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Reviewer: emma austin (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 12:24 PM · On: Mindless
Bella is his equal. Jasper is one clever dude. Can't wait to see where this is going. Please write soon.
Reviewer: xchic (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 12:17 PM · On: Mindless
a cup noodles. i love fiercy bella. i hope youll write a comlete lemon next chapç. update soon please
Reviewer: kerrybell (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 12:12 PM · On: Mindless
I had chips....food served wasn't that great.
I like her ribbons, and I can't wait for her to show him her poetry.
Reviewer: MichelleLeah (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 11:20 AM · On: Mindless
hmma bagel and refreshing water. Keep the words comming.
Reviewer: jessnab (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 10:19 AM · On: Mindless
I have been reading this story since chapter five posted and it is great. I resisted reading it at first due to the description but ... you have awesome character development and your writing is really beautiful. I love the poetry , song choices and I love updates. I know you all do the stories for free and that is what makes your well thought out fanfic so special . Keep up the good work.
Reviewer: dolphin62598 (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 10:07 AM · On: Mindless
A disgusting cheeseburger because I spent 2 hours at the cell phone store arguing with them about overages I shouldn't have been charged! I would have liked a nice salad, but....meh...food is food!!
Great chapter!! I LOVED LOVED LOVED the ending!! I'm so glad they have things somewhat straightened out!! I can't wait to see what happens when they find out that they are writing each other on a blog!!
Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 10:03 AM · On: Mindless
oh...I LOVED this chapter!!!
best line : “Don’t question my manhood, bitch, not in those shoes.”
loved it, loved it. Loved it!! These characters are seriously flawed, but so awesome!
Reviewer: StephanieCullen (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 10:03 AM · On: Mindless
I cannot get enough of this story! I love your version of Edward and Bella! Please update soon!
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 09:30 AM · On: Mindless
OMFG!! YOU ARE BRILLIANT AND THAT CHAPTER WAS BEYOND AMAZING!!! LOVE HOW BELLA HANDLED THOSE GIRLS THAT FUCKED WITH HER AT SCHOOL! I LOVED READING EVERY WORD OF THIS!!!
Reviewer: Icydgirl (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 08:51 AM · On: Mindless
a banana and a bottle of water...not much as you can tell...still working on it...lol
Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 08:46 AM · On: Mindless
I had yogurt for lunch today, but I'll take Edward anytime! Great chapter, loved the strong defend herself Bella.
Reviewer: asrial (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 08:33 AM · On: Mindless
nice, i love an ass kicking bella!
lunch, crap, i haven't had lunch yet. been catching up on my reading, i will forego food for fanfic.
Reviewer: scottslass (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 08:19 AM · On: Mindless
Still remains one of my favorite stories. ;-) keep it coming...
Reviewer: scottslass (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 08:19 AM · On: Mindless
Still remains one of my favorite stories. ;-) keep it coming...
Reviewer: meimei42 (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 08:02 AM · On: Mindless
What a perfect, fantastic ending to this chapter. Poor Bella getting beat up, I'm glad she's standing up for herself, but still had Edward to back her up. Awesome update!
Reviewer: edward-bella70 (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 07:51 AM · On: Mindless
Yeah Edward!!!!!! Bella wasn't too bad herself!
Reviewer: irisandlights (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 07:31 AM · On: First Listen
I adore this. I truly truly do, and it's only the second chapter. Their correspondence is beautiful and it makes me smile knowing that they have no clue who each other is, and yet you can tell they're already connecting on a level that they cannot achieve with just anyone. I'm sleepy and not really making sense anymore but my eyes are shot open, and I don't think my brain's gonna let me sleep till I read at least a few more chapters tonight.
Reviewer: Emily Belle (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 07:28 AM · On: Mindless
i forgot to eat lunch.
Thank you for this story.
Reviewer: irisandlights (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 07:27 AM · On: Nocturnal Prelude
This has potential alright! Potential to be one of the best pieces of fanfiction I've read in a long looong while in the fandom! It's a lovely lovely beginning and you can take this so far. And from what I've heard, you take those lengths and make the fandom make one big communal squeeee. I am so excited to read the rest of this story!
Reviewer: AcidAngel (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 07:18 AM · On: Mindless
Ungh. I love love love love love this story (seriously, I can't type love enough times). The interaction between them all is so unique, so interesting. Honestly, this would make fantastic original fic that I would buy in a heartbeat. Your characters are so clear and vivid, strong and interesting, I can't help but want desperately to befriend them. <3
As for lunch, I haven't eaten it yet today, but when I do, I'm fairly sure it will be animal crackers. I get a few odd looks, but it's often all I can stomach. Good thing they're so delicious.
Reviewer: mishel635 (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 07:18 AM · On: Mindless
For lunch- leftover pizza and wings.
Every chapter that I read of this story, I think to myself "This story is so many kinds of awesome, it just can't get any better!!!"...... and then it does!
Seriously, I wish I could convey in words how much I am absolutely in love with this story, but since I lack your creative talent, I feel my words definitely don't do it justice. I love how even though Bella was strong enough to stand up for herself today, Edward still saved her in the end. SO happy that he stood up for her, and did what he did. The part where he was naming the girls for her so they weren't just nameless faces in the crowd was perfect. At first, I winced a little when he did that. But then I realized what he was doing (putting names to the faces for Bella). And when he cried, my heart actually ached for him. You make these characters come to life so perfectly, I feel like I know them. I was LMAO over Jasper's choice of clothing, and then when Edward said, "Don't question my manhood bitch, not in those shoes" I literally lost it.
You had me laughing, and almost crying, and awwwwing, and squeeing over this chapter! Thank you again, so much, for writing this story! And honestly, if you aren't writing professionally yet, I really hope you start soon. I know from friends who have tried themselves that it is easier said than done, but I would definitely pay money for a story written by you. Your words move me like nothing else I have ever read- in fanfiction and elsewhere.
Reviewer: PCullen1974 (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 06:48 AM · On: Mindless
I absolutely loved this! Bella got some balls and Edward showed that he can let her fend for herself a little bit. I love the end part in the cafeteria! that was fantastic! Can't wait to see what happens next! I love shy but determined Bella!
Reviewer: spuntinsel (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 06:24 AM · On: Mindless
love it!
Reviewer: jess25 (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 06:20 AM · On: Mindless
NICE
Reviewer: alternate universe (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 05:51 AM · On: Mindless
peanut butter and banana sandwich!
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