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Reviewer: misyx (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 12:43 PM · On: Games
I love this Bella and Edward; actually dreamt about them last night. Terrific characterization, they seem so real, and still retain recognizable bits from the original templates- like Edward's control issues and Bella's lack of confidence. But you've remixed them in a way that is so much more satisfying. Sincere thanks for this story.
Reviewer: moonlipse (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 10:47 AM · On: Games
Vamoose! haha Or vertigo.
Beautiful writing. Elegant, eloquent, and candy for my eyes. Love it all!
Reviewer: Belledward (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 09:51 AM · On: Games
Vampire Vucking. Haha.
The bathroom was vucking hot. Hot. HOT! I really like how at they end, a simple 'please' speaks the volume of a thousand words. I want them to find out about each other!
Reviewer: xchic (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 08:54 AM · On: Games
Vibrator. HAHA, kidding. idk, i dont have fav words.
I looove it. update soon, please
Reviewer: Elaine (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 06:40 AM · On: Games
Variable is one of them. Please don't take long too update, I'm completely hooked! for an old married lady who has kids older than the one's your writing about, i should probably be ashamed of admitting that! Keep up the good work.
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 05:41 AM · On: Games
So, the games are on! Bella and Edward both are fighting to control their emotions and break down the other one. Hmmm, so does Bella just give in for carnal desires, or is she going to admit the depth of her feelings for him? I loved this chapter- it seems that they are going to head for emotional exhaustion. Veracity.
Reviewer: ninachr (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 04:49 AM · On: Games
Favorite V word??Not really sure...Please update again soon, can't wait. ;D
Reviewer: Maliciouspixie5 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 03:26 AM · On: Complicated
I had to stop at this point yesterday and this story haunted me all night. It is excellent, very thought out and well written. I just wish I could bang their heads toghether! LOL
Reviewer: Jynxx (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 11:40 PM · On: Games
You have a lovely story here. I really like your Bella and can't wait till they figure out that they are each other's IM Pal
Reviewer: obsessed668 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 10:06 PM · On: Games
ammaazzinngg loved it cant wait for more Oxo
Reviewer: BellaWillow (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 08:53 PM · On: Games
Verona. It rolls off the tongue with no vulgar sounds or connotations.
Vodka comes in a close second though...
Reviewer: EB Idealist 81 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 08:12 PM · On: Games
vernaular.... i am not even sure that is spelled right but i just love the way it sounds.
Reviewer: goldeneyedgirl (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 07:41 PM · On: Games
Vanquish:
I wish I could, I wish I had one, and I wish I would sometimes...
Reviewer: Linds14 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 07:11 PM · On: Games
Nobody said vagina for a v word in their little game? Maybe I just have a dirty mind, but that was the first word that came to mind haha ( I wouldn't say it's my favorite v word though..I dont think I have one..maybe vortex because it sounds cool)
Hmmm..I'm getting more confused and annoyed as to why they are ignoring each other at school? I can understand that yeah it might cause some drama...but they seem to be more the type of people who don't give a shit about what others think...so they should just be out in the open.
And when will they discover they are each others little internet friends? I hope soon! I'm getting antsy for that to happen! :)
Great chapter!
Reviewer: mona123 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 06:56 PM · On: Games
Loved it! Amazing. More more more! dont stop!
and my favoriate V word would have to be violet.
Reviewer: Pkullen (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 06:19 PM · On: Games
Valiant.
Some of my favorite parts are when you write about them making music together - it is almost like you are there in the room with them. Also still love the poetry of the texting and am dying for them to make the connection to real life. I so look forward to your updates! Thanks for writing this story!
Reviewer: twilightgirl36 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 06:08 PM · On: Type set
When my husband was little his parents taught him to call his penis "his dandy". That just sounds the cutest. I tease him all the time.
Reviewer: AbsurdEnthusiac (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 05:58 PM · On: Games
Mmmmmmm!!!! Beautiful chapter. Valentine - I sing "My Funny Valentine" to my husband.
Reviewer: KayBressi (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 04:37 PM · On: Games
hm. how about Vestibule?
Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 04:32 PM · On: Games
Wow! Sounds like a hot afternoon. Sounds like the weekend could get even more so. ;)
Reviewer: LovelyinLavender (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 04:27 PM · On: Games
So let me get this straight...there's tension between Edward and Bella because they feel so strongly about each other? And since they've never liked anyone that much, they're afraid of these new, intense feelings? At least, this is what I'm getting out of it.
I really liked this chapter. It's always interesting to see what happens when the group gets together and makes music. The bit with the chocolate kisses cracked me up! And as for my favorite V word...I think in light of Twilight...it's Vampire :-D
Reviewer: Lola84 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 04:12 PM · On: Games
Visceral. Or verbose.
Reviewer: Stephy B (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 04:09 PM · On: Games
Volupscious and/or Vendetta :)
Thank you for updating! It was fabulous :)
Reviewer: VampireInTraining (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 03:53 PM · On: Games
Vampire or Vituperation it means rejection or abuse. Yeah! good chapter
Reviewer: PasQ (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 03:27 PM · On: Games
They're soo made for eachother, so stubborn, so insecure of their feelings and themselves. They burn so brightly. I wonder when they're going to come clean with their feelings...
And when we're going to know who put those pills in the alcohol?? James?? what's going to happen with him and the contest??
My favourite V word would be...vulnerability, close to vexation (I just like how it sounds)
Awesome update!! Thanx!!
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