :) Excellent writing, as usual, your style as well as the storyline. Can't wait for what's next. As for hangovers, drank like a skank once, projectile vomitted all over the room I shared w/ others, got over my hangover washing my own filth, haven't had another one since. Humiliation was my cure, I suppose.
Reviewer: thedoormouse (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 12:07 AM · On: Nocturnal Prelude
...I'll kill him.
Best hangover cure? McDonald's, extended naptime and Janis Joplin.
Reviewer: Melsie (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 11:57 PM · On: Night Marish
Best hangover cure?....that dang chappie! it sobered my ass right up! lol
I don't have a hangover cure, I am one of 'those' bitches who just doesn't get hangovers! Be envious people! =)
Melsie!
Reviewer: stripyhouse (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 11:52 PM · On: Night Marish
*FLAILS WILDLY (shouting loud obsenities at Lauren)* it's amazing, please continue and if you update more often I will love you forever! When, if ever, do they find out about each other online? Thank you for a great story. Becky
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 11:32 PM · On: Night Marish
What happened? Don't tell me he slept with Lauren! Grr...
Bella should just tell Edward how she feels. Take a risk. And what happened when she found Edward? Yeah that moment for her was ruined. I mean, she gave her virginity to Edward only to find him with Lauren the next morning. I mean, come on? There is no way he thought that Lauren was Bella. No way. I'd even bet that he didn't even remember sleeping with Bella.
She'll write about it and then he'll read it and tell her not to waste her time on a guy who can't remember. She'll take his advice and be heartbroken. Either that, or he will remember sleeping with her and won't talk to her from some stupid reason like 'why didn't you stay with me Bella?'
Please update soon? I can't wait to read more! You have me addicted to this story and I am so eager to read the next chapter, because I want to find out on whether he really did sleep with Lauren, remembered sleeping with Bella and if either of them will finally admit their feelings for one another, cause that has to come out. Soon.
Please, please update soon? Your story is awesome!
Reviewer: JohannaL (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 11:09 PM · On: Night Marish
What the Fuck! This can't be happening! I SO hate Lauren Mallory! I feel so sorry for Bella, something really beautiful, memorable, a moment of lifetime turned to real harsh nightmare.
And he didn't use condom?????
Reviewer: AcidAngel (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 11:07 PM · On: Night Marish
Oh man, you just know, reading what happens between them that it's not going to last any length of time before he screws it up.
I adore this story and cannot wait for more.
And I totally don't have a good answer to the hangover cure. Ibuprofen and toast with peanut butter before going to sleep seems to keep me from getting them. Also, not getting trashed in the first place helps.
Reviewer: samasa (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 11:03 PM · On: Night Marish
wha......?
Reviewer: karentwilighted (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 10:58 PM · On: Night Marish
Oh and I am seriously hoping Ordinary_Girl shares her losing of her virginity to an asswipe story with Debussy_88. That would be a fucking fantastic conversation. And then he'd have to kick his own ass.
Reviewer: karentwilighted (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 10:54 PM · On: Night Marish
So he's drunk and she's gotten a text so he decides it's a good idea to go off with Lauren? How drunk is he? Every time I think I like him he's a jackass again. And then the sex? Yikes - losing her virginity in a drunken 10 minute fuck? It's one thing if you are both virgins but he should have been able to make it good. And then to find Lauren in his bed? Fuck. I'm guessing she crawled in while he was passed out - at best the slept in the same bed, at worst he fucked her while drunk (maybe thinking she was Bella - of course he might have thought he was fucking Lauren instead of Bella the first time . . . ewww) - either way I'm guessing this isn't the morning after Bella pictured. It's too bad she didn't stay with him overnight. I can't imagine how this is going to be fixed. I also can't imagine Alice not kicking his ass.
Reviewer: m81170 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 10:52 PM · On: Night Marish
OH MY FREAKING GOD!!!!! How could you do that to poor Bella???
Fix this!!!
Reviewer: frol (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 10:40 PM · On: Night Marish
OUCH! what an ending to this chapter! I will anxiously waiting to see what happens next
Reviewer: ForTheLoveOfTwilight (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 05:35 PM · On: Interrogation Exposition
Amazing simply amazing! You have to keep updating. I'm so intrueged!!!! You have talent and I love it!
Reviewer: oh that little shinny volvo (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 03:04 PM · On: Ghost Stories
Charlie the Unicorn is on my favorite t-shirt... I love the story!!!!!
Reviewer: sensuallyinlove (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 06:13 AM · On: Interrogation Exposition
Oh NO!!! You have to keep writing, I'm totally hooked on your story. I love this story line, its amazing! And your writing is fantastic! I love music and you have such a way with lyrics. :)
Reviewer: fonsy (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 07:58 PM · On: Interrogation Exposition
i loved that she sang in front of a crowd! And they kissed! i like progress, though edward is acting weird again...as my favorite song goes, i have lots of them, but have to agree with hotel california. I love th way you write, love your poems too! can't wait for more!
Reviewer: Calling_Siren (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 12:16 AM · On: Interrogation Exposition
Is Edward starting to guess that Bella is Ordinary Girl? I'm so looking forward to next chapter! ;)
Reviewer: Icydgirl (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 10:10 PM · On: Interrogation Exposition
I don't listen to the radio anymore but when I was teenager Closer by NIN was played way too much and I just about lived and breathed NIN, but after hearing it once an hour for a couple of weeks it became annoying
Reviewer: Melsie (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 06:57 PM · On: Interrogation Exposition
Alive - Pearl Jam and Sympathy for the Devil - The Rolling Stones (the latter is on every damn cop movie soundtrack lol)
I'm glad that there doesn't seem to be any "romantical" feelings with Jake, he just seems like her childhood buddy - I sincerely hope it stays that way =)
Melsie!
Reviewer: BohemianLove13 (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 06:19 PM · On: Interrogation Exposition
My Immortal by Evasnescence
Reviewer: stargrl678 (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 04:34 PM · On: Interrogation Exposition
Thanks for the new chapter!! I loved it!! and one of my favorite songs before it was played to death is 'i'm yours' by Jason Mraz
Reviewer: Emily Belle (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 01:33 PM · On: Interrogation Exposition
Cornflake Girl
Reviewer: mojo (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 01:12 PM · On: Interrogation Exposition
i love your writting and this story is great... definately my favorite right now...
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